[Alteration] (WIP) Skatepark V5 [Archive]

Punky

12-07-2006, 05:47 PM

Awww look at the one crying :'( he got a hurted knee. Add a girl on skateboard :p. I think it's pretty cool, so far.

handsomedante

12-07-2006, 05:50 PM

;o kk ;]
will do ma freind <3
and yes..hes crying :'(

Punky

12-07-2006, 05:51 PM

*gives huggles to the crying boy*.. Theres on thing bugging me (well tis two but shh), the two people grinding don't have shadows O.o just the boards do.

Lol meh upon closer inspection i see they have lol .....so just ignore that comment... :|

PaintYourTarget

12-07-2006, 06:14 PM

You've totally messed up which lines should be a lighter shade on the ramp and it severely lacks shading.
What the hell are the lines on the ramp btw?
Yeah, and everything I said about one of your other versions but you didn't do.

J0SH

12-07-2006, 06:22 PM

Yes, i agree with above.

handsomedante

12-07-2006, 06:22 PM

yes but i dont really care nor noticed ur requests. other ppl like it. so i dont care ;]

J0SH

12-07-2006, 06:24 PM

Why don't you care? we're giving you cc on how to improve your work? =/ fs, people on this forum take things to seriously.

Crimson

12-07-2006, 06:38 PM

Its good... I envy your skills! http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/7202/goblinnoes3qw.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Although the people on the top of the high ramp dont have shadows!

PaintYourTarget

12-07-2006, 06:51 PM

Its good... I envy your skills! http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/7202/goblinnoes3qw.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Although the people on the top of the high ramp dont have shadows!
What skills?

Why spend your time doing mediocre work to impress some people when if you listen to advice, you can improve and impress the masses.

Adam$

12-07-2006, 06:57 PM

Not bad, but you could improve:

The guy grinding the rail has the position all wrong and hardly any area of his feet are on the board.

The lines on the ramp are not nescessary, or even drawn in perspective to the edges.

The people on the top of the ramp have no shading, neither does the ramp in the top right.

Crimson

12-07-2006, 07:21 PM

What skills?

Why spend your time doing mediocre work to impress some people when if you listen to advice, you can improve and impress the masses.

Shut up you kockey fool! I think he has great skills.

PaintYourTarget

12-07-2006, 07:24 PM

Shut up you kockey fool! I think he has great skills.
Unfortunately, listening to constructive criticism is not one of them, and by thinking he is too good for advice, doesn't that make him the "kockey fool".

Besides, what gives you the right to tell me to shut up?

Colin-Roberts

12-07-2006, 07:32 PM

i agree with crimson shut up we have our rite to our own oppinions and dont diss the opinions of others *** i sound like a stupid mod

PaintYourTarget

12-07-2006, 07:38 PM

i agree with crimson shut up we have our rite to our own oppinions and dont diss the opinions of others *** i sound like a stupid mod
Yeah, and my opinion is that he should learn to handle CC and not think he is too good for it. Also, what gives you the right to tell someone to shut up, especially before your little speach?

Adam$

12-07-2006, 07:40 PM

I'm not that stupid. :rolleyes:

Vibe

12-07-2006, 07:41 PM

10/10 Very Nice

Wootzeh

12-07-2006, 07:59 PM

If you can't take constructive criticism, then don't post at all. You should add shading to the ramp to show that it's going down. You should keep the ramp's side isometric instead of messing it up. The camera guy's shadow is in the wrong place. The people on the ramp don't have shadows. Some skateboards dont' have shadows. The side of the paving isn't lighter on one side. cba write anything else. 6.5/10

Rauhl

12-07-2006, 08:04 PM

cool nice work

Adam$

12-07-2006, 08:05 PM

Also, the ramp is completely the wrong shape.

It starts off curved than it just goes straight?

PaintYourTarget

12-07-2006, 08:06 PM

Seeing as no-one has had the decency to reply to my arguement, I will pose you a question.
If Habbo is rubbish (according to your 'Habbo name') then why waste your time making Habbo alterations? Surely by default, anything that contains habbo avatars etc is also rubbish.
Just a thought ;)

Kasabian

12-07-2006, 08:06 PM

What a load of rubbish.
You keep doing WIP's, I really hope your gearing up for an improvement.
Things are WAY out of proportion. The MP3 player etc.
You haven't listened to ANY c&c given in previous attempts, And if you don't do so now, then you won't go far. Learn from your mistakes.

4/10.

LEARN HOW TO ACCEPT C&C, WE ARE TRYING TO HELP YOU IMPROVE IT. WOW, MAYBE 1 OR 2 PEOPLE LIKE IT, IF YOU ACTUALLY FOLLOW OUR ADVISE, THEN MORE PEOPLE WILL LIKE IT :@

Rant over.

Jord

13-07-2006, 07:19 AM

pmsl owned.

Catchetat

13-07-2006, 02:43 PM

Why would anyone be standing, sitting and standing with emotions lol. It's ok. There shouldn't be black line for the b rown part if you know what I mean. but REP :) btw you should learn to take in C+Cs

Crimson

13-07-2006, 06:20 PM

Besides, what gives you the right to tell me to shut up?

On the other hand what gives you the right of saying "what skills". I understand that he isn't taking the CC the way most people would, which doesnt make him kockey... simply confident, well that is the way i see it. But by you saying he has no skills... What in heavens sake was the point in saying that? I understand you are annoyed by him not accepting your CC but that doesnt mean he has no skills.

Adam$

16-07-2006, 09:59 PM

On the other hand what gives you the right of saying "what skills". I understand that he isn't taking the CC the way most people would, which doesnt make him kockey... simply confident, well that is the way i see it. But by you saying he has no skills... What in heavens sake was the point in saying that? I understand you are annoyed by him not accepting your CC but that doesnt mean he has no skills.
If he doesn't listen to CC, how is he going to improve?

Revivalry

16-07-2006, 10:11 PM

Lol, so when you do a 360 flip you just have an original expression on your face like :l
And whilst sliding a rail it looks like your walking in thin air?
Spend some more time on this and it will look great..

Other than that 7/10

EDIT:

What skills?

Why spend your time doing mediocre work to impress some people when if you listen to advice, you can improve and impress the masses.

Ok now im really angry.. What gives you the right to critisize others work which they spent alot of time on? So what if they cant shade a few places that still doesn't make it right. On ya bike mate, you go and make something like that and then come back..

From First To Last

17-07-2006, 09:09 AM

We are Godzilla You are Japan? I take it you like Lostprophets?

I love em.

handsomedante

17-07-2006, 09:13 AM

yes i like lost prophets
and to reply on mr presidents earlier question i dont like habbo but alts i do. Yes im a very annoying person because i dont take people saying to me they are giving me CC when there actually shouting to me that im crap in other words. I know this is bad, i no im rubbish at alts. But hey..I like it.
so shut up. ;-)

From First To Last

17-07-2006, 09:14 AM