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Kardan
25-01-2005, 06:31 PM
Dionysus woke up, As usual.
We went to work.
It was the start of safety week, Callie was finally taking down the Christmas decorations.
Jay was finding the Love furniture under the 10 inches of dust it lay under.
Impetuous was putting up safety barriers.
Glitterkat was... Well... Sleeping
Lost_witness was finding out where his Dj decks where
Ukchaseral was on habbo.
"Christmas is over" Callie said sobbing.
"SPIDER!" Jay screamed she had only blew away 1 inch of the dust.
"Blue... Juice..."Dionysus mumbled.
Impetuous finished putting the safety barriers up.
"Imp" Dionysus said laughing.
"What?" Impetuous said.
"I said... Safety Banners not Barriers" Dionysus continued
Impetuous ignored him and went on habbo
She logged in.
"Great..." Impetuous said.
"What?" Jay asked as she was covered in spiders.
"1891 new friend requests.... It's a new record" Impetuous told her
"It isn't..." Callie said. "I got just over 2000 when i joined".
A habbo staff alert popped up.
"Muwahahaha" It said.
"Very funny..." Impetuous said to Ukchaseral who was running around screaming.
"What now?" Dionysus said to him.
"MY ACCOUNT! I'VE BEEN HACKED" He shouted.
"WHAT?" Said all the staff members except Glitterkat she was still sleeping.
It seemed that somebody was on Ukchaseral's acconut.
Suddenly thousands of Call For Helps came him to Imp's account.
"Omigosh..." She screamed as she read the first one.

"Thanks for putting the rares in the catalogue"

Imp checked the catalogue

She screamed the building down (Ok not literaly cause that would ruin the story)

"OMG!" Said Dionysus as he pushed Imp off the chair and sorted it out.

5 minutes later it was mayhem.

"GET THEM OUT!" Screamed Callie
"HURRY UP!" Shouted Jay, the spiders all over her by now.
"I'M GOING" Shouted Dionysus back
"MARK! GO FASTER!" Impetuous shouted
"Done" He said.
Another thousand or so cfh's came in.

"I bought a room of Dino's... Thanks for the rares"
"Is this how you staff get the rares"
"PUT THEM BACK IN! I WASN'T ON HABBO!"
"I'm rich... Thanks"
"I bought 25 rare gold trophies"
"Search my name to see my habbo trophy"

"OH GOD" ALL OF THEM SAID.

The next day.

Glitterkat got to work. She was alone in the office. She looked around. She logged onto habbo.
846 New messages
1471 New friend Requests
"That's alot of msgs? Something major must off..." Glitterkat paused

"You and the staff did great when you released the rares in the catalogue including the habbo trophy"

"Oh god no..." She said.

She went onto habbox and saw the news.

"Have the others been fired?" She said to herself.
She searched the names of the staff to make sure they wern't deleted. Ukchaseral was online. She messaged him.
She got no reply.
But Ukchaseral wasn't in the office how could he be online?
Ione walked in.
Ione had a device she plugged it into the main computer.
"Where is everyone?" Glitterkat asked.
"Gone..." Ione said, She took over the computer and installed some software.
"Why?" Glitterkat continued.
"Because..." Ione said. She took out the device.
"Where are they?" Glitterkat asked
"Somewhere" Ione said. She double clicked on the new software icon on the desktop.
"What's that" Glitterkat asked.
"Something..." Ione said. She entered an Ip address in.
"Why are there safety barriers in here?" Glitterkat asked.
"That I don't know about" Ione said.
"Well... Should i tell the habbos..." Glitterkat got interupted
"NO! YOU DO NOT TELL THE HABBOS WHAT HAPPENED! AND YOU DON'T TELL THEM THAT THE STAFF ARE BEING QUESTIONED..." Ione shouted then paused.
"Questioned? By who? Where?" Glitterkat wanted an answer.
"I can't say" Ione said.
"Well who's going to help me with habbo?" Glitterkat asked.
"Habbo dosen't need help..." Ione said.
"Oh yes..." Ione added, "I have to take away £100 pounds of your salary for sleeping on the job yesterday, But that's the only reason you're not involved" Ione continued.
"Great..." Glitterkat said.

For the next 30 minutes Ione fiddled around with the Software.

"What is that?" Glitterkat asked again.
"Look... It's to help with what happened yesterday... This is what you're going to do. Read the manual i'll be back tomorrow you finish work at 8 I have to get to Finland" Ione said as she left the room.
"Finland?" Glitterkat said. "That's where they are!" She said to herself.

She looked at the manual.

"Hacker Tracker?" She said.


Stay Tuned for Part 2

Fawne
25-01-2005, 06:56 PM
Really Kewl Story. :) :)
I think i might give u some Rep. :)

AngJum
25-01-2005, 07:02 PM
:o Great story, and exciting! I want mooooore :)

Kardan
25-01-2005, 07:07 PM
Part 2:

Still Day 2

Glitterkat blinked at the screen.
The computer made a noise. A robotised voice said:
Hacker Tracker Online.
The Computer was doing something.
Hacker in Finland.
"What..." Glitterkat said to her self. "Why does everything point to Finland?!" she continued.
She read the manual.
"So... It tells me where a certain person is... And tells me what they hack..." Glitterkat read.
"Current hackings.." She continued.
"Habbo. Account name: Ukchaseral"
Glitterkat was puzzled, What was she supposed to do?

"IT WASN'T ME" Dionysus shouted.
A bright light shone in his face.
Sulake officials walked into the room.
"I'M TELLING YOU.... :o Blue juice" Dionysus said.
"Told you putting Blue Juice in his face would work" Said Official Number 1 (Let's call him Jim)
"Ok... Mark... What happened?" Said the main Official (Let's call him Tim)
"What? About the rares? It was Ukchaseral..." He said.
"Jim get him" Said Tim.
"Ok Tim I'll get him" Said Jim
"It was him, Tim and Jim" Dionysus said as he ponited at Ukchaseral.
"It wasn't me Tim" Ukchaseral pleaded.

