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Everlong
10-07-2006, 12:33 AM
Ive already posted a small version of this but i decided to make it in to a normal room instead of just a part of a room. I got the idea after seing a similar alt using a mountain dew machine, all of the the non habbo furni i made from scratch.

Rate out of 10 C&C ...the usual lol

http://img448.imageshack.us/img448/8894/habbocola4uj.png

Hope you like it :D

Albion
10-07-2006, 12:36 AM
love it, except the letters on the wall look wierd

[+rep]

crans
10-07-2006, 12:38 AM
love it, except the writing on the wall should be slanted ?

[+rep]

Agreed, the writing is just lol puts it off.

Part from that its good.

Collected
10-07-2006, 12:40 AM
Yep. change the writing and shade the counter like all the other furni.. :D

7/10 for now..

Everlong
10-07-2006, 12:40 AM
Ty for the comments ill try and sort that out now, ill post the altered one in a min :)

Albion
10-07-2006, 12:41 AM
oh kay

Everlong
10-07-2006, 12:50 AM
Any Better? Ive changed it so its at the right angle but it looked wierd with the orange outline so i took it off.

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/3129/habbocola5dn.png

Albion
10-07-2006, 12:53 AM
looks a bit plain there now.

Everlong
10-07-2006, 12:56 AM
Some people are hard to please lol :P ah well im quite proud of it, its the first full room alteration ive done in a while :)

Albion
10-07-2006, 12:57 AM
soz :)

i was just saying

Everlong
10-07-2006, 01:00 AM
Np its better when people say whats wrong with an alteration without saying " oh thats rubbish" or "your alts are crap" i can only improve if i know where im going wrong :D

:Alpha
10-07-2006, 01:00 AM
Ive already posted a small version of this but i decided to make it in to a normal room instead of just a part of a room. I got the idea after seing a similar alt using a mountain dew machine, all of the the non habbo furni i made from scratch.

Rate out of 10 C&C ...the usual lol

http://img448.imageshack.us/img448/8894/habbocola4uj.png

Hope you like it :D


Tell me if Im wrong but this is one of your first alt right?

Its just copy/paste and size, but everything have a start.. and I like it :)

7.5/10 -> Theres space for improvements + I like your idea :)

Id suggest you to change colours and make it more realistic. Just make test and get experience.

+Rep

Everlong
10-07-2006, 01:12 AM
Its not my first alt...

Its not just a copy/paste job

If you look carefully you will notice i have made:
- the resized room
- the stairs
- the railing/barrior
- the counter with sink and cupboards
- the extended iced bar

and i have recoloured everything to match the habbo cola theme.

I know theres alot to improve on i just don't want people thinking its just a copy/paste alteration, i spent alot of time making this and alot of it was doing pixel work to make walls, stairs, barriers ect..

Buzle
10-07-2006, 01:35 AM
Yea, I can't do NEARLY as good as you did man.
10/10+rep
Good Job! :eusa_danc

Lexm
10-07-2006, 01:36 AM
very very nice, a small idea turned into something nice, I think you could add some more things to it, eg around the door, and maybe the other style cola machine, and some other posters you could make,

10/10 + Rep.

well done

Everlong
10-07-2006, 01:46 AM
Do you mean the mountain dew machine when you say "other style cola machine" ?

Lexm
10-07-2006, 05:12 AM
most likley

joboman
10-07-2006, 05:16 AM
you didn't really make a lot of the things yourself. you just put different things together. try to make more things from scratch instead of using furni that already exists. 7/10

Azza
10-07-2006, 09:33 AM
8.5/10
its good.
the writing on wall doesnt really match though.
Seems lack varity w/e spellnig is xP
still good though good mountain dew! >:D

Catchetat
10-07-2006, 09:41 AM
Good stuff there :) +REP

crazykid37
10-07-2006, 11:19 AM
i like it but the words do kill it alittle still 9/10 [+rep]

Everlong
10-07-2006, 12:20 PM
thanks for the comments guys, i tried working out the writing but it didnt turn out well lol :P im going to try another peice of furni to use for a room, its making a whole room based around one thing lol.

Troubling
10-07-2006, 12:30 PM
I THINK ITS BRILL EXCEPT THE DOOR CHANGE IT TO GRAY 9/10

Joord
10-07-2006, 02:55 PM
I like it, I think it should be a public room, if so needs to be bigger. :) 8.5/10.

Wayne
10-07-2006, 02:57 PM
The room looks awesome, no additions in my opinion. 11/10+rep.

Papershop
10-07-2006, 04:48 PM
Best alt you done i reckon. Try making the door to look like a normal one, rather than just a black square. Part from that its is exceedingly good (like mr kipling would say :] )

79p XxX

Zuar
10-07-2006, 05:03 PM
Yeah I Can't Even Make Alts As Gd As That :P 10/10 :D

dark-as-death
10-07-2006, 05:15 PM
1. cool alt 10/10
2. where is this mountin dew alt you talk of?

Dark.

Crimson
10-07-2006, 07:46 PM
It's really good, besides the fact that the lime green gives me a head ache!

lol, i'll give you a 9/10. Very nice.

