Hotel View - The newer version?

[Pyros!]

I litterally just 'finished' making this. I still have some work to be done, such as work on the background.

Sorry for the text over it. I posted it on another forum, known for expert rippers =]

http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/141/habboxpreview6op.png

[Bono]

that looks whack. take the lettering off though.

[Lemonwonder]

Very nice! Rep

[Art]

Its a bit random...

[Natta-28]

Very random but very well done. The red doesn't suit the habbo theme but yeah very good.

[burnsey]

very good
rewind by ur shabby writing all ova it !

[Art]

Whats the water there for?

[aspeas]

Wow that's pretty good
One thing,why are two people sat on the building?

[Pyros!]

Thanks for comments etc.. I'll upload an image with fewer writing on it, I liked the copy and paste on this one.

This aleration was made from scratch and was made for a certain website's mainpage.

I did not want it to follow the 'Habbo Theme'. I wanted it to symbolise that 'Habbowave' has it's own 'style/theme'.

The water is a leak? I dunno, I just thought it made it more attractive to look at with the water there.

The two poeple sitting on it are supposed to be statues.

Thanks for comments. I would however, like you to tell me, IF you can, on how I can improve it.

EDIT: I found out you can't edit the first post in your threads. A bit silly if you ask me, but even so, Find it below

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2156/habboxpreview3rd.png

[Tristan]

No - you can't edit any post after 15 minutes. So no it isn't silly. :)

I would make the statues grey.
It's alright.

[burnsey]

Thanks for comments etc.. I'll upload an image with fewer writing on it, I liked the copy and paste on this one.

This aleration was made from scratch and was made for a certain website's mainpage.

I did not want it to follow the 'Habbo Theme'. I wanted it to symbolise that 'Habbowave' has it's own 'style/theme'.

The water is a leak? I dunno, I just thought it made it more attractive to look at with the water there.

The two poeple sitting on it are supposed to be statues.

Thanks for comments. I would however, like you to tell me, IF you can, on how I can improve it.

EDIT: I found out you can't edit the first post in your threads. A bit silly if you ask me, but even so, Find it below

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2156/habboxpreview3rd.png

urm y have u got that half naked guy on there ?
forgot his name :s because im not gay and dnt wont to know it
:p

[paradox]

I like it, but I don't like the 'Click on the hotel to begin' bit tho.

[Pyros!]

This is a prototype for a guy called Aaron, who is the owner of Habbowave.net. If you look at the site, you will notice that it is a little..... Poor.. But if you look at the site, you will see why it says 'click on the hotel to begin'.

'Habbowave Hotel'

EDIT: Naked Guy is Jhonny Squabble or however you spell it. I wanted the effect of an 'American Billboard'.

[Pyros!]

Update:

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/6527/habboxpreview8az.png

Sorry. I didn't realise I double Posted

[paradox]

Johnny Squabble

[Sojobo]

*lubbs it*

[Pyros!]

Btw.. Sojobo is the 'Aaron Dude'.

[ItsDave]

The glass is really, way to dark. Needs to be alot lighter. The red is horrible as its a MS paint default colour. The lines towards the top left aren't really that equal. Need to be spaced out 2 at a time up//down repeat. 7/10

[burnsey]

The glass is really, way to dark. Needs to be alot lighter. The red is horrible as its a MS paint default colour. The lines towards the top left aren't really that equal. Need to be spaced out 2 at a time up//down repeat. 7/10


ud know MS Paint default colors off by heart dave :P
since u use them so much
:p

[Infrontation]

The glass is really, way to dark. Needs to be alot lighter. The red is horrible as its a MS paint default colour. The lines towards the top left aren't really that equal. Need to be spaced out 2 at a time up//down repeat. 7/10
Yeah..
The windows should be less repetitive and lighter. The paint is horrible and there is no real feature. The sitting down habbo's and johnny squable don't go well either. 6/10

[Reseller]

its ok but ms paint really dose give it a kick in the teeth! :p

[Pyros!]

The glass is really, way to dark. Needs to be alot lighter. The red is horrible as its a MS paint default colour. The lines towards the top left aren't really that equal. Need to be spaced out 2 at a time up//down repeat. 7/10

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/4884/sdzfxgkjhl9tj.png
Need I say more?

Um.. I'll sort windows later

[ItsDave]

You better be saying alot more.
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/9654/div8gw.png (http://imageshack.us)
Need I say anymore? (Noob.) :$