a bit of recoulering on the HC!

[Kirsty]

right this is my first EVER alteration and i used MSPAINT
it is really bad but nice in a way its bad cus its rather untidy but i like the way the pink green and orange blend in

rate out of 10 plz

(actually make that EXTREAMLY UNTIDY)

[RedStratocas]

Erm, not to be mean but you need to work on it. It needs a bit more shading, and make it a bit more original

[Janumz]

Erm.. Sorry.. I hate it (I dont mean to be mean)
Erm.. Maybe you should make it again and:
Keep the original size
Use shading (If using MSPaint, choose the colour you want then double click it/go to Colours > Edit colours, and move the < down to a darker shade..
Hope I helped
Jane

[Kirsty]

ok thanks anyway im not rly a real expert with alterations and stuff lol

thanks jane :)

[Adzeh]

really messy and th picture qualty is bad.

needs alot more work, you could ad more shading.

5/10

[faerie_girl]

right this is my first EVER alteration and i used MSPAINT
it is really bad ...(actually make that EXTREAMLY UNTIDY)

If u know it is really bad why did u post it??

i dont want to put you off making alts but this is so bad i cant even it a possitive score
-10/10

Keep trying though

[faerie_girl]

posted my mistake instead of editing :(

[Lozzoling]

theres nothing you can do to salavage that - start again 0.1/10

[Jase]

it looks like a drumstick (the lollypop/sweet or w.e).........

[Steph=04=]

um... yea bit messy more care needed 5/10

[Luayminator]

Ugly , not to be offensive, you can do way better im sure.. 22/100

[micky.blue.eyes]

its ugly sorry to say it but even with ms paint you can do nice things (almost everybody uses ms paint) and you took away all the shading
so try to keep the shading.

[caz08]

That is one big massive mess. 1/10

[Kekea]

Take more time on ur alts... dont use a paintbrush cause that makes ur work looks messy.

[Max]

That is one big massive mess. 1/10
Yep..Thats mess.
Ill show you how you can do this in a much better way.
To be edited:

Edit:
I was making my alt but I thought..nevermind, its just messed up. If you create that you just need to pratice, i can show you what looks much better, but i wont work. Just practice practice practice. Dont post if you dont like it yet, just save it and go for the next alt.