Adzeh
07-06-2006, 03:44 PM
An impacting poem written by yours truly depciting and describing the view of a perfect world with the viewpoints of two contasting people. Please take the time to appreciate the points mentioned and post your comments.
A Perfect World
Do we live in a perfect world,
Water to wash and waste,
Pure, safe, clean,
Annoyance of a simple chill, Heating, blankets, love.
Do we live in a pefect world?
A muddy mouthful from a spring miles away,
Dirty, disease, another day of life,
A harsh winter, Cold, lonely, death.
Do we live in a perfect world?
Fast food whenever and wherever we want,
Cheap, convenient, tasty,
Pricey clothes and labels,
Stylish, cool, popularity.
Do we live in a perfect world?
Fast food on the run,
A chase, a hunt, a kill,
Bare rags and nakedness,
Insufficient, small, cold.
Do we live in a perfect world?
Home from a 7 hour shift,
Tired, content, richer,
A horror film on TV,
A knife, a scare, a good time.
Do we live in a perfect world?
A 14 hour shift to keep your home,
Hungry, tears, poor,
A horror of a life,
A soldier, a mother, a gunshot, a child's screams.
Do we live in a perfect world?
Thank you.
A Perfect World
Do we live in a perfect world,
Water to wash and waste,
Pure, safe, clean,
Annoyance of a simple chill, Heating, blankets, love.
Do we live in a pefect world?
A muddy mouthful from a spring miles away,
Dirty, disease, another day of life,
A harsh winter, Cold, lonely, death.
Do we live in a perfect world?
Fast food whenever and wherever we want,
Cheap, convenient, tasty,
Pricey clothes and labels,
Stylish, cool, popularity.
Do we live in a perfect world?
Fast food on the run,
A chase, a hunt, a kill,
Bare rags and nakedness,
Insufficient, small, cold.
Do we live in a perfect world?
Home from a 7 hour shift,
Tired, content, richer,
A horror film on TV,
A knife, a scare, a good time.
Do we live in a perfect world?
A 14 hour shift to keep your home,
Hungry, tears, poor,
A horror of a life,
A soldier, a mother, a gunshot, a child's screams.
Do we live in a perfect world?
Thank you.