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blaster.
30-09-2006, 04:31 PM
Do not rep me or anything for it, as im only posting it for him as he is banned.

This is what he says,
Cheep. Says:
I lost track of time, but i know i've been at it for over four hours straight. Ouch my eyeS. I present to you.. Habbovision Offices. Sorry for long loading time

www.clubhabbo.net/vision (http://www.clubhabbo.net/vision)

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/938/habbovisionfj0.png

scubadiva
30-09-2006, 04:37 PM
That's pretty good, could use some more shading on the roof :) I don't like the railings on the balconies either

blaster.
30-09-2006, 04:43 PM
That's pretty good, could use some more shading on the roof :) I don't like the railings on the balconies either
Cheep Says: Why does it need shading on the roof, nothing is shadowd on there except the vents. Nothing else needs to be..

joboman
30-09-2006, 08:36 PM
missing the shadow ;] and the red building is shaded wrong compared to the orange one

ItsDave
30-09-2006, 09:49 PM
Lovely, apserloutly beautiful.

Jolly
30-09-2006, 10:37 PM
It's nice but the roof is too plain, try adding different shades and tones or build it up so that it's not flat. A sloping roof always looks better than one that could have been cut with a hedge trimmer!

Tristan
01-10-2006, 08:34 AM
Swap the red on the balcony side with the red on the HVTV side and it would look right and maybe do that on the smaller building on the left too except on the already darker red bit have the darker red come up halfway rather than all the way.

But very good.

Kardan
01-10-2006, 08:35 AM
Where's the shadow of the building?
9/10...
+Rep to Cheep when he gets unbanned :)

Ekalb
01-10-2006, 09:26 AM
The balcony fences look quite messy.
The building (Icluding the door arch at the front) should have the same shadow as the hotel.
The palm trees need shadows.
Tv statue needs a dhadow.
As its a Tv station shouldnt it have well satelites and things on the roof?
The 3 large yellow things need shadows as does the elevator and the HVTV text also needs to cast a shadow.
You have really really ignored shadow on this piece and without it it seems quite basic.

Evolution
01-10-2006, 09:59 AM
Cheep with a dot told me to post his improved version:

http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/7530/habbovisionvf4.png

scubadiva
01-10-2006, 10:09 AM
That looks even worse :S. The shadow is completely the wrong shape

Joord
01-10-2006, 10:24 AM
A bilboard with a picture of one of hvtv's shows would go good, as the roofs too plain. 8.8/10 nicely done.

blaster.
01-10-2006, 03:10 PM
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/614/habbovisiondn3.png

its improved !
wd to cheep. <3

Ekalb
01-10-2006, 11:58 PM
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/614/habbovisiondn3.png

its improved !
wd to cheep. <3

He still need to do something with the palm trees shadow.
It looks really odd without it.

brodeo
04-10-2006, 02:48 PM
Back from ban. Oh, and CK, every time i try to shadow the trees it looks all.. wrong :(

Plus on hotels where they have the palm trees there is no shadow :o

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