Everlong
10-07-2006, 11:10 PM
Best alt you done i reckon. Try making the door to look like a normal one, rather than just a black square. Part from that its is exceedingly good (like mr kipling would say :] )

79p XxX

79p :D not heard from you in ages lol.

thanks for the comments everyone, ill be working on something new as soon as i get a good idea :)

Papershop
11-07-2006, 05:57 PM
Ino, i haven't been on in a while + plus ive been on holiday.

:P
Adious Emigos..

=Jen=
11-07-2006, 08:45 PM
Make the letters go the same way as the wall... then it's perfect. 9/10.

kel
12-07-2006, 12:49 AM
tbh its one of the best alts ive seen in a long time your first one was best the writing looked good. ;/

Everlong
12-07-2006, 01:48 PM
Thanks for the comments everyone :D

UDunKnow
21-07-2006, 01:59 AM
10/10 Not Far Off Elite >;o

Everlong
21-07-2006, 02:21 AM
10/10 Not Far Off Elite >;o

Its nowhere near elite quality :l its hard to create 1337 alts.

chicken.hunter
21-07-2006, 10:11 AM
wow nice i wana see it

Everlong
21-07-2006, 10:11 PM
see what?

Hurts
22-07-2006, 04:30 AM
Wow nice. you must of spent ages on it welldone + rep :eusa_clap

sjj8
22-07-2006, 09:03 AM
this is amazing i just wish it was a real habbo room lol

Stab
22-07-2006, 03:34 PM
Its really cool, put some people in it, not green people though, omg bar staff loll.

Unsuspected
23-07-2006, 04:01 PM
most of it is just recolourings and cut and pastes. good job on the belcony and the stairs though, original too.

Menshevik
24-07-2006, 05:30 AM
Looks nice, but door looks a bit small.

Jokerdan!
24-07-2006, 12:11 PM
I Love It Should be on elite You rawk keep it up

CrazyCali
25-07-2006, 02:25 AM
That is pretty good. Maybe you should add a couple of habbos to make it not look to plain

Everlong
26-07-2006, 11:02 AM
Thanks everyone :), im not going to add anything to this alt. its been a couple of weeks since i made it and i have had the best comments and amount of +rep compared to the rest of my alts :)

Stab
26-07-2006, 11:03 AM
oh yeh ill rep you. forgot.
wont make much difference.

brandon
26-07-2006, 11:03 AM
The letters don't look right, other than that it's a job well done.

ebay
26-07-2006, 12:30 PM
i like it alot and stay on topic guys

Razorblades.
26-07-2006, 02:59 PM
Ooh, Nice Alt. 9/10. <3
+ Rep For Yoo.

Everlong
26-07-2006, 03:55 PM
Thanks :)

Hazza
27-07-2006, 01:28 PM
That Is Wicked Mate, +Rep!

Everlong
02-08-2006, 02:21 PM
Thabks :D i think this is one of my best alts so far :)

?WhyNot?
02-08-2006, 03:29 PM
That's cool, keep it up :)

ItsDave
02-08-2006, 04:21 PM
Too easy, for you anyway. 8/10

Dracolis
02-08-2006, 04:36 PM
I think 7/10 is a reasonable mark for that. Its very green (which is ok but maybe could have introduced some more colours) and I don't really like the lettering on the wall either. It's a good alt though and I couldn't of done any better.

=Jen=
02-08-2006, 04:58 PM
That's kool..

Everlong
03-08-2006, 09:19 AM
Thanks for the comments :D

Everlong
04-08-2006, 04:17 PM
Thanks :D

David.A
04-08-2006, 04:26 PM
i need help... what program for making alterations?

Everlong
04-08-2006, 04:42 PM
i need help... what program for making alterations?

I use Paint :D.

take some sreenshots and study some of the habbo stuff if you want to get a good idea on how to make alterations :)

NightSlayer
04-08-2006, 05:03 PM
Thats Well Groovy 10/10 Look my writing's
cola style.

Everlong
04-08-2006, 05:36 PM
Thats Well Groovy 10/10 Look my writing's
cola style.

Lmao, cool thanks for the comment. and if it was you that +repped me it came up grey :( lol

mikebossay
04-08-2006, 06:24 PM
ur good

Everlong
04-08-2006, 09:42 PM
Thanks lol.

DJ-Ali
04-08-2006, 09:48 PM
Ow my eyes sting... 9/10 though.

Robaldinio
05-08-2006, 10:38 AM
Amazing alteration!! I'm very impressed that it was done on Paint! :o

Two things:

I think you should make the writing on the wall much larger and have it on the wall above the counter. Would it be possible to make it like a big Disco sign?? That would be so cool!

Also, the counter with the sink etc needs shading (especially the side that's hidden by the Cola machine).

With those changes made I would give 10/10 deffinately! :)

Vibe
05-08-2006, 10:41 AM
im not too keen on the stairs over than that its ok

Everlong
05-08-2006, 12:50 PM
Thanks everyone :)

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