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Adam$
07-07-2006, 06:43 PM
New building for AK Enterprises. Please leave CC, and tell me how I may improve.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b30/Admz/final_three.png

Joord
07-07-2006, 06:46 PM
OhMyGod, that is well good :) ill give it a 10/10 +rep.

roaddemon
07-07-2006, 06:46 PM
HAH!
Cool. =-]

10/10 + Rep and elites plss.

Kasabian
07-07-2006, 06:54 PM
Mr.Adam, It still needs a car.

=D.

10/10 Elites. I'd rep if i could.

[Chris]
07-07-2006, 06:58 PM
10/10

and road did you get permission to urs Curt's av?

sorry just asking

Ratastrophe
07-07-2006, 06:58 PM
10/10
You could improve by putting Habbos there
+rep anyways!

Adam$
07-07-2006, 06:58 PM
10/10
You could improve by putting Habbos there
+rep anyways!
No thank you. I'd prefer if Habbos were not on my alteration.

Nemo
07-07-2006, 07:09 PM
Very good 9.99x9999999999/10 :}

Jord
07-07-2006, 07:12 PM
10/10 & elites.

Collected
07-07-2006, 07:19 PM
I am sorry but I give it 9.5/10 and I don't think it should be in eltes yet..

The plants and the door doesn't look right.. If you fix I might give it 10/10 and maybe elites.. :)

Nemo
07-07-2006, 07:27 PM
I am sorry but I give it 9.5/10 and I don't think it should be in eltes yet..

The plants and the door doesn't look right.. If you fix I might give it 10/10 and maybe elites.. :)thats true the door looks like it was drawn on wid chalk x] and the flowers look blurry =S

Adam$
07-07-2006, 09:17 PM
The door is meant to be a glass pane, with an inner door, and the plants were rather complicated.

credit with brickwork: http://www.deviantart.com/view/19058171/

Ramon
07-07-2006, 09:25 PM
I dont think its that special dont understand why everyone is saying "10/10 elites" im not saying its bad because it is nice ;s lol...8/10

Ekalb
07-07-2006, 11:36 PM
I am sorry but I give it 9.5/10 and I don't think it should be in eltes yet..

The plants and the door doesn't look right.. If you fix I might give it 10/10 and maybe elites.. :)
You saying whether its "Elites" or not does no way determine wheather it gets to the Elite Forum.
Looks nice Adam - I presume the company had to move because of those darn vandals?
Anyways. Looks good but can be improved.
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8749/akbuilding6jx.png

Adam$
08-07-2006, 06:12 AM
You saying whether its "Elites" or not does no way determine wheather it gets to the Elite Forum.
Looks nice Adam - I presume the company had to move because of those darn vandals?
Anyways. Looks good but can be improved.

Heh, yeah. But anyway, thank you for your CC, it was presented well and easy to understand. I'll get cracking tomorrow.

Menshevik
08-07-2006, 06:37 AM
Add a car and then it's elites.<3

Adam$
10-07-2006, 10:58 AM
Add a car and then it's elites.<3
I soo can't do cars. >.<

And I need to get cracking.

Gunshot
10-07-2006, 12:00 PM
wow 10/10

Frank459
10-07-2006, 12:58 PM
Adam just let me say.

If you dont want Habbo's to be in your alteration then its not an other habbo alteration?


*Rant over*

I like it overall though. 9/10

mr.parasols
10-07-2006, 02:35 PM
Windows aren't opaque :) And give them depth and shade, there not the same colour on both sides of the building :D Also, adding alot of variation of foliage is a really good way to fill space. Get rid of un needed black lines, and apply shadows.

Also, go over the mountain dew poster and pixelise it, otherwise it looks out of place.

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