At 8 pm

"What are they doing in there Becs?" Ione asked
"Don't ask me..." Becs said. "All i know is that Mark is in there"

Meanwhile back in the uk

"Off to finland i guess" Glitterkat said as she took the Hacker Tracker with her.
"Hacker Tracker Hacking into Habbo" The machine said.
"NO...." Said Glitterkat she logged back onto habbo.
"This calls for VERY DESPERATE mesaures" She shouted.
Glitterkat clicked the Ban all account buttons.
"That's sorted... Ok off to Finland".

It was now known where the staff are, where the hacker is, but we don't know who the hacker is???

How will Glitterkat find out who it is? Plus is Ukchaseral really guilty?


Stay tuned for part 3

Fawne
25-01-2005, 07:40 PM
Nice...
Very good story, maybe you should try and get it put into the Newsie On Habbo Hotel UK!
It's nice to read you Stories. :)

AngJum
25-01-2005, 07:47 PM
;o -Jumps off seat- Moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!

Kardan
25-01-2005, 08:33 PM
Part 3: Day 3: In finland

After a rough nights sleep in a 2 small tents the habbo staff wake up.
(Ione and Becs were in a hotel for the night :@ )
Impetuous sneezed.
Callie cried.
"Oh well guys, Who ever the hacker was is one good hacker" Dionysus said to them.
"AHHHHHH!" Callie screamed. "Why are you in the girls tent! You should be with Ukchaseral and Lost_witness" She continued.
"But Lost_witness snores" Dionysus said.
Jay woke up.
"Please say that isn't..." She fell back sleep.
There were 2 shadows on the side of the tent.
Impetuous opened the tent to see a blizzard the second tent was no where to be seen. Lost_witness and Ukchaseral were at the door sneezing. It was
-10 degrees.

All the staff were sharing the tent.
"Maybe... The habbo council can save us" Callie said.
"_Olam_ won't come" Dionysus said.
"Dj-3000 might he did get the award for the most helpful male" Impetuous said.
"I very doubt he would come into freezing tempretures in finland" Callie said.
There were another 2 shadows at the tent. Once again Impetuous opened at it.

All of the staff growled. It w Ione and Becs in big thick Pink and Red coats They were wearing 3 each. They had about 5 scarfs each and 2 pairs of gloves. They were as warm as a penguin.

- But wait a minute penguins are cold. So if Ione and Becs are cold in that ust imagne how the staff are.

"Guys... We have to get back to London" Ione said as Becs through a snowball.
"But... Sulake need to..." Dionysus paused
"HELLO?! DO YOU WANT TO BE FIRED! IF WE GO NOW THEY WON'T CATCH US... WE'LL BE FREE!" Ione shouted.
The staff got warm clothes on which Becs brought it a bag. (A very big bag).

The staff walked in the blizzard and somehow (Don't ask me) got to the airport. They walked around in the airport, Bought tickets.

The flight BT-481 touched down in Helsinki. But what does that have to do with the story it dosen't actually. But the BT-482 does.

It landed 5 minutes later.

Glitterkat got of the plan she tried to rescue the other staff members so she went to the Sulake offices in Helsinki, but what she didn't know was that the staff members were going back to England.

"The Hacker Tracker" Glitterkat said s she got stopped in the metal detector thingy that you get at airports.
"I need it... I work for Sulake" She said.
"Oh, That place." said an official from Sulake
"Thankgod.... I beleive the hacker into habbo is at your...." She paused

The Hacker had changed directions, Glitterkat had been notified by this by the Hacker Tracker

"Is going back to England" Glitterkat ran back to get onto a flight.

To speed things up:

Glitterkat hadn't got enough money to get back to the UK.
The flight that the habbo staff were on was back in England.
Sulake officials from Finland were tracking down the staff.
Plus the flight BT-451 is in New Zealand.


Stay tuned for Part 4.

AngJum
25-01-2005, 09:16 PM
So exciting, I'm getting all anxious I want more! ;)

Kardan
26-01-2005, 04:01 PM
"I NEED TO GET BACK TO THE UK!" Glitterkat Shouted!
"Well... We need some..." The Airport person guy said.
"I haven't got no money!" Glitterkat pleaded.

Meanwhile in the Uk

"Lock the door!" Ione shouted.
"Why?" said Dionysus
"Because... Just do it" Ione ordered.
Becs went online.
"WHAT?!" Becs screamed at the top of her voice
"What now..." Callie asked as she asked one of the staff to unban her as she was banned.
"Silly hobbas banning staff" Dionysus said. He tried to log on.
"I'm banned..." Becs and Callie said.
"Me too" Dionysus said.
"Someone has banned all accounts!" Impetuous said.
Lost_witness made a new staff account.
"Ok... There... I'll direct all cfh's recieved in the last 12 hours to me." Lost_witness said.

They got a new record.

0 Call for helps.

Becs checked the emails.

23,591 New messages.

"MY ACCOUNT HAS BEEN BANNED! NO REASON!"
"Unban my account!"
"WHY DID YOU BAN MOD-KITTY!"
"Plz unban i'm new"

Callie's jaw dropped.

The 2nd batch of Sulake officials were going to England.
"I'm with them" Glitterkat said as she pretended she was with the group of people.
"ID Badge please" The airport guy said.
Glitterkat shown her Habbo Badge.
"Yes you work for Sulake you may go through" Mr. Airport guy said.

The 2 groups of officials went to London... Glitterkat told them she had a Hacker Tracker and it shown were the hacker was. The hacker was in London.

The Sulake officials and Glitterkat arrived at the offices.
Aapo lead the group.
"Ok..." Aapo said.
"I have a key" Glittkerat said as she opened the door.

"GLITTERKAT?!" Shouted Callie.
"WHAT IN THE WORLD IS GOING ON?!" Shouted Aapo.
Glitterkat looked at the Hacker Tracker. It was somebody in that room.

