:( Touching Poem :(

[icebox12]

My name is Sarah
I am but three,
My eyes are swollen
I cannot see,
I must be stupid
I must be bad,
What else could have made
My daddy so mad?
I wish I were better
I wish I weren't ugly,
Then maybe my mommy
Would still want to hug me.
I can't speak at all
I can't do a wrong
Or else I'm locked up
All the day long.
When I awake I'm all alone
The house is dark
My folks aren't home
When my mommy does come
I'll try and be nice,
So maybe I'll get just
One whipping tonight.
Don't make a sound!
I just heard a car
My daddy is back
From Charlie's Bar.
I hear him curse
My name he calls
I press myself
Against the wall
I try and hide
From his evil eyes
I'm so afraid now
I'm starting to cry
He finds me weeping
He shouts ugly words,
He says its my fault
That he suffers at work.
He slaps me and hits me
And yells at me more,
I finally get free
And I run for the door.
He's already locked it
And I start to bawl,
He takes me and throws me
Against the hard wall.
I fall to the floor
With my bones nearly broken,
And my daddy continues
With more bad words spoken.
"I'm sorry!", I scream
But its now much too late
His face has been twisted
Into unimaginable hate
The hurt and the pain
Again and again
Oh please God, have mercy!
Oh please let it end!
And he finally stops
And heads for the door,
While I lay there motionless
Sprawled on the floor
My name is Sarah
And I am but three,
Tonight my daddy
Murdered me.

[Vause]

wow that was really touching well done its very very touching actually :'(

[icebox12]

By the way if anyone thinks ect. I did not write this

[Bradd-Aaron]

Very Upsetting we should stop things like this i know its a poem but think that this DOES happen and we want to stop its!

[Simonac55]

That is an excellent poem, wich makes us realize that some child in the world are not happy as we are and do not have the same quality of life as we do. For those people, I feel pity and your poem really represent a great aspect of it, within touching my heart deeply.

[icebox12]

Ineed I came across it a while back and thought that maybe I should share it with you guys see what you all think about it. When you read it through it makes you think that someone in the world has/is going threw a difficult stage like that. Its not a pleasent and should not be tolerated :( I hope that know-one in the world would be as cruel to do something as bad as what happened above.

[Crying-Angel]

i saw that quite a while ago n it really made me upset i dont understand how anyone could abuse their children ='[

[Michael.]

Just a coinsidence but everything went quiet after that poem in my house.

Very touching, I bet the NSPCC has it on their website.

[Bradd-Aaron]

Just a coinsidence but everything went quiet after that poem in my house.

Very touching, I bet the NSPCC has it on their website.

I told my mum that too! and why did your paremnts go quiet if its personal dosnt matter :)

[G-flow]

:o that poem is upsetting :(

[-JT-]

not upseting, it just hits you on the last line...

[icebox12]

But it does make you think during it, as it shows she tries ever so hard to get her parents to actualy consider her as a human being instead of something it abuse.

[Janumz]

That poem is very upsetting and touching..
But it does happen..

[icebox12]

Jane indeed and its not acceptible. Hopefuly this poem will show alot/everyone a new light.

[Fingerboots]

Mm, I've got that a lot in email forwards. Arrr :(

[icebox12]

I had it sent threw an email before but it was a little bit different.

[-JT-]

But it does make you think during it, as it shows she tries ever so hard to get her parents to actualy consider her as a human being instead of something it abuse.
reminds me of a guy i know...

[Luayminator]

vERY upsetting and touching , Ive gotten it before from an email.

[Luayminator]

That poem is very upsetting and touching..
But it does happen..

Yes very sadly, it does happen to alot of people


SORRY FOR DOUBLE POSTING, UN-UNTENTIONAL

Edited by Jacko2kn3: Intentional or not, please try not to double post

[Seacat]

yes that poem is very touching :(

[Hanurr]

It breaks my heart to know that terrible things like that are happening around the world. I already knew, but that brought the thought back up... :(