Silent Crying [ Poem ]

[lukeisok]

This Is My Poem,

I Made It Up When I Felt Sad When My Girlfreind Dumped Me :(

I Sat Here Crying
All The Times You've Been Lying
Was I A Thing To You
You Dont Have Little CLue

I Sit Here Silently
All The Times You Attacked My Violently
Was I As Stress Bal To You
You Don't Have A Clue

I Lay Down Motionlessly
You Made Me Feeling Depressed
You Think I'm A Toy To You
You Don't Have A Clue,
Do You?

What do You Think,

Please Feel Free To Green Rep Me :)

Comments And Questions Welcome :)

[G-flow]

cool i like it, well done :) , poems are great :D

[Ciaran]

Very good well done poems rock

[Janumz]

Aww.. Thats great!
Well done! Write more ;)

[lukeisok]

Thanks For Your Replies,

Do You Think I should Do More PM Me With Some Ideas!

:)

[Clo]

Yay that poems good. AwW but it's very sad :(

[lukeisok]

Thanks For replying :)

[Simonac55]

Really great poem again luke :) You're really good at this :p

[lukeisok]

Thanks Simon,

At The Weekend My Target Is 10 Poems A Day :)

The Poem Above Took Me About 20 Mins :)