View Full Version : [Alteration] Glorious Habbo Lane - The Finale...*LOOK*
Pimlicoman
28-07-2006, 06:59 PM
I've been working on this for like 3days now as my 3rd alt. I think it's near it's end, but there may be a few little things that can be added apart from the obvious (a car).
So please post with your views and rate /10, thank you.
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3832/kingconstructionsu3.png (http://imageshack.us)
the words "bus lane" on the bus lane =]
1,200th post - Whoppeeeeeee =P
Pimlicoman
28-07-2006, 08:09 PM
Yup :) I tried...and as usual I completely messed it up, i'm no good with words in this habbo format, I hate rounding off letters and stuff. I'm only good with disco's and stuff, but on the floor is a completely different angle.
Skillz
29-07-2006, 12:48 AM
Thats amazinf
what program did you use?
i wanna learn to make alts
alteration
29-07-2006, 06:31 AM
nice, whats area doing there lol
Jahova
29-07-2006, 07:01 AM
Very good, I can't tell you what to do but very good.
10/10 +Rep
- Cow!
Thats amazinf
what program did you use?
i wanna learn to make altsuse paint - look in the tutorials section in the sticky called organized links to tutorials by propergander :)
Pimlicoman
29-07-2006, 09:52 AM
Yup, MS Paint all the way :P
I think this can still have more added, I wanted a little pond instead of them 2 random fruit trees in front of the man and dog...
the bench has pixel errors
the bus lane is too big? and sign is too small
the trees could do with shadows and habbos on path shouldhave shadows
apart from that its quite good ^^
8.5/10
Pimlicoman
29-07-2006, 10:36 AM
The bench does not have a pixel errors, although I know what you're looking at it's just where dark pixel meets black pixel. Also here's the new version with the pond, and the only thing that doesn't have a shadow is the tree's on the path, which will be sorted after this post. And no I don't think the bus lane is too big, I can see a bus just about fitting there, so i've kept a the same size. So I suppose the reasons you've given for not having 10/10 have been corrected, now do I get 10? :P
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/9379/kingconstructionpe1.png (http://imageshack.us)
Catchetat
29-07-2006, 10:58 AM
Pixel error in the line strike thing in the road. The shadows look quite nice but what's with the orange space? The sign post is a bit too short in proportion to the Habbo and there's still pixel error in the brown bench.
Pimlicoman
29-07-2006, 11:05 AM
There is NO pixel error in the brown bench it's a dark brown pixel next to a black pixel, coz you're all so annoyed with it i'll chnage it...The orange space in the road is the bus lane hence the bus stop, and I don't really care how short the bus stop is, it's not meant to resemble the real life ones.
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/2328/kingconstructionsk6.png (http://imageshack.us)
Asheh. ♥
29-07-2006, 12:01 PM
great alt, well done. 9/10.
The Bench's shadow - shouldn't it be straight, not curved at the edge?
I think the pixel error, is, uhh, hard to explain. I'll post a pic.http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/1078/pixulerraev3.png
THINK That's it, looks a bit dodgy, but I'm sure it's ok..
Pimlicoman
29-07-2006, 12:12 PM
Ty for ''showing'' the error, when everyone else was saying there was a pixel error, I was looking in the complete wrong place...
Well i've sorted the bench shadow and the pixel error ouit, and here's the newest version;)
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/5229/kingconstructionse5.png (http://imageshack.us)
Kukuthebird
29-07-2006, 02:28 PM
The bench does not have a pixel errors, although I know what you're looking at it's just where dark pixel meets black pixel. Also here's the new version with the pond, and the only thing that doesn't have a shadow is the tree's on the path, which will be sorted after this post. And no I don't think the bus lane is too big, I can see a bus just about fitting there, so i've kept a the same size. So I suppose the reasons you've given for not having 10/10 have been corrected, now do I get 10? :P
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/9379/kingconstructionpe1.png (http://imageshack.us)
its really good. i dont know what the orange bit is though? :[
8/10
Dazzle
29-07-2006, 02:47 PM
I don't like it that much, most of it is copy and paste and flling in gaps. The path is rather small. The shadows arent very isometric but still keep up the work.
Pimlicoman
29-07-2006, 03:04 PM
God you people really need to read all the posts before posting to see the newr versions being posted, the orange bit in the road is a Bus Lane...
And fish, ther shadows aren't gona e exactly the same as thier body if the suns at a dif angle, maybe u want it so the suns perfect so it's just like another one of them on the floor but i dnt...
and I made the whole environment/background of the picture, obv. the habbo's are pasted...
