Simple Skatepark [WIP]

[Everlong]

I saw that someone had created a skatepark recently on the forum and to be honest it doesn't resemble any skatepark i've ever seen, so i decided to have a go at creating one that is more realistic.

Its not complete yet as i still need to add shadingand other details.

C&C on what i have done so far, please don't say " needs shading" or anything like that because its only WIP.

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/8785/basicskateparkwip1zh.png

[Matt.]

:o! That is VERY good! A lot better then the other skate park posted on here:P.
10/10 +Rep :-).

[JonJon]

Not being mean, but it is better than the other guy's Skatepark. Not too detailed, it is nicely shaped but it looks too simple so... 8.

[Jord]

Its way better than dante's, your skateboards are cool, 9/10.

Something is missing.

[Wootzeh]

Its way better than dante's, your skateboards are cool, 9/10.

Something is missing.
This is why I don't post here anymore, you post an alt, no matter how crap it is you somehow manage to get 9/10 or over, unless it really is rubbish.

[Jord]

Its a nice alt whats wrong with it?

[Revivalry]

9/10 That is a very good alteration.. Like someone said before, something is missing.. :P

[Jord]

Wouldn't let me edit.

I take that back, 7/10.

I know its a wip but wth is going on?

http://www.****************/uploads/caa2c615fa.png

Those aint proper pixels.

And the small circle theres a random with dot.

[Wootzeh]

For a start the shading iss WAY too badic to get a 7/10 let alone a 9/10

[FrozenWhisper]

Add detail, people, grafitti and stuff.

[Insanity]

Missing Shadows, Its too clean And needs more of a lift, Add litter too May give it character

[Punky]

Why bother posting WIP's its hard to rate as it's not finished. All I can really say is finish it. I can't give proper CC on something that isn't finished.

[Everlong]

Its only WIP its not finished i want to see whats wrong with it before i carry on...simple

[Crimson]

I prefer dante's. Although it is WIP I still think its too basic. I also dont like the balck lines everywhere... maybe colour over a few because its abit excessive.

[JonJon]

I'm a graphics noob, what is a WIP?

[Punky]

I'm a graphics noob, what is a WIP?
Work In Progress

[Joord]

7/10, the grass is to green, if you know what I mean, there was a tut on some site, but unfortunately forgot the site. Put some food packets around there, and maybe *** packets.

[JonJon]

and maybe *** packets.

What packets?

[Everlong]

*** packets.


Yeah, what are you talking about...

[Buzle]

Elites anyone?
10/10+REP!!

[Everlong]

Elites anyone?
10/10+REP!!

Lol, its no where near elite quality and when you say +Rep your suposed to give rep:P you didn't :)

[Crimson]

when you say +Rep your suposed to give rep:P you didn't :)

lol... I think i'm gunna give you some +Rep... seeing as it ist pretty cool.

[Catchetat]

Wooooo can't wait to check out the FULL version of it :) +REP

[Ashhizzle]

Elites anyone?
10/10+REP!!
Sorry, but a WIP doesn't deserve elites does it, LOL
Going good so far. Mabye some graffiti :)

[Punky]

Elites anyone?
10/10+REP!!

Aww check out the newbie ^_^ Lol.

You really need to neaten up your lines dude O.o Like on the ramps and shiz.

[Everlong]

there arn't many pixel errors on the line work, someone posted that one of the lines "not even real pixels" there are alot of lines in habbo that consist of more than one number of pixels they can't always be 2 pixel, 3 pixel lines etc.

[Duck.]

Its way better than dante's, your skateboards are cool, 9/10.

Something is missing.


The skateparks I go to have:


Grafitti
Stickers of brands
Homeless people
Bikers
Bladers "/
Empty bottles


If you added that kinda stuff then I think it'd look pretty good.

Making a skatepark is risky. To many shapes that you hafta get just right. So 7/10

[Adam$]

It is better than dante's, yes.

People post WIP designs to get some idea of what to create in the final design, rather than creating it and then having to change all of it.

It's nice, I'm hoping to see the finished version. Try detailing the floor with a few other shades, and put a gradient on the sloped areas. As people have said, try adding graffiti and stuff.

[simon305]

no bums...

shadow is all thats missing

no stairs in r/l

i cn mk grass effect

[Everlong]

Im finding it realy hard to shade large areas is there any tutorials on it?

[com-bat]

Nice wip you have good drawing skills but whats going on with the pixel mistakes 9 (cant spell error wright i think lol)

[Azza]

9/10
like u said its simple xP

[Thelilaznboy]

nice, 8 out of 10

[Everlong]

Thanks for the comments people :D

[Bef]

Wow that is really good so far. Needs shading put as you said WIP, i gather youl add that in time :P Noice so far. <3

[Everlong]

Thanks, ive kind of given up on this alt now. i don't think there would be much point of adding shading to this as i can do much better line art.

[?WhyNot?]

Excellent! ALMOST elite!

[ItsDave]

Nice. 9/10

[=Jen=]

I love skating. It's awesome <33 x]

[Everlong]

I love skating. It's awesome <33 x]

Me too lol, i only made it because i saw a poor attemp that didnt even have skatable stuff on it xD

[Many]

It's fine for what it is, looks a bit plain but very well done.
8.5/10.

[NightSlayer]

Wow dude, that so rocks, * cough * make a public room with it in, * cough * use skateboards, * cough * lets rock :D

10/10 ! brill :D

[Everlong]

Wow dude, that so rocks, * cough * make a public room with it in, * cough * use skateboards, * cough * lets rock :D

10/10 ! brill :D

Lol, might try that thanks for the comment.

[mikebossay]

gimme tricks u cool

[Moosta]

Not Very Good If You Ask Me

[Everlong]

Not Very Good If You Ask Me

Nobody is asking you personally and the majority of comments and all 30 of the rep points i've had from this alteration tell a different story.

[GodessLove]

I like it 9/10 :eusa_danc

[Everlong]

:D thank you

[Chip.Monk]

Its pretty good, if i had to say one thing, its the shading. It could do with like shading in places to make it look more 3d. Its not bad though, ill say 7/10

[---MAD---]

The skateboards have a few pixel errors.

8/10 for it so far.

[OxfordScholar]

EEEEXXXXCELLENT! Well done - a superb effort. 10/10 :eusa_danc

[:James:]

It's good but the skateboards are a bit out of scale, too small.

[-Dispute]

10/10 thats amazing well done