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Simonac55
17-02-2005, 10:10 PM
As empty minds cross the dark sky,
Wandering, guarding our thoughts by,
As a dark presence in my dark mind,
Opens my eyes, before blind.

I walk into this dark forest,
As more in my heart, there was darkness.
As I travel, it became darker,
But as I traveled, it became warmer.

As words were spoken but not seign,
As footprints left on the sand there beign,
I became to loose my conscience as I walked,
But love was expressed as I heard you talked.

Now that you brang me the right way,
Now that I don't see you as I may,
Your name is in my head, written,
As a rememberance of love, never forgotten


Feel free to write any comments :).

lukeisok
17-02-2005, 10:28 PM
Wow,

I ♥

Rep Added :)

Janumz
18-02-2005, 11:31 AM
Wow. Thats brilliant!
Well done
+Rep added

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