First layout

[Lithium]

hi, this is my first layout, i need help on making it better plz

i havent dont slicing yet because it confuses me, i need to do a tutorial on ithttp://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5154/webtemplatecopyph5.jpg

[Jord]

Get rid of the wires, Its too complex.

Its nice but it has a weird feeling, 7/10 for First.

[Colin-Roberts]

like the banner and navi rest is weird.

[Splinter]

horrible why do you want wires.. it looks like cheese "/

[Lycan]

tiny content!, lol

yeah too many ways, you just want maybe a small border wire related

[Motion]

horrible why do you want wires.. it looks like cheese "/
LMAO.

Anyway take out the wires, and god knows how you expect to fit content in that.

Motion.

[Sygon.]

Too complex for me :(

[nick12]

its alright for your first

[---MAD---]

You need a bigger content box. The 3 boxes need to be the main part of the site..not addons lol.

I like the banner part, thats very nice :).

[Diablo10]

its good for a forst layout

[april]

Your content boxes are too small.

Get rid of the wires, and then stretch them out a bit.

[Slixor]

its really good, but then you look at it again and its really bad :s it seems too blury or is it just me. i like clean and sharp.

[Lithium]

ok i changed it coz of cc
i liked the wires so i kept them but put them at the sides and made boxes bigger
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/7636/newwebtempnp5.jpg

[Chickenblob]

Brill for a first layout. 9/10.
The wires are a bit too much though.

[ADAM:]

Hey

What is that middle content box for?

[Lithium]

the second box is an addon to the first or for other information

[Lithium]

any cc on second?

[[Oli]]

ive seen that wires on tutorial.
just to let u know, them wires and holes u used are meant for signatures, they dont look good on template

anyway, gd for first 6/10

[:Blob]

']ive seen that wires on tutorial.
just to let u know, them wires and holes u used are meant for signatures, they dont look good on template

anyway, gd for first 6/10

You used em on yours

Well , i suppose you actually make them look good

[[Oli]]

You used em on yours

Well , i suppose you actually make them look good

i was talking about the wires he used.
they are to thin or however u type that.

[Lithium]

i didnt use tutorial for them wires btw

[Lithium]

ok here is v3, was just experimenting and was trying to make the c4d come out of banner in2 layout
http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/6778/c4dweblayoutcopyfu6.jpg

[Recursion]

didnt like the 1st. Sorta liked the 2nd and the 3rd is the best just get rid of a little but of the blue things. They make it look better if they were smaller :P