Jay ( Jay & Silent Bob )

[..-Evan-..]

I haven't made an alt in ages... So i have desided to make alts about my super heroes!!! But in there normal form not bluntman and chronic..
I will be making a Silent bob soon so just wait.. But untill then heres Jay:

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/3443/jayni6.png


Rate -/10 and C&C tell me what i should fix ;]

[?WhyNot?]

Don't see much mistakes, well done :)

7/10

[ItsDave]

The grey thing could use a black outline

7/10

[Wayne]

Not bad, 7/10. Quite good.

[Joord]

Its quite good 7.5/10.

[..-Evan-..]

thanks for you replys do u think i could improve on anything???

[Azza]

the hair could dowith more texture and maybe a bit of a fringe. said earlier the grey thing cud do with outline. you cud put lil something on the shirt or that.

7.5/10

[StripedTiger]

9/20 needs some more shading on the orange jacket :)

apart from that its cool :D