Sandy Beach

[HondaRyda]

Its still being worked on, but yeah, here it is so far.

http://i6.tinypic.com/16k5hu9.jpg

Sorry for the small pic

[Joord]

It's Ok maybe get some parasols ? 6/10 so far.

[Nick-]

Its not bad in its current state
i like the use of oriental screens/marquees for the changing rooms

Problems i can see include, the white pillows (dont think youd find them on a beach :P), the amount of litter on the beach; do you not have litter pickers? lol. The star looks a bit random and out of place and i would suggest putting some white/blue doormats in the sea on different levels to create a wave effect

[HondaRyda]

Oh, yeha, sorry, i forgot to mentuion about paras, im gonna put a few down.

The star is the sun
And the litter... it's a beach. Theres always beer bottles around.
And maybe the pillows arent in the right place, but everyone has pillows, to lie on and such.

[Nick-]

Well i did try and give C+C but youve just thrown them all back
The whole point of making a review thread is to see the opinions of what other people think need improveing, not to shoot down ideas you dont agree with... :S

[Ibs]

I know this will probably sound really nitpicky, but the xmas puddings look out of place. If you're on a beach you want to have cold foods and it'd be in the summer so xmas wouldn't really be on your mind. Have something else there, such as eaten hams perhaps.