is this ok ? (kind of first try at this)

[[Oli]]

http://www.****************/uploads/ec4dc9f06d.png
http://www.****************/uploads/ec4dc9f06d.png

[craigg.]

It's green, of course it's nice.

Well, looking over the layout, The banner part where it looks robotic joining up to the content - That part doesn't really go to be honest, If you made it smooth and possibly made it silver, I think that would tie in with the rest of the layout as currently its just sitting there looking flat and un-used.

The navigation part looks a bit random as the other headings are in the silver, where as the navigation is orange, and it is curved. If you tied in the curves with the content and disclainer part, it would also uplift the design.

That's all I can see having a quick look over, Keep up the good work, and I like it how you post as I myself can keep track on how well you are coming along.

[[Oli]]

It's green, of course it's nice.

Well, looking over the layout, The banner part where it looks robotic joining up to the content - That part doesn't really go to be honest, If you made it smooth and possibly made it silver, I think that would tie in with the rest of the layout as currently its just sitting there looking flat and un-used.

The navigation part looks a bit random as the other headings are in the silver, where as the navigation is orange, and it is curved. If you tied in the curves with the content and disclainer part, it would also uplift the design.

That's all I can see having a quick look over, Keep up the good work, and I like it how you post as I myself can keep track on how well you are coming along.


^^ thanks, am trying the stuff u said atm ;)

EDIT: is this better craigg ?

http://www.****************/uploads/ff4eb7166e.png

[[Oli]]

[SORRY FOR DOUBLE POST]
but becouse of posting pic in post befor, i dont think people would of seen second version (update with ideas from craigg)

[Sygon.]

I like iut but i think u gone over the top with the white bit

[[Oli]]

I like iut but i think u gone over the top with the white bit

white bit ? u mean like the borders ?
myeh... maybe...

[craigg.]

The "Content" and "Lates news" still look randomly placed in the silver area, If you shorted what you did with the navigation od something, and repeated it without, I think that would look better. It is an improvment from the last though - I must admit.

[Klaus5000]

I am liking it! The text on the content bars look lost there but overall 7/10.