Stay tuned for Part 5!

AngJum
26-01-2005, 04:15 PM
:O! My skin crawled as I read that and got nearer and nearer to
finding who it was, then you left me on a cliff hanging! :'( Mooooooooooooooooooooore!

Jacko2kn3
26-01-2005, 05:25 PM
Great story, have rep :D

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26-01-2005, 06:06 PM
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Kardan
27-01-2005, 04:12 PM
Part 5.....

Getting tense now isn't it...

"IT'S SOMEBODY IN HERE" Glitterkat said...
"Ok... We will interview everyone of them" Aapo said as he ordered the Sulake staff to get the staff in a lnie and get a interview room set up.
Ione banged into the computer when a Sulake official moved her.
Glitterkat looked at the Hacker Tracker. It wasn't working. They had to figure it out for them selfs now.
Dionysus, Impetuous, Jay, Callie, Ione, Becs, Lost_witnesss and Ukchaseral were lined up against the wall.
Aapo came back into the room. "We will interview all eight of you! We will then fire whoever it is, If you want us to save us the hassle of interviewing you lot say now". He said.
There was silence.
"Great..." Aapo said as he callled Dionysus to go with him.

"Dionysus..." Aapo said.
"Yes..." Dionysus said.
"Good... Good..." Aapo said. He was testing Dionysus already.
"Ok... Hacker Tracker?" Aapo asked.
"Hacker Tracker?" Dionysus replied.
"Yes the Hacker tracker" Aapo replied back
"What's that?" Dionysus replied back again
"Intresting..." Aapo said.
"The rares..." Aapo asked
"IT WASN'T ME" Dionysus shouted.
"Banning accounts..." Aapo said his tone of voice getting more scary.
"IT WASN'T ME I TELL YOU!" Dionysus shouted.
"ACCUSING UKCHASERAL OF BEING THE PERSON THAT DID THIS?!" Aapo shouted back.
"IT WASN'T ME! I'M TELLING YOU! I SWEAR ON YOUR LIFE!" Dionysus shouted back.
Aapo gapsed. He fell to the floor dead.





No, Dionysus isn't guilty and Aapo hasn't died just a joke. To make things funny...
Back to the story

Dionysus was let out. The staff were worried. They didn't want to go next... Dionysus went into a corner to cry.
Impetuous, who was next, went to the back of the line.
"WHAT?" Jay shouted to Impetuous
"I'm not going!" Impetuous said.
"He won't shout at a lady watch..." Jay said as she got told to walk in.

"Jay..." Aapo said.
"Hello... How are you..." Jay replied smiling a fake smile.
"Why are you being so nice... Even though you're faking it all... You're highly worried!" Aapo said smirking.
"Why would i be worried!" Jay replied.
"BECAUSE IT WAS YOU WHO PUT THE RARES OUT!" Aapo shouted.
"No it wasn't!" Jay said trying to keep cool.
"YOU BANNED THE ACCOUNTS!" Aapo continued shouting.
"It wasn't me..." Jay said... She starting to get angry herself.
"AND YOU KEPT YOURSELF IN THE BACKGROUND TO KEEP YOUSELF NOT TO BE NOTICED!" Aapo said.
Jay just walked out.

It seemed that Aapo was getting a bit angry... Jay joined Dionysus but she wasn't crying.

Callie was next.

"Callie..." Aapo said.
"IT WASN'T ME!" Callie said as she roared her eyes out.
Aapo looked astounded.
"I NEVER BANNED THE ACCOUNTS!" Callie roared. "I NEVER BBOUGHT THE RARES OUT" Callie shouted even more. "IT WASN'T ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" She said as she rushed out of the room.
"Ok..." Aapo said shocked as he wrote down some notes.

Becs was next in line. Impetuous who was now at the back was looking worried as Callie came out and ran to the toilet.

"Becs..." Aapo said.
"Just get on with it..." Becs answered.
"Attitude hey?" Aapo replied.
"No... Hurry up..." Becs said she was angry or ready.
"You let the rares into the catalogue didn't you!" Aapo said.
"No" Becs said.
"DIDN'T YOU!" Aapo roared.
"DON'T YOU TALK TO ME LIKE THAT MR. AAPO!" Becs roared and slapped Aapo round the face.
"You may continue" she said.
"I don't need too. You may leave..." Aapo said.

To see Ione, Lost_witness, Ukchaseral and Impetuous do there interviews and for the final verdict see Part 6!

2hd.
27-01-2005, 04:31 PM
we want more!

AngJum
27-01-2005, 04:56 PM
:o Interesting.. more more more :)

Kardan
27-01-2005, 04:59 PM
Part 6:

Who do you think it is??????


Aapo looked at the 4 remaining... He called in Ione.

"Hello Ione..." Aapo said.
"Hi..." Ione said.
"Hacker Tracker" Aapo said.
"Oh... That thing... I installed it for Glitterkat..." She got interuptted.
"Hmm..." Aapo said. "Ok... Did you ban the accounts" He asked.
"No"
"Did you release the rares" Aapo said.
"No"
"Just go i'm wasting my time on you" Aapo said as he shown Ione the door.

Next was Lost_witness

"WHERE'S MY DJ DECKS MAN!" Lost_witness shouted to Aapo.
"Dj decks?" Aapo asked.
For those who forgot read part 1 Lost_witness was looking for his missing Dj decks
"Yeah!" Lost_witness asked.
"Ok... We'll look for them after the next 2 interviews...." Aapo said. "So DID YOU RELEASE THE RARES!" Aapo shouted
"No man! Why would i do that!" He answered back.
"Cheeky... You can go" Aapo said.

Just Ukchaseral and Impetuous remained.

This time Aapo came into the main room. Everyone looked at him.
"Ok, I know who it is!" Aapo said.
Everyone gapsed.
"Glitterkat come with me" Aapo said.
Everyone gapsed.
"Was it Glitterkat?" Dionysus asked.
"She was sleeping" Jay said.
"But she never came to Finland" Ione added.

