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BeckyRox
06-03-2005, 01:00 PM
Ok this is my flying stool.
Please give me some CONSTRUCTIVE criticsm
And a grade out of 10

Pawf
06-03-2005, 01:01 PM
You need to upload it to http://www.photobucket.com then put the url in the image tags

Mr.Kylee
06-03-2005, 01:19 PM
Um just be logic..if the fire was under stool which is made by wood it would burn? :) and um make it more habboish..more shading and fix the pixel errors.

BeckyRox
06-03-2005, 04:34 PM
:( I am a bit young for all this but there you go, thank you

Chball29
06-03-2005, 04:55 PM
3/10 the lines comeing off the flames look kind of out of place and ya the stool would burn like he said but good idea took some thought.

Kyle.tk
06-03-2005, 06:36 PM
Yea, cool idea. Need a bit of work. Maybe add a burnt effect to the bottom of the stool, make the fire a lil neater and lil more realistic and then post it for us to see when u done :D

BeckyRox
06-03-2005, 08:29 PM
Ok Ive added on some burnt affect, I wouldnt say its good. I know what colour to use. :eusa_pray

Kannae
06-03-2005, 08:35 PM
Becky that is a pretty cool stool. Perhaps instead of fire you could have wings? why not have a go 7/10.

Infrontation
07-03-2005, 10:57 AM
I can See That You Probably Took Quite Alot Of Time Into This.. But You Need To Work On Shading And Line Neatness

G-flow
07-03-2005, 11:03 AM
Lol pretty cool!

jesus
07-03-2005, 11:23 AM
It would be very painful to sit on ;o

Scriptermone
07-03-2005, 05:46 PM
:( I am a bit young for all this but there you go, thank you

Young! :s im onlt 12 and I can make some good alts, I think... :rolleyes:

BeckyRox
07-03-2005, 07:16 PM
:eusa_danc Im younger than you
Ok heres my Angel one!
Im pleased with the shading on the wings, it is better that the fire one. I also like the halo!

Adzeh
07-03-2005, 08:05 PM
A very impractical alt and idea.

4/10 as there is no shading and the lines are bad.

Just add shade, better lines, and maybe a little animation on the flames if you can.

BeckyRox
07-03-2005, 08:10 PM
No shading!
Didn't you read my post?

Luggruff
07-03-2005, 10:55 PM
:eusa_danc Im younger than you
Ok heres my Angel one!
Im pleased with the shading on the wings, it is better that the fire one. I also like the halo!

Sorry, i can't agree with the shading.. there's shading everywhere something in a thing.. goes in. You only shaded the bottom, as i see there is more places that's not flat, mark it.

FAIRYS0FT
07-03-2005, 11:00 PM
Ok, I think these are pretty good! The colours on the fire one are nice and bright, very different! The angel one is funny! I LOVE the halo you did!

Like the others said if you are looking for perfection then practise with shading, but I maybe tend to sway more towards the idea then the actual alt, and I think the idea is crazy but hey that's what we like :D

8/10 - You have a lot of potential! definately!

jesus
08-03-2005, 09:56 AM
Rofl you seem to love stools.

micky.blue.eyes
08-03-2005, 04:31 PM
I love the angel one. I can see people flying around on the fire stool burning peoples hair. *thinking* *If I had one of those I would fly over Callie's head* *Oops sorry Callie it was an accident :eusa_ange :angel1: *
Muhahahaa

Anyway the shading needs to be better. 7.87/10 (That's a werid rating lol)

2hd.
08-03-2005, 04:39 PM
i quite liek both of them , you do easily show potential

RedStratocas
08-03-2005, 09:21 PM
No shading!
Didn't you read my post?
Lol. It isnt about what you said you did, its what you actually DID do. I dont see shading.

:-Mystical.Dave-
08-03-2005, 09:34 PM
I dunno what to rate it, it's an 'OK' alteration, but kinda simple..

Nielez
09-03-2005, 04:38 PM
Too simple -_-' Please post when u have better alts

Rocky
09-03-2005, 05:31 PM
lol its betta than i could do!

jstar953
09-03-2005, 09:02 PM
Lol :eusa_pray It made me laff!

Dave,
09-03-2005, 09:14 PM
I actually thought it was pretty funny....

Nice idea, you should have no problem in finding ideas for future alts.

Mit
09-03-2005, 09:43 PM
not a very good alt soorry, i dont lek it. fire doesnt go with wood unless the wood is meant to burn. 5/10

caz08
09-03-2005, 10:35 PM
The stool would burn :S

Neil
10-03-2005, 08:38 PM
I Think It's Pretty Cool, Not Every Day You See A Stool Catch Fire :)
9/10 For Some Reason Lol It's Cool For What I Would UsE It For *Thinks Of Evil Plans* ;)

---MAD---
12-03-2005, 03:14 PM
Um just be logic..if the fire was under stool which is made by wood it would burn? :) and um make it more habboish..more shading and fix the pixel errors.

Not bad as a picture.
But having it as an item on habbo or an item in real life is impossible, you would burn and die
I think you should make it a floating one, since wood floats?
What do you think?

Its very unique, i agree to that.

I rate it 6/10 as a picture
4/10 as an idea to put on habbo

Dave,
12-03-2005, 03:18 PM
You people are being a bit ignorant. Its meant to be a flying stool, the flames are from the engines, like a rockets. Don't try to be smart by saying "oh but the stool will burn"

Mined
12-03-2005, 03:23 PM
A good start but the lines and everthing need improving ;)

Cypher-
12-03-2005, 03:31 PM
The flames must of taken a lot of time but its just a regular stool pasted in. You should shade it in more for a habbo effect on the flames and like someone above said the wood would burn so make like a aluminum one or something :P

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