First Fashion Alt- Very Simple

[-dukes-]

Here it is, please C&C so I can get better :D
http://www.imagemonster.org/getimg/Fasion.gif

[Soyers]

Couple of ideas: Youve lost the outlines on the dress and at the moment it looks unfinished :( also maybe remove the extra wrinkles youve drawn in? because they distract.
Oh and more shading please :)

[.mcgovlau.]

yes like soyers said, you need the black outlines and shading shading ShAdInG :p

[-dukes-]

Thank you