"Hello Glitterkat... This is the final interview..." Aapo said.
"What about Imp and Ukchaseral?" Glitterkat asked.
"No need..." Aapo said.
"Oh..." Glitterkat replied.
"Ok... First of all...Tell me what happened on Day 1" Aapo asked.
"Well... I was asleep That's why i wasn't involved" She said.
"Good" Aapo said. "Day 2?" He asked.
"Well... I went to work... I was the only one there... Everyone else was... Gone. I sat on the computer read the call for ehlps found out what was going on. Ione came in. She was worried. I think it was because of what had happened. I asked her questions like what had happened exactly, Where was the staff. She didn't tell me. She installed the Hacker Tracker for me..." She got interuppted.
"Intresting..." Aapo said to himself. "Carry on..."
"She told me how to use it she said she was going to Finland with the rest of the staff. I then found out that the Hacker was going to finland that morning on the plane. But i couldn't be sure it was staff because of other passengers on the plane. I went to Finland too" Glitterkat said.
"Day 3?" Aapo asked.
"Well... After delays at Heathrow i got to Finland in Day 3, I still had the hacker tracker with me... I was going to go out of the airport but found out that the hacker was in the airport going back to England. Off they went. But You Sulake officials came and i had no money so i came with you to track them down. Then we got to the offices. And here we are." Glitterkat said.
"I know who it is.... It all leads to that person" Aapo said as he walked out of the room.

"Staff... I know who it is..." Aapo said.
All of the staff froze. Including Glitterkat.
"It is...

To be continued.......

2hd.
27-01-2005, 05:02 PM
:o tension!!

AngJum
27-01-2005, 05:08 PM
:o nooo! Don't do that -Thinks to self-

Kardan
27-01-2005, 05:13 PM
Muwahahaha! Check the article and story bit in 10 mins.

Kardan
27-01-2005, 05:18 PM
"Ione..." Aapo said.
Everyone looked around for Ione.
She was already on the outskirts of London (Miracle i know)
Glitterkat went to the computer and reinstaleld the Hacker Tracker.
Dionysus formed a battle plan...
Jay told him it wasn't a battle
Impetuous said he should just make a plan
Dionysus made a plan
Plus Callie went directly for Ione.
We got rid of Ukchaseral and Lost_witness as it would make the story too complicated.
Aapo came along.

Ione was now heading for Heathrow.
Callie was driving the minibus with: Jay, Glitterkat, Dionysus, Impetuous, Becs and Aapo in it.

Glitterkat looked at the Hacker Tracker they were ages behind.
"Drive faster Callie!" Glitterkat said.
Ione was gettimg further away from them.
"C'mon Callie" Aapo said.
"I'm going" She said as Callie turned around.
"CALLIE! WATCH OUT!" Jay shouted as Callie crashed the car into a tree.
They were in the countryside.
"WHERE ARE WE?" Dionysus asked.
They got out the car.
It needed to be repaired.
Glitterkatkat looked at the tracker, Ione was now out of the radar.
"She'll leave the country" Impetuous said.
"Ok... Which airport?" Jay asked.
"Tough" Becs said.
"Heathrow... She always goes Heathrow" Aapo told them.
The staff walked along the country path. They didn't no how long or which way to go.

Meanwhile in the Usa...

A meeting was going on...

"Where the hell is she?" Bamaloo cried!
"Don't ask me" said Blunique.
"This is just... SILLY!" Saffron cried out!
"She'll come" Dubya said quietly.
The hotel managers from .com.au, .com.sg, .com and .ca where waiting for Callie.
"Eventually..." Dubya added.

A taxi came.

Only big enough to fit 5 more people in.

"Ok... I got 7 straws here" Dionysus said.
"Why did you bring straws" Glitterkat asked.
"Look 2 of them have a red mark on the end, if you get it you stay here the other five go in the cab" Dionysus said.

Glitterkat went first. 2/7 chance of her getting one of the bad straws.
She got a blank one. She got in the cab.
1/3 of a chance for Impetuous.
She also got a blank straw.
2/5 Chance for Aapo.
He got a bad straw. He started to continue to walk down the country road.
1/4 of a chance for Jay to go.
She got a blank straw also.
1/3 of a chance for Callie. She also got a good straw.
It was between Becs and Dionysus.
They each picked a straw. Dionysus' straw was blank he got in whilst Becs started to walk.


STAY TUNED FOR PART 2

Azela
27-01-2005, 05:27 PM
You can't just leave me....

2hd.
28-01-2005, 04:32 PM
grrr... we want more!

Azela
28-01-2005, 05:24 PM
Kardan *cracks whip* Work boy!!! I'm on tent hooks EDIT: Tenter hooks :p

Jacko2kn3
28-01-2005, 05:27 PM
That's great! I'm hooked ! :D

Ciaran
28-01-2005, 05:41 PM
Write more or suffer a shoe... lol great well done

AngJum
28-01-2005, 05:52 PM
:o! Ione... woooooww :p More matey!

Kardan
28-01-2005, 08:20 PM
I updated the top post i will update this post for part 2

AngJum
28-01-2005, 11:28 PM
:o o.O I wonder, great story.. more :p

Azela
29-01-2005, 12:14 AM
Just finish it, next time. I've re freshed this thread about 30 times today :)

Kardan
29-01-2005, 02:54 PM
They got to heathrow fine.
"20 pounds!" Glitterkat shouted!
They had approx. 30 pounds left.
Glitterkat looked at the hacker tracker.
Ione was in the airport... Well on the runway.
"That plane" Glitterkat said as she pointed at it.
It was going to take off in about 20 minutes.
Last call for flight to Helsinki, Finland. I repeat last call for flight to Helsinki, Finland. Go to Gate 132.
The 5 staff members ran like hell.
"Tickets please" The collector lady thingy person said.
"We work for Sulake... WE NEED TO GET ON THAT PLANE!" Dionysus shouted.
Jay forced her way through...
"Come on..." She said to the others.

