MY FOURTH ALTERATION - (redo of that throne sofa-bed)

[Lozzoling]

i know you all hated my other throne sofa-bed so heres a new one,there are hardly any pixel errors keep in mind i am going to redo it again,still boxy..
-rate out of 10 but keep out the boxyness its under construction-
My Fourth Alteration (http://img65.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img65&image=alt6a4cf.png)

[Dazzle]

A bit Boxy and the head bourd is floating =/

[poloolop]

yes quite boxy but still 8/10

[Adzeh]

the other was better.

this one looks too much like a block.

4/10

[Shauna.]

I like the first one the second one looks like it's floating. It's kinda blurry, but, ya know, Please someone e-mail me and tell me how to do alterations.

1st one- 8/10
2nd one- 5/10
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I Love,
William:
You never notice me, :eusa_naug
All you can do Is laugh at me. :badgrin:
Why? Why can't you see I like you? :question:
I guess it's time to give up. :redface_b

Javian:
You know I like you, :love3:
I asked you out yesterday, :eusa_shhh
and yet you say I have to loose weight. :Shock:
How pathedic. :rolleyes_
How mean. :cry:
It's not about looks. :doubt:
It's about me, My personality, :Stop:
Now, can I try again? :'(

I hope you like my "poems"
Because they are really, true. From a 6th grade ugly girl that is humiliated and made fun of everyday. But, She does have friends. Emma, Melanie, Kiki, Brittney, Taylor, Devon, Barry, Notice, only two of my friends are boys. :eusa_wall Is there somehing wrong with me? I go home crying sometimes, because of the boy I like, William. and sometimes from..no, not girls... BOYS.

Named: Shauna, [a.k.a. me]

[caz08]

Nah, still doesn't tickle my fancy i don't like the idea of a throne sofa ed it just doesn't seem right. 5/10