CjFlame
23-02-2005, 06:26 AM
This is my first attempt at any poem that "broke" the standard rhyme pattern. Its of a personal experience, so alot of emotion has gone into it. I think thats apparent.
Do you remember? Febuary 23rd, 2005. By: Danny.
Do you remember the sun that day
Shining down on our populated world
Do you remember the smiles we shared
As if time had frozen, a perfect still portrait
Do you remember the sounds of the children
Running carelessly through the color-filled leaves
Do you remember the tall flawless trees
Struck with the magic of autumn, allowing us to be this way
I remember the beautiful look on your face
As with not a care in the world we laughed together
I remember the clouds and the stars
On the soft grassy terrain we laid
I remember the one special star
Shining brightly it blessed me with a wish
I remember the reaction i gave
As i smiled and turned that star away
Do you remember the time we spent
Admiring life as if an eternity had passed
I remember the way i enjoyed that eternity
Cuddling up to your soft body
Do you remember the sounds of the willows
As we slowly fell asleep in each others embrace
I remember the dreams that filled my mind that night
Your the real reason i turned that star away
Do you remember? Febuary 23rd, 2005. By: Danny.
Do you remember the sun that day
Shining down on our populated world
Do you remember the smiles we shared
As if time had frozen, a perfect still portrait
Do you remember the sounds of the children
Running carelessly through the color-filled leaves
Do you remember the tall flawless trees
Struck with the magic of autumn, allowing us to be this way
I remember the beautiful look on your face
As with not a care in the world we laughed together
I remember the clouds and the stars
On the soft grassy terrain we laid
I remember the one special star
Shining brightly it blessed me with a wish
I remember the reaction i gave
As i smiled and turned that star away
Do you remember the time we spent
Admiring life as if an eternity had passed
I remember the way i enjoyed that eternity
Cuddling up to your soft body
Do you remember the sounds of the willows
As we slowly fell asleep in each others embrace
I remember the dreams that filled my mind that night
Your the real reason i turned that star away