Dubble Dispenser

[brodeo]

Seeing as dubble has arrived to Habbo Hotel UK let us celebrate by turning habbo cola machines into the Dubble Dispensers! As you can see it's modeled on a chocolate bar!

Dubble Choc
Get paid. Fairtrade™
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1354/dubble2fc.png

I'd like to see your comments. (and maybe spot the error!)

[Pillow]

erm.... thers a invisible man holding the dubble and whats a dubble ?

[brodeo]

On the right is what it would be like in a Habbo hand. Dubble is fairtrade chocolate which you can get from the ice cafe.

[Pillow]

o i get it , its good ..... o.O even better than my super pie , na actually maybe not

[,Alexx.]

Thats good! 10/10 + Rep. Shame you couldn't fit the E on the dubble though lol.

[Mr.Sam]

the word dubble dosen't have a e on the end - do i win? :]

Looks great :]

[brodeo]

roar you got it ;) lolol

[Pillow]

o i saw that but i didnt understand the game or the machine :l
; look at my super pie alt it owns this

[Leuven]

10/10.

Shame there is no E :P

[Pillow]

You should make it saying dubble going downwards so it would fit o.O
and maybe -rep for such a good idea from me

[Pillow]

ahhhh noooooooooo i said -Rep and you gave me +Rep , ahhhhhhh:eusa_wall

[brodeo]

What's wrong with +rep?

[Pillow]

Its green ! eww

[Art]

I like it. +REP

[Charlie]

Wow, i like it. And i didn't notice the missing e. 10/10 +rep.

[brodeo]

Thanks all :D

[Azza]

9/10
could do with bit more height buts its really good xP
+ rep xp

[brodeo]

Hehe, thanks :D

[Adam$]

Looks good, as pointed out, there's no E. But I was thinking, where do you make your selection? ;]

[brodeo]

You hump the machine and the bar comes out.

[[Chris]]

You hump the machine and the bar comes out.


lmao its good 10/10

[brodeo]

Thanks Mr.Chris :)

[Juicette]

It's good. Weird but good. 10/10.

[Juicette]

Sorry about double posting. But I found the same alt on this site. Or is it you? http://www.zhabbo.com/showthread.php?t=139

[iAdam]

Another great alt, 10/10.

[brodeo]

Thanks DJ-Simpson



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[Tiked]

10/10 Cheep.

Brilliant Work

I loved the HXTV Studios aswell Brilliant

+ Rep

[Xero]

Just some simple criticism for now. The main problem you have is angles, the two sides just don't meet properly. I made a quick edit to show you what I mean.. It wouldn't have to be exactly like this (e.g. the bump may be removed on the reverse side) but yours would still be out of whack.

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3350/dubbleditic4.gif

Get rid of the black lines, black lines ruin things like this. Black lines should be replaced with darker colours than the midtones, unless between two very similar colours, AND on a protruding edge (an edge that comes OUT at us, in that case it would be a lighter colour). I've also shown this in the above edit, just did it very quickly to the little drops of chocolate on the side for you =)

Your light source seems to be from the left, yet the part where the chocolate or whatever comes out is lit very brightly (the bottom)? I'd suggest making that darker, or atleast adding a shadow. Also, the coin slot seems to be lit from the opposite side, simply flipping it would make it viable.

The amchine only says "DUBBL" not "DUBBLE", dunno whether this was a creative choice or what, but i'd suggest redoing it so that they go vertically down the machine (make sure not they are not totally parralel as there are bumps in the machine) and also making them 3dish.

The shadows on the chocolate part signify that it flattens down into the blue, yet some places below in the blue it also has shadows, which says there is something sticking out, they conflict. Remove one or the other.

That'll do for now. I'll give some criticism on your log bench later If I have time =)

[VersionUpdate]

that is fantastic u r doing really well lately 9/10 theres a small error +rep tho

[brodeo]

Just some simple criticism for now. The main problem you have is angles, the two sides just don't meet properly. I made a quick edit to show you what I mean.. It wouldn't have to be exactly like this (e.g. the bump may be removed on the reverse side) but yours would still be out of whack.

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3350/dubbleditic4.gif

Get rid of the black lines, black lines ruin things like this. Black lines should be replaced with darker colours than the midtones, unless between two very similar colours, AND on a protruding edge (an edge that comes OUT at us, in that case it would be a lighter colour). I've also shown this in the above edit, just did it very quickly to the little drops of chocolate on the side for you =)

Your light source seems to be from the left, yet the part where the chocolate or whatever comes out is lit very brightly (the bottom)? I'd suggest making that darker, or atleast adding a shadow. Also, the coin slot seems to be lit from the opposite side, simply flipping it would make it viable.

The amchine only says "DUBBL" not "DUBBLE", dunno whether this was a creative choice or what, but i'd suggest redoing it so that they go vertically down the machine (make sure not they are not totally parralel as there are bumps in the machine) and also making them 3dish.

The shadows on the chocolate part signify that it flattens down into the blue, yet some places below in the blue it also has shadows, which says there is something sticking out, they conflict. Remove one or the other.

That'll do for now. I'll give some criticism on your log bench later If I have time =)

Ya, most of that i edited for my Habbo Football alt entry, but unfrotuneately i can't find it in my files :(

[Xero]

I'd suggest editing it again =)

[Sir-Cameron]

Thanks DJ-Simpson
BUMPED! :l
anyway its alright?

[scubadiva]

A well executed alt, but I personally hate it. I hate the colours, the shape, the spelling mistake, EVERYTHING about it, I hate. It makes my stomach sick. So, well shaded and made, but for some reason I don't like it. No offence meant.

[Wig44.]

9/10, very good!

[Decapitated!]

Another error.

Look theres a small Bumb sticking out.
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/5858/weerordq8.png (http://imageshack.us)

[simon305]

sorry dont like 3/10