They got kicked off. Glitterkat had only figured out then they were on at the wrong gate.
They walked to the purchase gate.
"5 tickets for the next flight to Helsinki, Finland" Callie said.
"That's 99.95 please." The woman said.
They all looked at each other.
"How much for 1 ticket" Callie asked.
"19.99" The woman said.
"Only one of us can go..." Callie said.
"Or we use that money to get a taxi to get to one of are houses, to get 100 pounds." Dionysus said.
"But Ione is getting away!" Glitterkat said.
"I know..." Impetuous said. "One of us goes... Then you use the 10 pounds to get a taxi and get more money..." She continued.
Dionysus said that Glitterkat should go.
She got a ticket.
"I have to wait another 30 minutes before i go..." She told the others. "You go back and meet me in Helsinki ok..."
"Ok..." Impetuous said. She and the others left the airport.

Ione was now in the air. Glittekrat got on her flight in the end and arrived in Helsinki. The others got to Dionysus' flat and got his money he was saving for a holiday.

Stay tuned for Part 3 which marks the end of the: Glitterkat Saga.

AngJum
29-01-2005, 03:00 PM
:o Wooah, go Ione go go go =]

Kardan
29-01-2005, 03:01 PM
Lol will she ever get them off there tail........

I can say that Dionysus is going to have a fun time soon..... :)

Mr.Comedian
29-01-2005, 03:02 PM
wow thats a wicked story!

Kardan
29-01-2005, 03:03 PM
hope you checked out part 1!

(iN A PREVIOUS POST TO SEE IT GO TO THE ARTICLE AND STORY BOARD)


I had my last 5 reps from writing this :)

Half of them with no rep power but hey :)

Kardan
29-01-2005, 05:06 PM
I couldn't edit my last post so i had to do a new post.

Part 3 (The final part to the: Glitterkat Saga)

Glitterkat ran to the Helsinki sulake offices.

The Hacker Tracker bleeped madly. She was closer.

Ione was in the offices trying to ruin the Finnish Hotel.
"STOP! IONE IS TRYING TO RUIN THE HOTEL!" Glitterkat shouted to the staff. "She did it to the british one!" Glitterkat rang out.
Ione turned around.
"Glitterkat..." She said. "What are you doing here!" She said surpised.
"Stop this now!" Glitterkat said.
All finnish staff members were staring at them.
"GLITTER" Ione shouted. "I'M MAKING IT BETTER!" She continued.
"No you're not!" Glitterkat shouted back. "You're ruining it!" She continued.
The Hacker Tracker bleeped.
There was a flashing button. Glitterkat pressed it.
"Shiny button..." she said.
The Hacker Tracker bleeped.
It said at the top:
"Controller: Glitterkat - CL: Helsinki, Finland"
"CL?" She said.
It bleeped again.
"Incoming message" It said.
"WA?" Glitterkat said as she threw it in the air.
"It makes a noise? I never devised it to do that?" Ione said.
Glitterkat caught it. She pressed the mail button.

Glit, Me and Becs are in the London offices. I updated the Hacker Tracker to version 2.0, Anyone can use it now. To download locations of other staff members give it to that member. Then take it to any computer you can re-install it there. Then their location will be put on the device, then they can also handle the Hacker Tracker so they can use it.
Good Luck, Aapo
P.S: Like the Mail feature!

"What is this thing?" She said.
"Give it up Glitter!" Ione said she reached into her pocket.
She pulled out a handgun.
Everyone gasped.
"What do you plan to do with that" Glitterkat asked.
"Shoot you" She said.
"Oh... That's bad then..." Glitterkat said.
Everyone could hear footsteps.
"PARTY TIME!" Dionysus said.
"Shut up you fool! Ione is here!" Jay whispered.
"Oh... GET IONE!" Dionysus ordered.
"Don't she's got a gun..." Glitterkat said.
"Incoming message" The Hacker Tracker said once again.
Glitterkat pressed the mail button.

Glitterkat! The Dj decks ARE STILL MISSING! I can't live without them!

She stopped reading the message.
"Ione... Dj decks..." Glitterkat asked.
"Dj decks... What about them" She said quietly.
She continued to read.

Aapo found fingerprints where they were last. Ione has them. Well she must of took them.

She stopped again.
"DJ DECKS!" Glitterkat shouted.
"..." Ione said nothing.

She read the message again.

Please find them! How will we release them?
Good Luck, Lost_witness

Glitterkat looked up, Ione was gone.
"Glitterkat! She's gone COME ON!" Dionysus ordered.
"Glit....at! C... o. Do..t .e..e us! C.ll . ....la.ce N.W! S..'. be.n s..t." Jay said.
There speech was becoming slow. Glitterkat's vision was blurred. It went all Black.

1 day later.

"Incoming message" The Hacker Tracker said.
The button was pressed.
Install this into a computer enter your name you're position will be recorded along with the others already on.
Dionysus installed the software.
"Controller: Dionysus CL: Helsinki, Finland" The Hacker Tracker said.
"Glitterkat got shot, She is hospital, I'm going to find Ione with the Hacker Tracker if you need me contact me" Dionysus said to the others who were working in the Finnish offices.

Check out for Part 3.

The start of the: Dionysus Saga

Zylo
29-01-2005, 05:28 PM
WOOOOO! Go dionysus


GO BRO! If i could give rep i would lol :(

Kardan
29-01-2005, 05:42 PM
CVheck out Part 3 comin VERY SOON!

Kardan
29-01-2005, 06:04 PM
Dionysus Saga

It now had 3 signals. One of him in a deep grey dot. Glitterkat on a light blue dot and Ione the red dot.
Ione was already out of the country.
Dionysus minimized the map, she was going over the Atlantic heading to the states he had to follow.
"Incoming Messages" The Hacker Tracker bleeped.
Dionysus pressed the message button.

Dionysus, I hope you got this Email, Since i don't have Callie's email could you please tell her to get to the USA as soon as possible. She was supposed to come to the meeting yesterday! See you soon, Blunique American HM.

