Skatepark V1 WIP

[handsomedante]

ok this is my first version. Alot of errors i know and i need to sort out the guy with the video cameras eyes. He looks like a toad :S
plx Rate /10 ;]http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h290/louisg93/skatepark1.png

[Jamie.]

thats nice, not sure about the skate boards sorry

[DJ-Precocious]

Very good, just a little bit more shading on the ramp where it drops down because it would be darker than the flatter bit, so just some more attention to detail and it is worthy of 10/10 but at the moment 8/10 + rep for your hard work!!!

[handsomedante]

Yh boards wer bit tricky ;[
and teh Ramp will be complete in V2 ;)

[Jamie.]

Yh boards wer bit tricky ;[
and teh Ramp will be complete in V2 ;)
ye boards look tricky, i think u have made a good attempt wd :P

[handsomedante]

;) tyvm ;]
i like good comments ;D

[Jamie.]

Forgot to say, plus repzor xD

[handsomedante]

;D -hugz0rs- you sweet man :D

[Jamie.]

no problem, u deserve it

[handsomedante]

;o i usally get a "ur a noob at alt0rz" on this forum ;[
u are kind ;] +rep

[Frank459]

well done dante.
Liking it so far :)

Tip :-

If you are having trouble with the skateboards why not go to the habbox dress up game. Get a skateboard there and modify it up a bit. Or you could use that one for a little rough guide or somthing :)

[Joord]

I'm not much of a skater but that is alright, maybe add some more things, like that thing you "grind on." 8/10 +repage.

[Oliver46]

The skateboard is very tilted and you need to add more shading.

RATING: 7/10

[PaintYourTarget]

-The ramp needs to be alot smoother, atm the edges look very jagged.
-Also the ramp needs shading, with it getting lighter towards the bend and then darker again as it smooths out onto the flat.
-The boards are too small, length and width wise. They need to be about the width of a Habbo shoe, and the length on a habbos shoulder, before curving upwards at the nose and the tail. The ends are also too square.
-There are alot of errors on the wood effect on the top of the ramp. Perhaps you could also add some texture to it aswell?

[djcafc]

hus dante lol

[Call]

A rail ;)
v nice so far

[Ramon]

Dont like the skateboards or the big ramp, its abit out of shape. Not too keen on any of it really sorry, 6/10

[tentical.200]

Yer thats pretty Cool . Just If the Guy on the halfpipe Dropped in He wuld stack cus it goes from curvy to strait .

And the guy doing the trick looks abit stiff with hands beside him Try move them . Othaz Are already been said .

Erm yer that cool . 7/10

[StripedTiger]

more shading is needed on the ramps
and the skateboards need work :P

apart from that i like it :) 7/10

[Braffen]

Other than some messy lines, and the skateboards, it's really great! Good job, and keep editing it. I can't wait to see the finished product!

[chubbzilla]

thats god but the boards need changing and i guess u are already gonna shade the quater pipe