Alt Made on paint.

[Ashhizzle]

OK I Made it on paint, Its Basically A Little room thats like a mini disco ;]
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/3197/1stalt7lf.png (http://imageshack.us)

Please don't just say its rubbish, say what's rubbish And how i can improve.

[Danzilla]

Change the colours of there shadows ;P 4/10 If you do the shadows, 7/10. :D

[Wayne]

Looks good, maybe add a door, some disco lights on the door, music station, and the colour of the shadows. ;) 8/10

[Nemo]

many errors which i have circled inthe picture below:
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/6904/minidisco6jq.png also the colours are a bit light and the lights going round each square are not the right colour coz thats the colour from the original room and this is basicly jus a recolour..

edit: also how do they get in? they fly in? there shuld b a door .........

[jake_blacker]

yer pretty kl 8/10

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8558/1145714037914678wj.gif (http://imageshack.us)

[Ashhizzle]

OK, I'll try and do some of that now. Thanks Guys.

Edit: It's Hard Making Light On Paint.

[chubbzilla]

i always make my alts on paint , paint is the best thing for alts

[Ashhizzle]

You bumped my thread.
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/6250/1stalttake25ek.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Eoin]

Funky :P

[dj-viper]

nice a little better maybe change the chadowes now? 6/10

[Zuar]

I Like It ..... But Am Half Blind Anyway So I Can't Notice Errors Anyway 10/10 :eusa_clap

[J0SH]

many errors which i have circled inthe picture below:
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/6904/minidisco6jq.png also the colours are a bit light and the lights going round each square are not the right colour coz thats the colour from the original room and this is basicly jus a recolour..

edit: also how do they get in? they fly in? there shuld b a door .........


Theres the errors, and it doesn't deserve a ten.

[Ashhizzle]

nice a little better maybe change the chadowes now? 6/10
Shadows are a slightly draker grey, if you look closely.

I Like It ..... But Am Half Blind Anyway So I Can't Notice Errors Anyway 10/10

Even i think thats OTT

[Nemo]

y did u not use my cc wen it was like the best on this thread ;l i even wasted my time editing ur pic finding the errors and then uploading then posting and u dont even use it or say ty =l

[Joord]

many errors which i have circled inthe picture below:
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/6904/minidisco6jq.png also the colours are a bit light and the lights going round each square are not the right colour coz thats the colour from the original room and this is basicly jus a recolour..

edit: also how do they get in? they fly in? there shuld b a door .........
Minime you missed a few errors, like on the poster. And maybe add a disco ball :P 5.5/10.

[Nemo]

Minime you missed a few errors, like on the poster. And maybe add a disco ball :P 5.5/10.i missed a few so what, im not perfect :P

[Crimson]

It's quite good, although;

it needs some shading,
make the purple disco lights a little bit transparent (using PS or any other programmes that allow you to do this)
and try edit some of the pixel errors.

overall, 6/10. Nice attempt, I like you creativity.