small lava lamp, second alt.

[J0SH]

Okay, it was just a quickie inspired by roaddemon, 100% done in paint.

http://www.****************/uploads/876d4eaa36.png

[Ramon]

haha 10/10 + rep :P simple but nice!

[J0SH]

thanks dude [: <3

[Ramon]

:8 No prob

[J0SH]

wooooot, lols.

[Joord]

Its quite good 8/10. I have'nt even done a first alt yet xP.

[J0SH]

I'm sure you'll be good its simple.

Gl for your first alt lol (L)

[Collected]

Sorry, but it doesn't really look like a lava lamp..

1. Too Small
2. Wierd Shape

4/10

Since it is your second alt and I see you did tried hard, I'll give you +rep too. :P

Edit: You got the REP.. ;) (I forgot to write something in.. lol :) )

[J0SH]

Cheers, how can i improve?

[Ramon]

haha Joord lets see what you got :P,
Josh make it a bit bigger next time :) also good idea to look at a real life picture of what your going to draw first to get a better idea :)

[Rusteh]

It's so weird.. I don't like it, sorry. You also put "u" instead of "you", and that isn't how it comes out when you look in the catolouge.

4/10

[Ramon]

Lol ive seen mistakes like that alot its nto a big deal :l

[Collected]

I wasn't sure how to tell you what you need to fix, so I just fixed and changed a bit myself..

I think it looks like bubble lamp now:
http://www.****************/uploads/b2df9e848f.png

:P Bye

[Scouse]

I dont really like it sorry, its to small. But as its your first alt 7/10

[Joord]

Lol not much i got. ill whip up some ****** thing :) im going to do a lamp this post inspired me xP. Oh yes got to give you you're rep paint.

[Ramon]

lol Ye :P good luck with the alt

[Joord]

:o didn't know that word was filtered sorry mods. :P

[roaddemon]

Heh, lol.
How did i inspire it?

[Crocopix]

haha 10/10 + rep :P simple but nice!

don't be silly

3/10

[J0SH]

Heh, lol.
How did i inspire it?

because u done something like that and it gave me the idea lols.

And croco don't be so mean just cos ure better than most people at pixel work u don't need to be so harsh.

[Ekalb]

because u done something like that and it gave me the idea lols.

And croco don't be so mean just cos ure better than most people at pixel work u don't need to be so harsh.
Oh please.
If you are going to do any art and post it learn how to deal with critisism.
This alt is hardly an 8/10 barely a 4
As said you should use a refference picture because this is nothing like a lava lamp.
Some bad shapes and bad shading used.
Its also a small piece that really should be near perfect as its hard to get something that small wrong.
It is true that croco should have backed his arugment up with reasons as to why the rating he gave was low but for a piece like this his rating was hardly harsh.
To be improved:
Draw it again using a refference
Thing about light sources and where to put appropriate shading.
Change the text to 'you' instead of 'u'
Ok thanks

[Many]

'tis cool josh.
homie*

[J0SH]

It was only my second alt.

I've got this big light in my room, when u put it on it bubbles and it changes colour, i might do that.

And i can deal with critisim tyvm, i just said don't be so harsh theres a difference :rolleyes:

[Ekalb]

It was only my second alt.

I've got this big light in my room, when u put it on it bubbles and it changes colour, i might do that.

And i can deal with critisim tyvm, i just said don't be so harsh theres a difference :rolleyes:
If its a 3/ alt why is a 3/10 harsh?
There is also something funny i picked up in your sig but that is best not to be discussed here but pm.

[J0SH]

Cos it was my second and i tryed, he just said

don't be silly 3/10.

he didn't tell me how to improve etc.

[Ekalb]

Cos it was my second and i tryed, he just said

don't be silly 3/10.

he didn't tell me how to improve etc.
A small amount of people tell you how to improve
and if its your second alt you think you should get extra marks?
He was saying dont be silly to the person who gave you 10/10
I do not wish to continue this.
Just think about your alt
Think about my comment
Think about what comments are sensible and good and what ones are rediculous.
You will be surprised

[J0SH]

Okay. I'm going to finish this and make it better, i will search a picture on google to make it look good, as i don't have a lava lamp.

I'm not sure where to shade or how to shade to good yet.
So is there any tutorials that can help me, i know that u pretend there is a sun or something and u shade with brighter/darkers shades of one colour.

[Crocopix]

Cos it was my second and i tryed, he just said

don't be silly 3/10.

he didn't tell me how to improve etc.

there is nothing to improve,

maybe 1 point: try to make it look like a lavalamp

[Art]

LMAO ^^ That is true though..... doesnt look anything liek a Lava Lamp...

[J0SH]

I tryed =/ I aint seen u attempting any alts.

[Azza]

its not very habbo-like
5/10 nice attempt xP

[J0SH]

Thanks +rep for being kind, unlike some people on this forum.

[Art]

Who are simply honest.....

[Lozzie]

I like it, sort of, but it isn't much of a lava lamp.
Maybe make it more of a lava lamp shape with little blobs in it?
It would have to be much bigger that way.
Also, the furni mission is a bit long, maybe make it a bit shorter like
"For all your urban needs..."
Or
"Recovered from the shrine of Lord Hippy."
:eusa_clap
Oh and plus rep as it's your second

[bingoking]

Is simple but great 10/10 +rep

[Lucozade]

Thanks for comments, i'll be returning all rep at 3:00pm thats when i'm unbanned on josh.

i thank you all.

[J0SH]

yay im unbanned.

[MrMcQuackOpotumas]

Cant really tell what it is, if you hadnt of said. Text language in the description.. is............... yeah.

[RLY-CRAIG?]

Looks pretty good, but could have some more detail 8/10

[Crocopix]

Is simple but great 10/10 +rep

O rly? If this is an 10/10, what is a pic of roboevil then? 100000/10?

Damn, come on, thats NOT a 10/10

[i luv rosie]

- Doesn't look like a lava lamp.
- Tiny.
- Doesn't resemble ANYTHING to me.
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4/10.
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And don't ****z on me because I didn't like it pls.
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Try making it larger, and more detailed and less boxy.

[iAdam]

Not isometric but good for second alt, 10/10

[ReInfected]

Thats a lava lamp? o.O 2/10

[Railed]

Stop complaining about my babe's lava lamp (h). 11/10.