Artillery [WIP]

[Revis]

Im working on a artillery gun for some unknown reason :S anyway here is the base of the gun, i might mount in on a tractor type thing but can you guys point out any pixel mistakes and tell me wether i should just give up on it now and not waste time and maybe some constructive critism.
*Please don't say "Theres no shading" or "it needs colour" it's a Work in Progress and ill add that last*
http://www.picturehost.co.uk/free.one/artiller.png

[TarkanTT]

hehe very nice but one thing alteritty needs to look more like its upwards to likes its sho :eusa_doh: ting if its in work in progress 9/10 when its done ill see i love war stuff but i dont want to be in war thank god

[Revis]

Yeah i thought the barrel needed to be at an angle, i might make it seem like its being transported or just set up or summit, thanks anyway :)

[gregzilla]

no offense but it looks like an impossible shape,
if you can fix it, cos its hard to describe what to fix, i'd give you an 8/10
right now its 7/10
if you colour it 9/10
and shading 10/10
anyway its wat i reckon :)

[Scriptermone]

Need's color Dude! otherwise 8/10

[Revis]

Ive gone and totally changed it from the impossible shape i think gregzilla was trying to describe, the front shield sorter merged into the base box somehow which was just lazyness on my part, the whole bottem box has gone and the new versian looks a bit better, thanks for the help guys.

[gregzilla]

welcome anytime :D