How stupid would you be to draw a habbo, when you can just paste it, even when people make thier own clothes + accessories for a habbo they paste and edit...i'd like to see some of your work..
Edit: I have now seen some of your work, and quite frankly, it's a load of boloux...no shading or detail at all...
Especially the little town...anyone can make a few Iso boxes and stick windows on them.
Zampo-III
29-07-2006, 03:27 PM
Like calm down
You've got to be able to take criticism
It's nowhere near worth a 10/10
Look at elites - They are 10/10
this is around a 5 im afraid
Still lots of dodgy stuff going on with that bench
Ok Red Circle = Bench problem
Yellow = If it's a brick wall why is the ends just blanks... Do the bricks just all suddenly mould together at the ends?
Um Also that bus stop sicn is slightly whack lol... Shape is awful :S Height is fine because you can get short bus stop posts but its awful sorry
Keep trying though :) You're slowly getting better but keep trying :)
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/4113/kingconstructionpe1aa1.png
Edit: I have now seen some of your work, and quite frankly, it's a load of boloux...no shading or detail at all...
Especially the little town...anyone can make a few Iso boxes and stick windows on them.
EDIT: Don't flame someone just because they don't like your work... Stop being childish and accept criticism. If you can't then don't make Alts.
Pimlicoman
29-07-2006, 03:39 PM
OK Listen...
1. Im completely calm
2. I wasn't flaming him I was explaining...
3. Bus lanes aren't red -.-
4. The walls are like that because there is still loads of editing that needs to be done for this peice
5. That's the way the bench is, like it or don't I'm not bothered
6. Bus sign wan't even going to stay in this picture, at 1st it was just a base for where the bus stop was going to go, and that will be changed
7. I know elites are 10/10...
Anymore?
Halting
29-07-2006, 03:48 PM
I like the ideas but maybe a bit of shading on the road and wall.
Pimlicoman
29-07-2006, 03:48 PM
London :D
Zampo-III
29-07-2006, 04:02 PM
OK Listen...
1. Im completely calm
2. I wasn't flaming him I was explaining...
3. Bus lanes aren't red -.-
4. The walls are like that because there is still loads of editing that needs to be done for this peice
5. That's the way the bench is, like it or don't I'm not bothered
6. Bus sign wan't even going to stay in this picture, at 1st it was just a base for where the bus stop was going to go, and that will be changed
7. I know elites are 10/10...
Anymore?
Well they certainly aint orange xD
They are a deep red/Red
Even green or black but maily red
Why's that? Buses are red mhmm So bus lanes are red
Still don't believe me?
http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/240/buslanedf3.jpg
Oh yea and they use: Red Resin For bus lanes... Im sorry... What?!? Yes! RED Resin ;)
There you go Mhmm :)
And the bench... :S Why is it "Like that" The rest of it it perfectly placed dots except for that end whcih is tacky
And you were flaming him Just because he didn't like your alt
you started picking at his alts....
I believe this thread is about your alt and not his?
I rest my case
Which is nice and leathery xD
Pimlicoman
29-07-2006, 04:35 PM
Nope, in your version you gave a basic red...like the red they give you in the colour selection on paint...
The bus lanes are like a strong red with a touch of orange, when I can be bothered to get a proper picture I will as yours is a bit bright.
Secondly, he was sharing a bad view on my alt so I decided to share a bad view on his post...I don't believe that's illegal?
Finally...I done the ''perfectly placed dots'' I alted that from the area single chair, and the side from habbo is the left side with the reckless dots believe it or not, get a screenie and zoom in. I was 1st going to go with thier reckless dots but then it just came out like that and I havent been bothered to change them at present.
And that's about the stupidest thing i've heard...your comment about the buses that is...but owell...i'm right again...have a nice day :)
Zampo-III
29-07-2006, 04:42 PM
Nope, in your version you gave a basic red...like the red they give you in the colour selection on paint...
The bus lanes are like a strong red with a touch of orange, when I can be bothered to get a proper picture I will as yours is a bit bright.
Secondly, he was sharing a bad view on my alt so I decided to share a bad view on his post...I don't believe that's illegal?
Finally...I done the ''perfectly placed dots'' I alted that from the area single chair, and the side from habbo is the left side with the reckless dots believe it or not, get a screenie and zoom in. I was 1st going to go with thier reckless dots but then it just came out like that and I havent been bothered to change them at present.
