ECO.

[Lozzie]

Yeah, it's an alt i made called ECO Systems Unlimited.
Unfortunatly i don't have the Volta font in paint, so i can't do the writing.
Anyways, rate -/10 and please give constructive cirtism.
Not particulary good like.
http://img309.imageshack.us/img309/2806/ecosystemsunlimited2fq2.png

I like the overalls.

[Disaronno]

I dont like it 4/10

Simple, dont ask me for CC 'cos i wont give it, as i cba


Fine - the text is wrong, the face is too easy, and who would buy clotheS?

[Lozzie]

I don't know.
It's for fussy women.
And gender benders.
;]

[Jord]

i don't like it 3/10, its a stupid idea tbh.


the font is called volter
you can see half of the chat in the first cato window.

[Minix]

I think what you've written is hilarious :D

The backgrounds of all the outfits should be changed, as they don't fit in with each other.

Use the Habbo Hotel Goldfish Font as well. I'm not sure about the smiley face :/


I love that closeup hairstyle, :)

9/10 +rep

[Lozzie]

0.o
Really?
Thankies.

[edible]

I think its cool k?

[Dark Fate]

OK.
The smiley face is a bit rushes, paint?

And also, the dress is very.. pointy on the clothes.

The girl with the red hair and green eyes,
the green eyes look strange and the hair is just 2 hairstyles stuck together.

The gender bender bit at the bottom also spoils it.
You should make it really realistic and believable.

Take your time on it!

4/10

EDIT

You also have spelling mistakes.

[Everlong]

Why would someone buy a mole on their face?

[Lozzie]

Because they do.
I asked people, and they wanted them?
x]

[Azza]

background colours dont match the fonts dont match ether on first one the picture at bottom seems out of place and 2nd one u wudnt get something over lapping the page.

i dont rlly like it

[Lozzie]

Mmm...
Yeah, it was ment to be mainly looking at the clothes alts bits, but i wanted text to go with it, but i think it was a bad idea to put in catalogue, and it wouldn't all fit in the cat.

[Lozzie]

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/4776/ecosystemsunlimited2nz7.png

Re-did it.
Any better?

[Ekalb]

Use the habbo font.
If your not going to download it open habbo, check in (Not sure if you have to), open Paint and look for volter in the font list.

[Lozzie]

Is the second one any better?>
And yeah, sorry for the double post above, i didn't notice.
=S