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Impossible
27-07-2006, 09:18 PM
Once upon a time, the end.

Rating and Constructive Criticism.
kasi
27-07-2006, 10:27 PM
Once upon a time, the end.

Rating and Constructive Criticism.
i lol'd at this for some reason x]
brandon
27-07-2006, 10:32 PM
These are getting pretty lame now, there is a spam forum.
Impossible
27-07-2006, 10:35 PM
But this isn't spam... And i did say constructive criticism?
brandon
27-07-2006, 10:36 PM
But this isn't spam... And i did say constructive criticism?
A tad longer would improve it. :rolleyes: 1/10.
Billay
31-07-2006, 11:09 PM
im actually laughing lol.
cictric
31-07-2006, 11:12 PM
Wow, Im deeply touched ...
Nia12
01-08-2006, 07:17 PM
That story really made my day :l lol
Jasmin
03-08-2006, 07:02 PM
It bought tears to my eyes.
Bugsey6
03-08-2006, 07:12 PM
It bought tears to my eyes.

Did the same to me the suspension really got my excited! 10/10 hope it gets made into a film


only small problem i found was how long it was it was kinda too long maybe if it got shortend down a bit :rolleyes:
Thom$
04-08-2006, 06:20 PM
maybe if it got shortend down a bit :rolleyes:

to Hi, the end.

:)
Kukuthebird
05-08-2006, 10:14 PM
uh okay then :]!
Ryan+Joe
06-08-2006, 12:08 PM
well dat woz funny!
stratosphere
04-09-2006, 04:49 PM
I bet you think this is funny dont you?
What?
*sarcastic* Ha Ha Ha

No but seriously that was....heartbreaking. I could smell the romance only at the end they broke up.

But if I WAS Serious I would say "Lol"
omgabear
08-09-2006, 04:06 PM
I'm going to give you a 0 for trying to be funny.

Thats it...
Ashhizzle
08-09-2006, 08:09 PM
I'm going to give you a 0 for trying to be funny.

Thats it...
What he said.. i might go to minus..
Jacketh
09-09-2006, 12:58 PM
It just seemed a bit on-going if you know what i mean, good use of imagery though :) 10/10.
stratosphere
09-09-2006, 04:20 PM
Oh yes and a touch of violence, nice ;)

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