And that's about the stupidest thing i've heard...your comment about the buses that is...but owell...i'm right again...have a nice day :)
What on earth
Its not the red from the paint pallet :)
So Not right there
Secondly.... I only did it to make up for your awful orange ok
Thridly... You may share bad views on his alts yes
Just not in a thread about your alts
Fourth... Get ya head out ya buttocks ok... You're not right "Again"
Fifth... Like why do things in halves... Not finnishing something because you couldn't be bothered shows no comitment... Which you need to make alts
Sixth... You really bore me now ... And the comment about the busses being red so therefore the lanes are was a joke... You ever heard of humour? No because you take things too seriously and can't handle criticism or a bit of harmless banter
End of ;)
Pimlicoman
29-07-2006, 04:56 PM
Erm...The bus and lane was a joke?
Oh sorry I miss comprehended the fact that jokes are supposed to be funny...
Well you corrected me there, well done:eusa_clap
Alllssoo, I have already posted it...take me to court or something will ya?
Pfft, makin a big deal outta nothing...point is you're chatting boloux because you think you're a pixel artist so you can command everyone when it comes to alts...well no you're wrong...at the end of the day, he commented on my alt and I commented on his post, whether they were bad point or good, doesn't matter...you never had to make a point about it what-so-ever...he spoke, I spoke...and it was over...no need for your stuipid comment about something that doesn't concern you...
Well i'm done with the essay, have a nice day :D
P.s the bus and lane thing was actually a really good joke, I must have just forgotten to laugh ;)
Zampo-III
29-07-2006, 05:04 PM
Erm...The bus and lane was a joke?
Oh sorry I miss comprehended the fact that jokes are supposed to be funny...
Well you corrected me there, well done:eusa_clap
Alllssoo, I have already posted it...take me to court or something will ya?
Pfft, makin a big deal outta nothing...point is you're chatting boloux because you think you're a pixel artist so you can command everyone when it comes to alts...well no you're wrong...at the end of the day, he commented on my alt and I commented on his post, whether they were bad point or good, doesn't matter...you never had to make a point about it what-so-ever...he spoke, I spoke...and it was over...no need for your stuipid comment about something that doesn't concern you...
Well i'm done with the essay, have a nice day :D
P.s the bus and lane thing was actually a really good joke, I must have just forgotten to laugh ;)
Ok
No.. I dont think i can command people in what to do Just because i make graphics.
I mentioned it because it seemed like you couldn't take criticism.
If you are going to make comments about other people work then do it in their posts Not just turn on them because they make a comment about yours.
I don't give a flying monkeys of what you think I'm trying to do because you are seriously mistaken... I couldn't care less what people do.. i was just saying.
Yeah ... It weren't ,meant to be a funny joke...
have you never been told that there are more than one type of joke in the world?
I didn't think so...
Now shut up ok and let people post about your work and stop trying to show of or act big or whatever you are trying to do ok
It's comments.. just read them and move on...
Adios xD
Pimlicoman
29-07-2006, 05:12 PM
Ok Super-Zampo (my idol super hero)
whatever you say mate...
This guy is turning a thread into an arguement...
What a great example seen as you work for the site...AND in this department lmao...how smart of you Super-Zampo...
You're onb. just a little kid who doesn't know what he's doing, he gets a job on a site and thinks he runs it...well good luck kid...
P.s ALL jokes are meant to be funny...theres not loads of types of jokes e.g funny ones and non-funny ones looooll, or is that another one of your jokes? :s
Laters;)
Techika
29-07-2006, 05:16 PM
dude 10/10 i like it
Zampo-III
29-07-2006, 05:20 PM
I do not work for the site:)
I am no kid
I am 18 So once again you are wrong
do not try to question my character without knowing me
Finally.. Yes. there are several types of Jokes... Obviously you have no dramatic/theatre experience or teaching.
please stop being sarcastic... You are really not doing yourself any favours...
Here is an idea... Stop having a go at my posts then i wont need to reply to defend myself...
Simple
Infact i am no longer going to even bother defending myself against you because frankly; you are seriously not worth it.
You're just another person in the world i frankly couldn't give a thought for.
Good day
Pimlicoman
29-07-2006, 05:25 PM
O'great One
If you're so BIG there's no need to defend yourself surely?
And if you're about to say ''I neva sed i was BIG'' then take time to realise you're TRYING to make yourself look big...believe me...it's really not working... 18? ha...and I guess you play habbo? and sit on a forum all day?
You need to get a life...seriously, it's actually worrying...
And obviously I do know you Super-Zampo...you're a pathetic 18 year old that sits on habbo/habbo forums all day long...no job a assume...? Still living off your parents money? under thier roof...? A fine example of a loser...