The button was still flashing.
He pressed it.

Dionysus, I redirected your Emails to the Hacker Tracker so if any emails you, you can read it. I'll do more updates soon. Aapo (Still in London)

He got to the airport and got a plane and headed to Santa Monica in California where the American offices are located.

He was in California, It was 6AM there.
That meant it was Day 5.
He walked around asking where the Sulake offices were.
He got the address: 1460 4th street Suite 302.
In the end he gave up and went to a hotel to rest.

He woke up a midday, He looked out of the window there was a sign saying:

Sulake Offices.

He rushed out and went into the offices.

"Good idea..." Blunique said.
"Well... I'm not so sure" Dubya said.
"It will work trust me" Ione said.
"You sure?" Saffron asked.
"Yeah... You have to be 100% sure" Bamaloo said.
"Personally i'm 0%s sure" Dionysus said as he walked in.
"DIONYSUS!" Ione shouted as she got out of her chair.
"Dionysus, I wanted Callie not you!" Blunique complained.
"Do you know what she plans to do!" Dionysus shouted.
"Yes... Add new feautres MAKE US MORE MONEY!" Dubya replied.
"Make her more money!" Dionysus said as he pointed at Ione.
"It's all a lie DON'T BELEIVE HIM!" Ione said.
"Who would you beleive me or her" Dionysus said.

They all looked at Ione.

"Don't believe me then!" Dionysus said.

Dionysus went back to the Hotel.

Stay tuned for the next part

Azela
29-01-2005, 06:10 PM
Kardan, stop your teasin me now, just finish it >.< :(

Kardan
29-01-2005, 06:11 PM
It finishes soon :)

AngJum
29-01-2005, 06:29 PM
:o Noooo GlitterKat! :( -Waits for part 3..-

..::Tina::..
29-01-2005, 06:31 PM
Argh I hate this suspense :eusa_booh
Nice story, now give us the rest ;)

Azela
29-01-2005, 06:35 PM
This is truly amazing... I'm really enjoying it :)

Slipped
29-01-2005, 06:36 PM
Nice Story :P Keep it up

Jacko2kn3
29-01-2005, 07:02 PM
Great story! :D

AngJum
29-01-2005, 07:08 PM
:o Oh no they better not believe her! I don't want it to finish it's so exciting

Kardan
04-02-2005, 07:55 PM
After many complaints........ I am continuing the story :)

Dionysus walked into the american hotel 2 hours later.
"IT'S CHAOS! DO SOMETHING!" Blunique shouted.
"I hate to say i told you so... BUT I TOLD YOU SO!" Dionysus said back.
"It's bad... Very bad" Blunique replied.
"Not as bad as making 700+ habbos a hobba" Dionysus said.
"Oh yes it is... THERE ALL HOBBAS!" Blunique replied.
"Ban them then" Dionysus said.
"BUT I'M BANNED!!!" Blunique said.
"It's a massive game of kick wars out there" Dionysus said.
"WHO DID THIS?!" Blunique said.
"Ione... Ione did it all, She's destroying these hotels! But we're onto her, She needs somebody else to help her" Dionysus said. "Anyway where's the others" Dionysus continued.
"Gone to defend there hotels!" Blunique said.
Dionysus looked at the hacker tracker. She was heading back to Finland.
Dionysus went from California back to Finland.
"Dion... She struck again... .fi is down! I REPEAT! SHE DELETED ALL ACCOUNTS!" Jay shouted.
"3 hotels down 13 to go... She'd go to the nearest hotel next... SWEDEN!. Dionysus said as he grabbed Jay's arm. "You're coming with me!" Dionysus said.

Will Ione get a new partner in crime?
If so, WHO?
Why is she going to wreck Sweden next?
Will Lost_witness get his Dj decks back?
Will the other 13 hotels survive!
Ad will Dionysus stop holding Jay's arm!

Find out in the next boring part which is the end of Dionysus' saga! :o

scottish
04-02-2005, 10:45 PM
Dude The Bis Where Callie Was Driving The Minibus then 2 seconds later she managed to crash her car :s..Lol :eusa_clap :D :D :D :D :D :D

timROGERS
05-02-2005, 03:49 PM
This story rawks!

AngJum
05-02-2005, 03:56 PM
:o! I want some more :p They are so exciting!

timROGERS
05-02-2005, 05:49 PM
Gimme more...more!

..::Tina::..
05-02-2005, 06:02 PM
That's so cool, now post the rest ;) *hint hint*

ash5768
06-02-2005, 05:52 PM
holy camoly thats good,. .................................................. .. cool

Jacko2kn3
06-02-2005, 06:00 PM
I want more too! Come on Kardan!

2hd.
06-02-2005, 06:07 PM
yh com on!

Kardan
06-02-2005, 06:50 PM
Dionysus got to the swedish hotel. AiQ the hotel manager was crying in the corner. Ione had already struck.
"12 left" Jay said.
"This is just stupid" Dionysus said.
The hacker Tracker bleeped. It seemed that Ione was going to South America.
"There's no habbo hotels there!" Jay complained.
"Who says she's going to wreck another hotel. All hotel staff for all hotels must know about this now but if someone else comes and wrecks it they won't know about it but if Ione comes, they'll know what she's gonna do" Dionysus explained.
"Ok, So who is she gonig to get" Jay asked.
"I don't know we better get to a airport" Dionysus asked.

At the airport.

"I got it! I know where she's going! I KNOW WHO SHE'S GOING TO TRY AND GET! I KNOW HER PLAN!" Dionysus shouted.
"If you be quiet i'll give you pie" Jay said.
"Pie... Ok i'll shut up" Dionysus said.
"First say who she's getting" Jay asked.
"Well she's going to Lima" Dionysus said.
"Lima? What country is Lima?" Jay asked.
"It's not a country it's a city" Dionysus said.
"Ok what country is Lima in" Jay asked.
"Peru" Dionysus whispered.
Jay gasped.
"Yep, She's after Jibbi" Dionysus said.
They got on to the next plane to Lima

8 hours later In Lima...

