Grave Yard

[Everlong]

Recently i was offered a job as an alt artist for a website. i was asked to create a test alt to see if my skills are good enough for the job.
this may not be the complete alt but here it is so far
hope you like it :D

The only thing i didnt create is the skulls, spiders and bats as they are teken from habboween furni.

http://img455.imageshack.us/img455/1126/gateandwall5fe.png

[Crimson]

This is cool, maybe some shading on the grass?

8/10, Very good!

[Everlong]

Thanks :) i wasn't too sure how to shade the grass im not realy good at shading large areas lol.

[Danzilla]

Not a bad idea. A few problems though, The gaves are nerely the same hight as a habbo and i thing there to thin. Other then that, Great job. 9/10. :D

[Insanity]

Not Bad, I feel the Headstones need a bit more thickness.
8/10

[Everlong]

The gaves are nerely the same hight as a habbo and i thing there to thin

I thaught they looked, ok i tried having smaller thincker ones but it didn't realy work out, so i chose to go for the tall and thin.

the only thing im not happy with is the grass :/

[Alterate]

Why are there skulls around the place?

[Danzilla]

Hmm... Looks at the 'Grass.' ;P Maby add like little dots or somthing? :P

[Everlong]

Because its a spooky graveyard lol, a regular grave yard would be boring. i just thaught it would make it better, i supose it didn't work...

[Crimson]

Why are there skulls around the place?

Graveyard; scary... come to mind? lol.

[Alterate]

One half coming out of the ground would look so much better than four randomly placed.

[Everlong]

Fair enough, i can't please everyone :)

[Art]

Need more shading on the wall.

[Everlong]

Its suposed to be like a granite wall so it has a smotth surface with a lighter shade of grey where the light hits it.

[Catchetat]

Hmm it isn't dark enough, like as in overall, it's not spooky enough but REP :)

[roaddemon]

Lol, nice.
9/10

[Everlong]

thanks :)

[-sweetyjo-]

You should add shadows of headstones to make it spookier. The bits of skulls where they are shadowed by the stones need to be darker too. 8/10

[Joord]

Maybe a few zombies around, one or two. But I do like it, and as someones said grass needs work. I think you put darker dots over the grass, and then go back over the dots with a even darker shade.

[Everlong]

Ok thanks, im going to practice shading large areas such as grass and pavements :)

[UDunKnow]

8/10 needs more improvement no look right >;]

[Dudeitsme]

The gravyard dirt or grass stuff or whatever that is, looks like you just scribbled, could of used better detail on bricks and the tombstones, i do like the brick floor but thats it,the gate is very wonky and when you try to join up the 2 lines they should not double :S, don't take it as im rude, its just called real c+c 5/10

[Everlong]

Your about the most honest C&C on the forum lol, its about time someone stopped giving 9/10 for all alts and just point out the mistakes:P

[Canada!h23]

Shade the grass. I think this will be good enough for the site ppl lols. If not they're crazy. 8.5-9/10

[Mr.Big]

Recently i was offered a job as an alt artist for a website. i was asked to create a test alt to see if my skills are good enough for the job.
this may not be the complete alt but here it is so far
hope you like it :D

The only thing i didnt create is the skulls, spiders and bats as they are teken from habboween furni.

http://img455.imageshack.us/img455/1126/gateandwall5fe.png


Gravestones are a little thin 8/10.

[JonJon]

Shade the walls and grass then it'll be perfect!

[Duck.]

Why are there skulls around the place?

They got lazy and decided not to bury the whole thing. :p

Nice. I like it. Grass needs something. 8/10