First ever habbo layout

[FrozenWhisper]

Un coded and what not, tis my first ever layout, followed a tutorail but it looks different to the finished result of the tutorial, the three habbo's are the owners of Habbo Legend (me and two friend), c&c rate out of 10 ect

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/5371/habbolegendlayoutcopyel2.png

[SimplyTech]

No offence but ewwwww
Bad colours
Not atall aligned
cut down on the white surrounding its annoying

[ebay]

i kinda like it, but i wouldnt buy it

[-Xperience]

The colours are very unattractive, and the font in the headers is to cramed and way to thick. Characters at the bottom dont go very well... 7/10 Good for a first try though.:)

Guessing by the looks of it you used animiks tutorial?

[FrozenWhisper]

The colours are very unattractive, and the font in the headers is to cramed and way to thick. Characters at the bottom dont go very well... 7/10 Good for a first try though.:)

Any colour you suggest (a yellow), I'll cut down th white now, and I wasn't complete sure about the charaters, shall I get rid of them?
Yes I used that tutorial.

[-Xperience]

Blues tend to be the basic colours of most websites so maybe try shades ofr green and blue mixed together or a soft yellow and blue. Use a habboish font, either volter or Visitor BRK www.dafont.com (http://www.dafont.com). Experiment with different shapes of the boxes too :)

[Josh-H]

Poor, sorry.

Horrible colour.

[Vixt]

Is the tutorial from animik.ca?

[-Xperience]

Any colour you suggest (a yellow), I'll cut down th white now, and I wasn't complete sure about the charaters, shall I get rid of them?
Yes I used that tutorial.

Yes he did.

[Liberation]

The text on the Names of the Boxes is way to small. I couldn't evan read that atall. And add backround maybe and use a different green or different colour as i odnt really like that =]
But good try.

[Infrontation]

Poor, sorry.

Horrible colour.

Agreed ;x

[x~Rebel~x]

Hiya Just Passing And saw Imo's Name, I am one of the two Freinds btw :) Just thought I'd say that :)

[FrozenWhisper]

Yes he did.
*she ;)
Well, I'm re doing it tomorrow, watching football now, so thanks for all the comments, are the pictures on it ok?

[index.html]

I Suggest you try rotating the picture etc? This can be done in paint.

Colour - Eww go on to some fansite and take some of there colours - they wont know =D

7/10 for first try

[FrozenWhisper]

I Suggest you try rotating the picture etc? This can be done in paint.

Colour - Eww go on to some fansite and take some of there colours - they wont know =D

7/10 for first try

I'm going to use the yellow off th habbo navigator with the background thats on the habbo home page.

[Kymux]

My idea exactly. try to add a different font and align them a bit more.

[FrozenWhisper]

My idea exactly. try to add a different font and align them a bit more.

Ok, thanks for the help everyone, I'll start the new verison later on.