The Deli

[wewt]

A deli with an eat in bit. I think I'll make the furni into a set as it all is the same colour, I just need a name.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b2/Jucedude/delipublic.png

[VersionUpdate]

Wow , its nice :)
WD 10/10

[dirrty]

Nice, i really like it.
+REP

[VersionUpdate]

elites maybe?
lol

[Imp!]

didnt you just post that. and btw OMGZR class"!

[Hurts]

WOW! That's great, love it. + Rep.

[simon305]

Not usaly what i would go for i dont like very much it but i still rate it 10/10 lol dont ask me why:)

[Nielez]

It's ok, can't find errors

Improvements:
Increase shading on:
-Chairs
-2 seaters
-Little tables

Question:
On the big table, is the glass blue?, because the floor underneath is blue...?
Else you should use the same as on the normal floor but a little brighter,, a little more to white if you know what i mean...

Nice work

[Xero]

Not bad, don't think I'll go into too much detail with my criticism, as your probably new to this.

Firstly, get rid of the black lines, replace them with a darker colour than the midtone.

The bottom of the lamp is not an isometric circle, and the top of the lamp is shaded in a way which makes it seem mishapen, it needs to be shaded more like a cone/cylinder. The tables between the armchairs are also not isometric circles, they're close, but not quite.

You need more contrast between the different shades. 'Nuff said for that. The shapes are all very basic, squarish, although you have rounded off the chairs a bit, they still seem very square, look extraordinarily uncomfortable.

Your light sources are conflicting. The chairs, tables etc. main light source seems to be at the top, and the secondary source from the right, the walls, from the top, and then from the left, the plants (the actual plant part) from the right, and the lamp from the left. It's confusing.

Everythings seems pretty undetailed, I dunno, it just has a really plain feel to it, like the err.. blackboard? behind the counter shouldn't be blank, it should have stuff written on it, and the plants look like they're made of plastic.

The thing on the wall, with the green and the brown (it looks like a house?), if its a window, it should be bigger, and not protrude from the wall so much, if at all. If it's a picture/poster/painting, again it shouldn't protrude from the wall so much, and it should be bigger.

The glass on the table seems to tinted, right? So it alters the colour of the floor when it goes through? If so, it should also alter the colour of the table through the glass. I'd also suggest shading the reflection/shine on the tiles in a way that makes them continue that same reflection the whole way up.

Sorry, I guess maybe I went into a little too much detail, adress what you wish, but i'd suggest adressing it all =)

[Thrust]

I think you need to darken up the colours on the seats, however i like it alot. 8.7/10.

[Lucky]

i really like this one, the colours go well and its very hot.

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Turn the lamp on to bring a focus to the room, theres too much of the same colour.
Whys the table glass blue? ;o make it see-thro
Add more people dining etc.
Write a menu on the black board.
Put a little stool next to the cash machine and a woman collecting money.
Its really great. 9.4/10 +rep.

[Crimson]

It is very good! If you speant some more time shading and adding those special little details it might be able to reach the elites, its up to the Alteration moderators!

[Danzilla]

Nice... Long time since i last commented on somones work. ;P
I was trying to find some pixel errors but i couldent see any... But add some stuff like more people? Some one working there? And write on the black menu bord thing.
Ill give you a 9/10, As soon as you add a little more it will be a 10/10. :D

[Dubble]

OMG well done i love it 10/10 + rep

[scubadiva]

The seats are rather plain, try rounding them. Also, add some writing on the board. This piece has potential.

[Dotals]

This alt is extremely good, one thing I hate is the lack of colour, you could of added a more better done to the room, like so;

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/3681/deligr33nfy2.png

However I think the colours where used very well, and lol I added 2 random things on the tables, I got carried away. [:

9/10.

[v3nky]

nice i like the food at left hand side.. 10/10 good work dude!