Calzeh
24-02-2005, 07:54 PM
Okay, please be nice because it took a lot of courage to post this rofl.
Also if you think im pathetic for being afraid of the dentist, thats your opinion, just dont be too evil :P Constructive criticism welcome, as are any reasonable comments you would like to make. :)
Anyway:
setting - dentist at school
format - poem
inspiration - an experience I had at the densist last Wednesday
Is this insanity?
As I lay there, still and numb,
I glanced up at the masked creature.
It was clutching a thing I feared,
A needle; long, sharp and filled with an unknown drug.
The creature bent down, and put the needle in my mouth.
I shut my eyes tightly,
Trying to blank out a situation I hated.
I could taste the drug;
Was this venom? Evil, like snakes?
Then the world seemed to be spinning.
I thought of the thing that makes me happy.
The person who understands me.
Someone I love...Jin
Now the chair was almost swinging gently,
Like being on a lilo in the sea, rocking with the waves.
When I was dismissed from the room I felt strange.
I dashed to the toilets and peered into the mirror.
‘Nope, I look the same as usual’ I reassured myself.
Now I found myself wandering to the water machine,
It was all a daze, a blur of people around me.
Next I walked up the corridor.
I felt like a ghost, gliding through the crowd.
Again the world was spinning,
Voices were just a murmour in a foreign language.
Am I really here?
Why do I feel so alone in this river of moving people?
Could I be insane?
Also if you think im pathetic for being afraid of the dentist, thats your opinion, just dont be too evil :P Constructive criticism welcome, as are any reasonable comments you would like to make. :)
Anyway:
setting - dentist at school
format - poem
inspiration - an experience I had at the densist last Wednesday
Is this insanity?
As I lay there, still and numb,
I glanced up at the masked creature.
It was clutching a thing I feared,
A needle; long, sharp and filled with an unknown drug.
The creature bent down, and put the needle in my mouth.
I shut my eyes tightly,
Trying to blank out a situation I hated.
I could taste the drug;
Was this venom? Evil, like snakes?
Then the world seemed to be spinning.
I thought of the thing that makes me happy.
The person who understands me.
Someone I love...Jin
Now the chair was almost swinging gently,
Like being on a lilo in the sea, rocking with the waves.
When I was dismissed from the room I felt strange.
I dashed to the toilets and peered into the mirror.
‘Nope, I look the same as usual’ I reassured myself.
Now I found myself wandering to the water machine,
It was all a daze, a blur of people around me.
Next I walked up the corridor.
I felt like a ghost, gliding through the crowd.
Again the world was spinning,
Voices were just a murmour in a foreign language.
Am I really here?
Why do I feel so alone in this river of moving people?
Could I be insane?