My Poem

[lukeisok]

This Is My Poem,

It Is Non Habbo Related,

The War Zone Ruins

The Sound Of War Here
The Battle Call Is Feared
The Guns Realoding Haste
Death Toll Rises At A Pace


The Sound Of War Close
The Solders Drawn To Posts
The Soaking Rain Drenches
All ALong The Muddy Trenches

The Machine Gun Fire Bursts
This Piercing Pain Hurts
The Sound Of Children Crying
I Know I'm Slowly Dying...

Like It,

Feel Free To Rep Me.

If I Have Upset You Please Post And I Will Take It Off.

[Janumz]

Ooo I like it
Well done
+Rep gunna* be added (*Need to spread reputation around)

[lukeisok]

Thanks :)

You Don't Need to Rep Me :)

[Jacko2kn3]

I liked it. They say poems don't need to rhyme, but I think they are better if they do! :)

Well done :D

[lukeisok]

Thank You :)

[Simonac55]

Really good poem, wich really represents how war can be. As a war is expressed, a war can also beign expressed in emotional feelings and I like that side of your poem too. But it's really great. Keep doing great poems :)

[Snowboarding]

I liked your poem and repped you ;)

I don't get why childs cries should be in there unless they were fighting within a village.

[-JT-]

gotta say man, well done. Why did no one reply to my poem :(?

[Vause]

well done ;)

[lukeisok]

Thanks For The reps And Comments Everyone