New song

[Kieran]

Hey,

Ive just started working on a new song for my GCSE music. Its written mainly for piano with a violin added in for good measure.

Just tell me what you think as i add updates:

Note: The accordion is the VOX (Voice) line :D

Thanks

FILE:

http://www.habzilla.com/Kierans%20Song.mid

[Charlie]

I didn't listen to it all, but its pretty darn good, better then anything i could do, which is nothing.

[Kieran]

Bumpety bump :D

[Jesus-Egg]

I listened to a bit of it, and it's sounding good :)

Why did you put the melody on the accordian? :s Strange choice of instrument.

[Kieran]

I put it on the accordion so it stands out. My plan is to sing the original and replace the accordion :D

[Kieran]

Anymore input?

[Janeisntpleased]

I put it on the accordion so it stands out. My plan is to sing the original and replace the accordion :D

lose the accordian, honey.

except that it's good.
maybe a few more dynamics etc.
it's little things like that you'll pick up marks for.

good luck with it <3