My Habbo Building - Improved

[StripedTiger]

I took some of your tips and advice and improved my work.
I'm still not that happy with it although your comments and stuff helped me be a bit more confident and proud :)

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y214/steph-04-/alterationimproved.png

this is my improved version. I think theres still a bit more to be done?
ideas, advice, comments and help all welcomed xD

[Nemo]

WOW..... JUST WOW!!!!!!!!!! and.... +rep x] how long it take u

[StripedTiger]

few days for making the other one and a few days for improving it?

[roaddemon]

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

[Pawf]

The roofs [sp?] look too plain, maybe add like a swimming pool or something?

EDIT: Also the corner nearest the front seems wrong. The wall either side has two shades of yellow whereas the corner only has one, also the direction it is going looks impossible :s

[WHANGFACE]

Thats awesome Steph! ;D

[Disaronno]

Nice 8/10

[Ashhizzle]

10/10

Love It! This Probably Sounds Stupid But What Abbout Animating It? Mabye A Lift Or Somthing?

[Menshevik]

I agree with Smiffla, the roofs (yeah, that's how you spell it) seem a bit too plain. Add a swimming pool, or like pipes comming out of the top, the the air-conditioning pipes, and a way to get to the top of the building.
Like this kinda stuff.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a148/zanesconfederacy/building.jpg

[Pawf]

Just noticed too, where is says "Habbo Mall' the 'b's are backwards

[Ashhizzle]

Just noticed too, where is says "Habbo Mall' the 'b's are backwards

PMSL, You really Do Nit Pick Don't Ya :P
Nice Find Though.

[Sir-Cameron]

A lot better...
Roofs plain
The Red thing with the writing 'Habbo Mall' on it is good idea but has far too many errors (e.g. the B's, the writing not in middle, would be better closer together, the banner is closer to windows on one side than other...)

Just couple more improving ideas :)

also on the roof that use to be blue with squares on it, I think you should make that one a swimming pool again (without the squares) and put mini pictures of habbo's swimming in it...
On other roof put air conditioning pipes and things like that.... And some vandilising skateboarders :)

[StripedTiger]

thanks for your help :)

i will proberbly add more to it after my exams :P

tyyy <3

[Jargit]

Impressive. +REP

[DJ-Precocious]

Its good 10/10 but it could be better sort out the roof and habbo mall sign and then i rekon its good enough for elites

[Adam$]

It looks great, it's a large improvement on your other one.

However, on the roof, the structure on the tallest tower (with the pillars on). One side, the railing overlaps the bottom of the building on one side but not on the other, and on "Habbo Hall" the B's are the wrong way round.

sorry, vaig, being quick.

[Lexm]

Thats excellent! Very nice work! 10/10 + Rep


Keep it up!

[kel]

10/10 but roof is abit plain maybe add a heli pad or swimming pool like the others said nice thou ;)

[Herman]

It's lovely, but like everyone else said, the roof's plain. But from what I can see now it's pretty good. +Rep.

[Punky]

hehehe the b's are backward.... O.o...It's pretty coolios..better than anything i could do. 8/10 (add to the roof and make the b's right lol).

[=Jen=]

:o REP!!

[Thelilaznboy]

holy cow! 10 out of 10!!!!