"Man it's hot" Dionysus said.
"Where the hell is Ione?" Jay asked.
"Don't ask me!" Dionysus asked.
The hacker tracker bleeped.
She's out of the city. She's in a nearby village.

In the near by village.

"There she is" Jay asked.
"Muwahahaha we found her!" Dionysus shouted.

Dionysus and Jay stayed behind a hut
Ione knocked on aother hut.
"Anyone home?" Ione asked.
Someone gasped.
"Ahh... You're home" Ione said.
"Re... Rebecca!" Jibbi shotued.
"Good to see you" Ione said. "Let's have a walk" Ione said.

They walked down a path.

"This is our chance" Dionysus said as he and Jay tip toed towards them.

"Listen... since habbo fired you" Ione said.
"They didn't fire me, I left" Jibbi said.
"Good... Listen..." Ione stopped.
"What?" Jibbi asked.
Ione turned around to see Dionysus and Jay listening to there conversation.
Dionysus gulped.
Ione pulled out a shotgun.
"REBECCA!" Jibbi shouted.
Ione pulled the trigger.
Dionysus got shot.
"Ha bullet proof armour" Dionysus shotued.
Ione shot the gun again.
"Bullet proof armour is good" Dionysus shouted
She pulled it again.
It got his arm.
"That's not bullet proof" Ione shouted.
Dionysus fell to the floor
"MARK!" Jay shouted
Ione aimed at Jay's head.


To be continued....

Jacko2kn3
06-02-2005, 07:00 PM
KEEP GOING!

My PM didn't have much effect, hmmm, need a new tactic.

POST MORE!

Kardan
11-02-2005, 04:01 PM
Mark was on the floor... Dying.
Ione pointed the gun at Jay's head.
Jibbi was speechless.
Ione pulled the trigger.
Jay blinked. She was still alive. Ione's gun had run out of bullets.
Jibbi spoke. "I'll call emergancy services".
Jibbi called the ambulance servive but then Ione grabbed Jibbi's arm and ran. She had took Jibbi hostage.
Jay waited for the emergancy services.
"Help..." Dionysus said. "Please..."
Jay started to cry. She couldn't do anyting. He was dying. She could do nothing.
The ambulance came and took care of Dionysus. Jay picked up of the hacker Tracker.

Location: Lima, Peru
Holder: Jay

The hacker tracker flashed. Version 3.0. The mail message bleeped.

Ahh, Jay, Good work, I have updated this to version 3.0 if anyone else gets hold of these there position will be put on here and they will be in control just like you are. Good luck.
Aapo in Finland.

Jay's position was green.

All Jay needed was Jibbi to touch it. Once. It would help. But Ione was running away. Jay couldn't stand this. She wiped her tears away and lef the scene. She knew Ione would go to the airport. So she did.

Jay found Jibbi. She ran over but they were getting on the flight.
"Ticket please" The aldy asked Jay.
"I haven't got one but i need to stop that lady!" Jay said as she ran onto the plane.

She was on the plane.
"JIBBEH!" She shouted.
Jibbi screamed.
"TAKE HOLD OF THIS!" Jay shouted.
Jibbi just touched the Hacker Tracker.
Her position was in lilac.
Jay got the hacker tracker but security threw her off.
In the end Sulake officials sorted the case and got her to Finland.

Jay explained, They knew who it all was. But all we needed to know was where the Dj decks are and how to rescue Jibbi.

Mined
11-02-2005, 04:11 PM
Its good but you need to finish it instead of teasing us :)

Kardan
11-02-2005, 04:12 PM
Don't worry final part is next.... :(

Jin
11-02-2005, 07:03 PM
Don't worry final part is next.... :(
Oh thank god I am going to have to do a whole lotta merging to sticky this.

Kardan
11-02-2005, 07:22 PM
Lighting struck. Ione laughed. The dark clouds were above her. Evil dark clouds for you goths out there. And a million miles away (Ok i don't know how many miles Canada is from the Uk) Jay is crying.
"How... HOW I TELL YOU! 2 STAFF MEMBERS DOWN! WE ARE AGAINST THAT COW! HOW THE HELL ARE WE GOING TO DO THIS!" Jay shouted.
The rest of the staff had now gone to the Uk.
"I don't know! But somehow... Someway" Impetuous said.
"Well, We have to get that Jibbi person back!" Callie said.
"She isn't a Jibbi person! SHE'S MY FRIEND!" Jay shouted back.
"Ok ladies, I devised a plan" Aapo said.
Everyone listened in.
"WHAT?!" Jay shouted. "THAT'S CRAZY?!"
"So crazy it might just work" Impetuous said as she rushed to the valentine's theatredrome.

The 4 staff members packed there backs and went to Canada.

"MUWAHAHAHAHA!" Ione chuckled on top of the 35 story tall building which was the canadian Sulake offices.
Jibbi cowered.
A panda knocked at the door of the offices.
"WHAT THE HELL?" Ione shouted.
The panda looked up.
Dubya let the panda in.
"I'm going crazy" Ione said.
She pondered.
"Panda?" She said to herself.
She went back to Muwahahahaing
The panda sat down.
"Hello Panda" Dubya said.
"..." The panda didn't speak.
"Great... Well we can release the theatredrome now" Dubya said. "Wait i forgot... There recked the witch at the top did it" Dubya sighed.
Silence.
"Well Panda what would you like" Dubya asked.
"..." The panda didn't speak.
The panda seemed to be moving from the inside.
"move... no you.... get off.... MY EYE!...hey...:o... did someone just get you there..... yes" the Panda said.
"Panda..." Dubya asked.
"..." The panda didn't speak.
The panda turned it's head. It looked at the elevator. It walked to the elevator and walked in.
Dubya came in.

