Habbovision Layout

[brodeo]

You probably guessed my offices would come to use on habbovision somehow, i converted into a layout, i think its sweet.

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/4885/hvisionhm1.gif

[Dom¿]

Good Good, welldone 10/10 +Rep

[VersionUpdate]

damn man I started doing that earlyer

[scubadiva]

WOW, this has come on in leaps and bounds. You've probably read all my previous comments on this work, so I'm just gonna talk about the new parts. Basically, I like it all, apart from the squashed up HABBOVISION text. 9/10

[simon305]

Hey i have a site called habbco.com and i have a tv bit called habbcovision so can you change that to habbcovision and let me use that plz :)

[Rozi]

I love it <33

[Ekalb]

Although it looks like a bit of a rip off of bobba.net its okay.
Still things are missing shadows and look fiarly basic. I'm not sure what's going on with the white line on the edge of the path, if that's meant to be a face edge it is too light. The fences look rushed. The HABBO VISION on the red TV thing was a bit hard to read untill I looked carefully I thought it was random lines.
If that is a tv I'd suggest having a side pannel to it where viewers could adjust what they watch, return to where they were before, etc.
Is red like a major color for this site because its everywhere?
Its on the building, the console, the mini tv, the big TV, the sign and the swim suit. And many are different reds.
Perhaps you should rethink a few of your icons. Like what does money have to do with a poll? What does somone doing a dive have to do with shows?
Maybe for the poll icon have some bars in a graph format with an arrow going wierd on them and for the shows have a few cams (If you don't want to design them you could get them from that Musicy studio public room)

[Thelilaznboy]

8 out of 10 could be a bit better...

[Nielez]

Very good CC CptnKwl :)

Addition: the roof is multicoloured, there are 2 types of red, a red one and a pink-reddish one.

[brodeo]

Hey i have a site called habbco.com and i have a tv bit called habbcovision so can you change that to habbcovision and let me use that plz :)
Yes, i'll give you a completely free layout which was designed personally for my site and took a long time to put together. I'll just alter it specially for you, some stranger on a forum and then we can have the same layout for our sites! No.



Very good CC CptnKwl :)

Addition: the roof is multicoloured, there are 2 types of red, a red one and a pink-reddish one.
It's the shadow of the sign :)

[Mr.Sam]

Personally i think the shadows should be re-done, there all diffrent..
i can't really be bothered to type to much but i circled stuff that could do with fixing.

http://www.****************/uploads/d23c8a7f6d.png

[Nielez]

It's the shadow of the sign :)
Now i see

[brodeo]

Personally i think the shadows should be re-done, there all diffrent..
i can't really be bothered to type to much but i circled stuff that could do with fixing.

http://www.****************/uploads/d23c8a7f6d.png


Whats wrong with the logo?
Wants wrong with the dip in kerb where cars go up?
Whats wrong with the shadows of the grass?
Whats wrong with the shadows of the sign?

[ItsDave]

I can't view it. Takes me to google :s

[Thrust]

I think it looks pretty good. 9.4.

[Ekalb]

Whats wrong with the logo?
Wants wrong with the dip in kerb where cars go up?
Whats wrong with the shadows of the grass?
Whats wrong with the shadows of the sign?

What's wrong is that sometimes you did'nt give things a shadow, sometimes you gave them a directly above shadow and other times you gave them an angled shadow.
Make up your mind.
Not sure about the main logo but probably because its too squashed.

[qwertyman9003]

10/10 love it! keep up the good work

[Scrubs]

and In addition to what Cptn said is that the shadows stretch longer than they should, also the bottem right of the pine trees are two pixels thick, there is now shadow on the trees and under the sign, left of the right piller holding it up there is no shadow where there should be.