Soo..this time you're not wrong...just pathetic;)
Zampo-III
29-07-2006, 05:37 PM
O'great One
If you're so BIG there's no need to defend yourself surely?
And if you're about to say ''I neva sed i was BIG'' then take time to realise you're TRYING to make yourself look big...believe me...it's really not working... 18? ha...and I guess you play habbo? and sit on a forum all day?
You need to get a life...seriously, it's actually worrying...
And obviously I do know you Super-Zampo...you're a pathetic 18 year old that sits on habbo/habbo forums all day long...no job a assume...? Still living off your parents money? under thier roof...? A fine example of a loser...
Soo..this time you're not wrong...just pathetic;)
No i dont spend all day on habbo
no im not trying to act big... Infact many people we see it that you are trying to act big by trying to insult as many people as you can
No i dont spend all day on forums...
Yes i have a job thankyou and im also a student
No i do not live off my parent money
I live off my own money thankyou very much
Yes i live in my parents house... Is there something wrong with that?
I pay my rent if you must know
what else would you like to know ?
And no
You dont know me at all
You are the one trying to offend people on the internet... Im sorry but who is looking like the loser now?
Now may i suggest you stop because its getting rather boring now :)
I dont care what you say about me in your next "Comeback"
you shall not hear another word off me because unfortunately me keep posting in here is keeping this thread fresh and frankly it doesnt deserve it :)
Good Day.. Good Life... Good bye
Your saying ppl need a life ppl need to ge toff the pc.
To do the pixel arts you need to be on pc for a while what you are saying is being quite hypicritcal [w/e spelling] that pp lspend there time on forum/habbo nether hardly sometiems or lots but all you are donig is colouring and joing dots ^^
You should learn to take the C&C for the alt then not bother about trying to insult ppl as you don't like their comments.
You don't know how long ppl here spend if any time on habbo or this forum and you must spend a while on the forum at least as you are doing the pixel arts so you are on the pc lots so you must need to get a life then? as this is what your saying ^^
btw this said to Pimlicoman. ^^
wewt wewt i prob done sp. mistakes ^^
Zampo-III
29-07-2006, 06:02 PM
Your saying ppl need a life ppl need to ge toff the pc.
To do the pixel arts you need to be on pc for a while what you are saying is being quite hypicritcal [w/e spelling] that pp lspend there time on forum/habbo nether hardly sometiems or lots but all you are donig is colouring and joing dots ^^
You should learn to take the C&C for the alt then not bother about trying to insult ppl as you don't like their comments.
You don't know how long ppl here spend if any time on habbo or this forum and you must spend a while on the forum at least as you are doing the pixel arts so you are on the pc lots so you must need to get a life then? as this is what your saying ^^
btw this said to Pimlicoman. ^^
wewt wewt i prob done sp. mistakes ^^
Lol :) Thankyou.. someone else see's that he is trying to insult people. :)
Pimlicoman
29-07-2006, 09:25 PM
Erm I think you'll find i'll do what I want? If I want to insult someone...I will...and I have...so what are you planning on doing about it:s
You don't have to be in the computer for ages to do alts/recolours, ive only done a few and im hardly on my computer...losers...
Erm I think you'll find i'll do what I want? If I want to insult someone...I will...and I have...so what are you planning on doing about it:s
You don't have to be in the computer for ages to do alts/recolours, ive only done a few and im hardly on my computer...losers...
then why are you wasting your time on 'losers' and depending on work you do on alt it may take while. It would be good if you took C&C though instead of complaining back to them ^^ as C&C is to help you fix it and that and you bite ppls heads off ^^ anyways i dont think i willl reply back to this thread ^^ but i dunno i may do =o only God + budah know ^^
+ btw you shouldn't look at ppls alts work and say its rubbish etc. when their jsut rating your work ^^
Pimlicoman
30-07-2006, 04:35 PM
Hmm, God just stop talking crap...
1. it has nothing to do with you
2. ive done it anyway, stop complainin and do something about it
stupid noobs love talking rubbish...
=Jen=
30-07-2006, 09:33 PM
I like the dude with the headphones. Nice face. x]
Nia12
01-08-2006, 06:59 PM
It's very good i love the little man with the walkman on his head, 8 / 10 :D XXX
Condas
01-08-2006, 07:01 PM
Ace 10/10
Use the grass from my old habbo garden.
Can you want you to help me on a game im making? :)
Scarcely
02-08-2006, 07:31 AM
I like it 7/10, Especially the guy listening to music :)
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