first alt (hotel) continued...

[Tiuhdur]

here it is again lol but now ive added some colour to it can anyone point out my errors and tell me where i need shading please before i continue further:D :http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6784/hotelondg7.png (http://imageshack.us/?x=my6&myref=http://load.imageshack.us/)

[ark alost]

there is a minor error is that the background is too large for it lol:D

[Tink]

If It Helps You Can Make It Bigger To See ;]

[Tiuhdur]

thanks lol i was hopin for it to be part of a town thats y background is so big lol

[Black_Apalachi]

Could just post it without the huge background until you add to it.

8/10 though.

[Tiuhdur]

kk thanks

[g]

Urm i wanna see a W.I.P (Work in progress)

[Tiuhdur]

there was lol this is the continued one the w.i.p had no colour

[Darrem]

looks good so far it would be better if you make it into a town :)

[Joord]

I think that should be the reception part, and the do a larger building joint onto it, which is the hotel.

[Tiuhdur]

kk thanks for all comments