Microwave

[DJ-Precocious]

One of my best alts yet, but it is I Know way way way to big for habbo hotel so im not sure if im posting it in the wrong subforum, so if i did then move it for me.

As usual C+C and out of 10 plz

[Ramon]

Some of the lines are too thick and one of the lines in a bit woncky also its abit plain? :P 6/10 sorry

[DJ-Precocious]

Some of the lines are too thick and one of the lines in a bit woncky also its abit plain? :P 6/10 sorry

Whoops didnt realise gimmie 10 mins and i will fix it

[Collected]

Umm, what ^ Said and it's a bit too big! :D

5/10.. sorry :)

[DJ-Precocious]

I did say it was too big for habbo, it wasnt intended for habbo but i couldnt tell wheather i should put it here or in another subforum. sorry mate

Oh and ramon this is my updated version (not complete)

i need to know how you add a sorta transparent screen to it ive seen them but i dont know how to do it, any ideas????

[Ramon]

Lol much better also one wa of doing it with paint is to get a darker shade blue and go over the bit that way it will have a kind of transparent look, if u look on some of the habbo hotels windows ull see what i mean

[DJ-Precocious]

Thanks a bomb mate. lol

Here's another update its not that good but i like it, it looks sorta like a transparent screen.

[Ramon]

:P have ago at it and let me see

[DJ-Precocious]

Done it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i finally found out why it looked weird now look at the final masterpeice lol

[Ramon]

Much better your getting the hang of this well done!!

[Joord]

quite good. Add more buttons. 7/10

[J0SH]

Theres soup in the bowl, btw.


The stuff on the side are ventalation, i edited it.


http://www.****************/uploads/b6b041cd76.png
/ did i make it worse? lol.

[DJ-Precocious]

I added what both of you decided would look good, apart from the soup lol.

[J0SH]

Lol the mushy green pea soop was leet.

Cool thats better 8/10 ure improving.

[DJ-Precocious]

I dunno what else to make now or how to change this.

[UDunKnow]

not anoth shade.

[Gamahu]

Heres Some Constructive Criticism...First of all...the window on the microwave has no line of different colours showing that light is deflecting off it..and the lines too think..and you havent paid enough attention to the buttons either...

Good Try Tho...4/10...Not Bad... Good Luck WIth Your Next One!!!

:D Gamahu :D

[DJ-Precocious]

Yet some more changes hope its better and keep the C+C coming

[Ramon]

:S the vents are terrorible now! the shading on them is too dark nowthey were fine before just maybe a bit more shading but the buttons are better though

[ReInfected]

That would look awesome if it was Habbo size.

[DJ-Precocious]

It actually wouldnt cos there wouldnt be any Detail.

oh and i got rid of the new vents and replaced them to the old ones.

[Josh_1]

Heres Some Constructive Criticism...First of all...the window on the microwave has no line of different colours showing that light is deflecting off it..and the lines too think..and you havent paid enough attention to the buttons either...

Good Try Tho...4/10...Not Bad... Good Luck WIth Your Next One!!!

:D Gamahu :D


Don't think you know one thing about rating / making alts or C&C.

And stop, hitting ure shift key every few letters.

He tryed okay, it don't deserve a 4 its better than a 4.

*8*

[DJ-Precocious]

Thanks mate.

[Josh_1]

No probs, i'll rep u when i get 25 posts then rep u on Josh.

[DJ-Precocious]

Thanks a load.

[Josh_1]

You
Are
Welcome.

[DJ-Precocious]

Anymore C+C would be great or any ideas for a new alt, Anyone can give me ideas even if you dont know much bout pixel art

[J0SH]

A tea pot, it would be hard but is good practise etc.

[J0SH]

Wouldn't let me edit.

4 rep points for you, repped u on my other accounts.

[DJ-Precocious]

Thanks if i had more than 1 account i would give you more.

[J0SH]

don't worry, lol.