A murder story!

[\\Tom]

The night was dark. The wind was windy. And the rain was wet. Two people were standing outside. They were hitting each other. Then one man pulled out a gun.

He shouted "STFU, BRB" and the other man said "K". So they carried on hitting each other. Then the man with the gun shouted "BK" and the two guys fighting said "wb m8". The gun man said "fnx".

So the gun man said "LOL, IMA GNNA SHOOT U M8Z. GIMME YA HABBO FERNIZ".

And the gun man died. LOL.

[Motion]

Wow, very touching, brang a tear to my eye.

[Kieeran]

:O amazing, how did the gun man die and who wins the fight

[\\Tom]

lol fdndx

[ross]

omg wow. scary??:rolleyes:

[Jasmin]

It made me jump to the heavens when he came back.

[edible]

I lol'd at the stupidity of it.

[Bugsey6]

Lol its excellent :P you planning on any more? :P

[VistaUltimate]

You need to add in suspense about the bullets like

"as he logged on his pistol to Gunno (wth lol) he shot him...PWN PWN"

THEN he died :)

[FootballTouch]

Wow, touching or what? +Rep