View Full Version : [Alteration] Fisher
I made this ages ago, and expanded on it. Rate and C&C please.
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5248/fishingfa4.png (http://imageshack.us)
Minix
24-10-2006, 03:06 PM
Pretty good. I hate the colours you've used for the grass and water though
:(
Pretty funny what you did with the boot :)
The grass definately needs shading, pixel errors need fixing and colours need to be changed. :P
Also, what's up with the guys neck? :O I like his facial expression!
And, um, get rid of the random red speckles on the grass. :P
Machine Head
24-10-2006, 03:06 PM
I made this ages ago, and expanded on it. Rate and C&C please.
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5248/fishingfa4.png (http://imageshack.us)
It's great, but I find the background more better to look at, no offence or anything.
Maybe make it so that the Habbo is holding the rod with both hands?
7/10 =]]
They're supposed to be jungle-ey colours.
Minix
24-10-2006, 03:12 PM
They don't look like jungley colours though...
And the grass needs more depth. DEPTH!
artistjay
24-10-2006, 03:13 PM
They don't look like jungley colours though...
And the grass needs more depth. DEPTH!
yes i agree
They don't look like jungley colours though...
And the grass needs more depth. DEPTH!
Ye, I didn't know what to do for that...
Coolster :)
24-10-2006, 03:16 PM
It rocks +rep!
artistjay
24-10-2006, 03:16 PM
shading mate
Minix
24-10-2006, 03:17 PM
make the grass taller - for example, his feet could be sinking in grass! And the grass cant just be one colour, oh no. Look at the petal patch for inspiration :)
artistjay
24-10-2006, 03:18 PM
u should use petals actually
Machine Head
24-10-2006, 03:19 PM
shading mate
More shading would spoil it :rolleyes: Everythings perfect, just the slightest little change would make the whole alteration perfect.
Minix
24-10-2006, 03:20 PM
more shading would spoil it? What about shadows for the characters? depth for the grass? depth for the water? All would need shading, I'm afraid.
make the grass taller - for example, his feet could be sinking in grass! And the grass cant just be one colour, oh no. Look at the petal patch for inspiration :)
Maybe the natives have lawnmowers. :P
artistjay
24-10-2006, 03:20 PM
more shading would spoil it? What about shadows for the characters? depth for the grass? depth for the water? All would need shading, I'm afraid.
u tell him mate
Minix
24-10-2006, 03:22 PM
Maybe the natives have lawnmowers. :P
Mmm yes :)
You've inspired me to make a native lawnmower :P
Machine Head
24-10-2006, 03:23 PM
u tell him mate
Why don't you try to defend yourself for once? :rolleyes:
Maybe the natives have lawnmowers. :P
Roflmao!
more shading would spoil it? What about shadows for the characters? depth for the grass? depth for the water? All would need shading, I'm afraid.
Meh, true. I really should take a closer look at the alterations some of the decent people make :P
Joord
24-10-2006, 05:58 PM
Looks great! 8.3/10.
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