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velvet
25-08-2006, 07:35 PM
I just noticed I made a spelling mistake in the title rofl, so ignore that. I ment Britain. Anyway... :]

Wayne. (Super Moderator) Thread name renamed to Britain ;)

Well yeah, I wrote this in school as we had to write what Britain ment to us. So this is my veiw. :]



Early morning business men with breifcases in hand,
Welcome to Britain, a far from beautiful land,
At 10 Downing Street, where the trouble starts,
Devistating familys, shattering hearts,
Ruled by Tony Blair, such an ignorant man,
Taking people lives, just because he can,
To Iraq, he sends some honorable men,
Who will probably never be seen again.
Britain, a highly polluted place,
With crime levels soaring, what a discrace,
Teenagers pregnant around the nation,
We've aborted a third of our generation,
Truency figures on the rise,
With todays adolecence it's no suprise,
At an early age, smoking and drinking,
Makes you wonder what the parents are thinking.
So when the next election comes,
Go to London, scream and shout,
If we all unite together we can get Blair out.

Jesus-Egg
25-08-2006, 09:43 PM
I completely agree with your view.

It's a good poem, and the last line made me laugh. +rep :)

Wayne
25-08-2006, 09:44 PM
Very good poem. ;) I like it a lot.

velvet
25-08-2006, 10:09 PM
Thanks for correcting it :]

iluvben
25-08-2006, 10:10 PM
tis good

*disgrace :P

jordybumz!
25-08-2006, 10:15 PM
pretty good rhymes you got there m8.

velvet
25-08-2006, 10:24 PM
tis good

*disgrace :P

I did it without spell check and my spelling sucks anyway.
But thanks. ^^

FlyingJesus
25-08-2006, 11:50 PM
Tony Blair FTW. However I do want Lib Dems to win the next election so they'll be in power when I leave college, because they want to make university tuition fees free off the government :D Then vote Conservative after that because I plan on being a mean old man as soon as I hit 20.

Oh, and on topic, a well written poem ^_^

Victimized
25-08-2006, 11:52 PM
It's really good!

I especially like the last rhyming couplet, sums up what i feel.

NekkLe
27-08-2006, 11:17 AM
Sounds great!

I like the part with sending the honourable men to Iraq, alot of thought put into this then? it works well :)

velvet
27-08-2006, 01:38 PM
Thanks for all your comments guys.

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