my 3rd go

[munkeyslum]

way hay i posted it in the rite area for once! :) lol! this is my 3rd try at this, rate out of 10 please, i went a little wrong on the gun because it is pointing up slightly and it is not ment to be, http://i6.tinypic.com/157oymc.png

[J0SH]

wow u've improved a lot.

its cool gun is wrong lol, nice shading.

8/10.

[Ramon]

its nice just the gun is pointing up a bit :P
7/10

[Joord]

What Ramon said. :) 6/10

[Disaronno]

You mf the neck a bit :S
Shouldnt a gun be straight

4/10

[munkeyslum]

thanks you guys, im making a new 1 as i type this, all im saying is its got something to do with summer and its going to take me ages to make because im in the middle of moving lol :)