Floor 1. *Annoying music starts playing*
The panda hums.
Ding. Floor 2.
Annoying music continues to play.
Ding. Floor 3.
Annoying music gets louder.
Dubya bangs at the sound monitor.
Ding. Floor 4.
The annoying music gets faster.
Dubya bangs at the sound monitor again.
Ding. Floor 5.
The music gets faster and louder.
Ding. Floor 6.
Dubya breaks the sound monitor.
The music continues.
Ding. Floor 7.
Dubya faints.

He wakes up.
Ding Floor 28.
The music is still going full speed.
Ding. Floor 29.
Dubya has enough and presses stop on the elevator.
Ding. Floor 30.
He gets out.
"I'll walk the extra five floors" Dubya says.
The elevator closes.
Ding. Floor 31.
The panda takes off his head.
"About time" Impetuous said.
"You know how squashed it is being the left arm" Jay said.
" The right is worse" Callie said.
"What pain do you think i have to go through beinmg the elgs!" Aapo shouted.
Ding. Floor 32.
"Look, We got in. Now what do we do. We're a panda!" Impetuous said.
"A love panda" Jay said.
Ding. Floor 33.
"Look get the head back on and i'll tell you what to do. Impetuous you do the voice. Disguise it a bit" Aapo ordered.
"Ok" Impetuous said in the panda voice.
Ding. Floor 34.
Music stops.
Ding. Floor 35.
The panda got out.

Ione was on the roof with Jibbi.
Jibbi was standing on the edge of the building.
"Suicide is a nice word you know" She said to Ione.
"I prefer Murder" Ione said.
"Yeah but Suicide..." Jibbi said.
Ione stopped. She heard footsteps.
The footsteaps were soon disguised by the rain.
"Hmmm" Ione said.
The panda opened the roof hatch.

Ione was standing still behind her was a panda.
Jibbi look scared.
"PANDA!" She shouted. Jibbi went to jump.
"Jibbi! No" The Panda said.
"Panda speaks?" Jibbi said.
"PANDA?!" Ione shouted.
"Hello Rebecca, I am the Love-panda" The panda said.
"Grrrrrreat" Ione said.
"Love? Panda?" Jibbi asked.
"Look, Rebecca we all love you. Why do you do this?" The panda asked her.
"Because... I ahte the staff, I hate habbo. JIBBI TOOK MY PLACE AS HM! HOW DO YOU THINK I FEEL" Ione shouted.
"Hey I took it..." Callie's voice said.
"Callie? I'm going crazy" Ione said.
"Yes you are, you never heard that" The panda said. "Look, where are the Dj decks?" Panda asked.
"Why do you want to know that?" Ione said.
"Because, this is all a dream. If you tell us everything, everythinf will be ok" Panda said.
"Ok" Ione said.
"So rebecca, where are the Dj decks" Panda asked.
"Well i did want to put them in the sky..." Ione said.
"JUST TELL US!" Said Jay's voice.
"Jay? What the hell is going on?" Ione asked.
"Nothing" said the Panda.
"Well i put them on Floor 22" Ione said.
"Good can we take Jibbi?" The Panda asked.
"Yes" Ione asked.
"Yes Mission..." Aapo shouted.
"Aapo?" Ione said. "Are you really a panda" Ione asked.
"Yes Yes" Impetuous' voice said.
"Panda voice Imp Panda voice!" Aapo whispered
"Yes Yes" Impetuous said in the panda voice.
"Wait a minute.
Ione touched the panda.
"YOU'RE NOT REAL!" Ione said.
Impetuous lifted up the head.
"I know" Impetuous said.
Jay, Callie, Aapo and Impetuous got out of the suit. Jay got Jibbi's hand and they ran.
Ione went after them.
"In the elevator!" Jay said.
They went in.

The music played.
Dong. Floor 34.
Dong. Floor 33.
Dong. Floor 32.

Dong. Floor 23.
Dong. Floor 22.
"STOP!" Impetuous yelled.
"Where are the Dj decks?" Aapo asked.
Jibbi looked and pointed.
Callie picked them up.
They got back in the elevator.
The music played again.
Dong. Floor 21.
Dong Floor 20.

Dong. Floor 3.
Dong. Floor 2
Dong. Floor 1.
Dong. Ground Floor.

Ione was waiting.
"How did she?" Aapo asked.
"FORGET THIS!" Callie said. She pulled out a handgun and shot Ione in the leg.
"Come on, She'll live!" Callie said.

The staff with Jibbi made it back to the Uk offices fine. Within 6 months they repaired all the habbo hotels. Lost_witness got his Dj decks.

But 6 months after:

"FLOOR 35!" Dubya said. All he saw was the panda costume!

2hd.
11-02-2005, 07:38 PM
a brilliant story ,btw wasnt it becs tht was called Rebecca???

Kardan
11-02-2005, 07:40 PM
Don't ask me i just chose a random name i only know Dion's name. (And maybe callie's)

Seacat
11-02-2005, 09:03 PM
Whoa that must have taken you ages and is very good :) Well done.

Azela
11-02-2005, 10:18 PM
Yep, well done, more rep! :)

I think ione is rebecca btw... :p

Jin
12-02-2005, 09:52 PM
Well Done Kardan on your story it definatly shows some very creative writing skills almost enough for dionysus to go to the trouble of kidnapping you and making you write his adventures.

Story Stuck ;)
From 12 February 2005 till 26 February 2005

Kardan
12-02-2005, 09:53 PM
I should write an article about bad reeping now....


:o Stickyed... mmmmmm Sticky

Kardan
13-02-2005, 03:45 PM
Sorry for double posting i cant edit. But i want to say thx to :Jin: for stickying and everyone else for the ideas.

Jin
26-02-2005, 12:50 AM
Thread Unstuck ;)

gregzilla
26-02-2005, 01:16 AM
i only read the first 5 pages and that toook me an hour
i can't read the rest
well done :eusa_clap :eusa_clap +REP

ramjet
26-02-2005, 10:42 AM
wow kardan its gr8 well done 10/10 voila etc etc

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