My First Buildings

[Demynx]

I was thinking of making a Town so these are the first I made, By the by, I never made a building so this is a first. ^_^ Rate and C+C
House:
http://www.mysticson.com/images/Plaza1.png
Apartment:
http://www.mysticson.com/images/Building1.png
Made By Mystic-Pixels, Enjoy.

[bingoking]

not bad for a first go! 6/10

[roaddemon]

Great alt.
And for a first - incredible.

9/10 +rep.

[GommeInc]

That is excellent for a first go. The long building is especially my favourite :D

I suggest you make more, then when you have loads make a town, so we can see them seperately and as a town form.

Good luck, you get a 9/10 from me.

[Demynx]

Thanks for the posts. I just made some of the town.
http://www.mysticson.com/images/Town.png

[GommeInc]

Hmmmm, the path is a bit too wide really. Should be about the same width as the car and maybe add the pathing stone lines a bit cloth together, or not adding them at all?

[Demynx]

Before I shorten the Path, you mean like this?
http://www.mysticson.com/images/Town1.png

[Sabre_1]

I'm not quite sure about the windows on the right side if the small building you're working with. It looks like they aren't lined up just right. Maybe you need to respace them so the gaps to the left and right of them are equal, and then see if it looks better. If not, they might need realigning.

I like these buildings though. I'm working on a castle right now and it's not looking good.

[Demynx]

Just did some more tings for the town.
http://www.mysticson.com/images/Town2.png

[brodeo]

All looking very mis matched.. especially the thick yellow lines in the road!

[Demynx]

Then stop posting on this thead if you hate it. Best advice I can give you.

[?habbo?]

That is very amazing for a first go, im no expert but i know how much time you need to make this. You could actually add a town park and make it look a bit eyecatching with humour say a skatepark and people falling or maybe chavs v skaters that will be a good laugh, oh well best of luck and my rating:
10/10 Perfect!!!!!!!!!:eusa_clap :eusa_clap :eusa_clap

[Demynx]

Thanks. :eusa_danc

[Mario]

very well done just some c/c
the lines in the road are wayyyy too big, try to make them smaller.
and the pavement near the first house you did is very out of place apart from that good 8/10 :)

[Demynx]

Thanks.