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--Cookie---
11-08-2006, 04:12 PM
Right. Recently everyone's been all up on my case, saying I copy loads of things and stuff. So here it is - proof that I am not some ripper, who does ****** little detail.

AND it's the first alt I've done from scratch.

:D I hope you like it.

(By the way, the reason it doesn't say "Police public Call Box" on the side, is because my text couldn't go up at an angle, and I spent about 20 minutes trying to write it, or move already written text, and it didn't work. But ignore that bit)

Comments and ratings would be appreciated. :eusa_danc

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/gillybuttons/Other%20stuff/Tardis1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/gillybuttons/Other%20stuff/Tardis2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/gillybuttons/Other%20stuff/Tardis3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/gillybuttons/Other%20stuff/Tardis4.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/gillybuttons/Other%20stuff/Tardis5.jpg

(P.S, I have no idea why the finished one is bigger than the rest. If anyone can help me understand this, please let me know) xx

The Batman
11-08-2006, 05:01 PM
10/10 included rep. really nice!!! really nice!:eusa_clap

--Cookie---
11-08-2006, 05:04 PM
YIPPEE

Disaronno
11-08-2006, 05:04 PM
Thats very good. If thats what you can do, dont give up, keep going!

DJ-Precocious
11-08-2006, 05:08 PM
It might be a different size because you saved it as a different file type.

Main reason for thinking this is because the smaller ones are fuzzy but the bigger one is much nicer quality.

But an amazing first "from scratch" job. 9/10

--Cookie---
11-08-2006, 05:12 PM
Thanks. :D

I aint dissing you, but they're fuzzy 'cause they're smaller. They're usually all the same size as the last one, so they're usually all clear.

luke-p
11-08-2006, 05:49 PM
Great improvement from what you normally do with the small thing that you cant see to this, This is a huge step Keep up the good work 9/10 And +REP When I can

Flopz_x
11-08-2006, 06:06 PM
Hey Bex x Your Alt Is Great - 10/10 In My Books xx

Flopz xxx

Lozzie
12-08-2006, 04:09 PM
I like it, but i noticed a few little mistakes:

The TARDIS is a bit off angle, as one side is longer or wider than the other, and makes it look a little odd.

I think the second side on the side going down the side needs to start at the same hight as the one on the front.

You could have it on it's side like that, or you could have both sides slanted and the line on the side the largest line.

But yeah, nice alt. About 8-9/10

Biseinen
12-08-2006, 05:43 PM
Like said above, it's not right, it's slanted and it's not all even sides this makes it look horrible. Make it so it's even on all rectangle sides.

5/10

ColyTom
14-08-2006, 09:51 PM
Wow, that is really really good especially as it is made form scratch 9/10. Well done + rep !

Benjiwenji1_old
15-08-2006, 02:20 PM
Its very wonky 5/10 rofl

Barmi
16-08-2006, 11:02 AM
Sorry, an average 5.5/10. :( Not brilliant, but not bad either.

To start with, the colours need adjusting. The blue needs to be of more a royal blue, rather than an icy sky blue. Secondly, it's not in an isometric perspective, as all other Habbo items are. (You've done a straight line across the bottom, and 1,1 diagonal, instead of 2,1 or 1,2.)

The main gripe I have with it though, is the proportions. I'm pretty sure that the base of the TARDIS (and roof) is square shaped, instead of the rectangular shape you have portrayed. The sign on the front and the sign on the side are both in different places with regards to the surrounding lines. Same with those panels on the roof - they are skewed to the left slightly. Black outlining also needs adding in a few places, such as the top, where the light is. There is a grey gradient, which should have a black line surrounding it. ;P You might also want to black outline the doorhandle, and keyhole.

Oh, and that brings me onto my final point - gradients. Although you've not included what I'd call "proper" gradients (which are horrid), the window panels consist of 3 colours, getting darker as you go towards the right. These window panels could have been just one colour. ;P Gradients aren't too nice. ^_^

Still, you've shown WIP, you've put a lot of effort into it, so you can have a 6/10 instead. +Rep. :)

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