Habbox Alteration Labs! (Simon305)

[simon305]

This peace of work took me quite alot of hours it made me get alot of infractions geting people to post their charicters but now i have to say its done :) and im soo glad :)
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/985/newwork5wi4.png (http://imageshack.us)

Rate C+C

Thank you everyone

[Cheep]

For the first time in my life i'm impressed with your alteration, the only thing i don't like is the security cameras.

[simon305]

ahh yeh they are one of my first alts i should not of added them :(

[brandon]

like Cheep, one of your rare decent alts.

But the guy in the santa hats face looks deformed.

[Ellis.]

Me likey :) The stairs are nicely done.

[brandon]

Also, why does the guy in the santa hat have no shadow but the rest of them do, and whats the guy with the shaved hair in the blue area bit got in his mouth?

[simon305]

oh no the shadow :O

the guys ehad is looking upwards.

The guy has that leeking pilpe stuff round his mouth.

Can you rate it.

http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/448/newworkdoneao9.png (http://imageshack.us)

[J.J.V]

whats the guy with the shaved hair in the blue area bit got in his mouth?


The guy has that leeking pilpe stuff round his mouth.

He meant the guy at the bottom behind the glass it looks like he has some kind of bone in his mouth :S :S Could you tell us what it actually is?

And also I very much like your alt :P I'd rate 10/10, you could still improve by adding more, but I am impressed.

[Tristan]

I think he's a shark or something.
Probably being 'tested on in the lab'. :P

It's rather good!

[Jerremy]

there is no style in the room.
its just grey.
i don't like black lines either.
6/10.

[simon305]

I think he's a shark or something.
Probably being 'tested on in the lab'. :P

It's rather good!

yeh i made that tounge bone as a weird thing to work out on it cos its a monster thing

[scubadiva]

http://www.uploadz.co.uk/682118hxbalterationlab.png
There's me!!!! :P Why did you get in trouble for asking people to post their characters, they're not posting pictures of themselves, just what they look like on Habbo

[simon305]

will people start rateing it

[PaintYourTarget]

will people start rateing it
What's wrong with comments and criticism. Would you rather just think it's perfect through a few measly numbers?

Have you got a few WIPs of those blue posters? They look awfully familiar.

The broken pipe looks flat on the right, perhaps make it look rounded?

Your light sources are inconsistance. The faces on the table on the right hand corner of the top floor are opposite colours to the rest of the piece.

[velvet]

Wow, that's pretty good. 8/10,

[Jerremy]

What's wrong with comments and criticism. Would you rather just think it's perfect through a few measly numbers?

Have you got a few WIPs of those blue posters? They look awfully familiar.

The broken pipe looks flat on the right, perhaps make it look rounded?

Your light sources are inconsistance. The faces on the table on the right hand corner of the top floor are opposite colours to the rest of the piece.lol, he won't care about anything you just posted, he thinks he OMGZ ELITE at alts.

[PaintYourTarget]

lol, he won't care about anything you just posted, he thinks he OMGZ ELITE at alts.
Yeah, I love winding up people like that.
They have a bad attitude, I give them one back =]

[PigsNose]

I love! I am the bunny eared person, woo!
All I don't like is.. uhmm.. I don't know. I love it all :D
9.5/10
WOOO

[Albion]

thats good, only bad point is you forgot me :)

[-Justin]

ZOMG! I lurb it +REP!

Im drawing a little girl xD me and my little pink hair :P though i suck at alts.

[PigsNose]

I bet someone like Alterasion AKA/or Jay will come a long and say 'That's crap!'
Oh well. I have given you a rep. The thing I love at the moment is the guy holding the glass container and it is smoking and he has a black face.
Funny :)

[RedFlagWaving]

I bet someone like Alterasion AKA/or Jay will come a long and say 'That's crap!'
Oh well. I have given you a rep. The thing I love at the moment is the guy holding the glass container and it is smoking and he has a black face.
Funny :)

thats me lol XD
w00t i love its awesome 9/10
some parts are a bit strange ;)

[Zmack]

Lol, thats funny. :P 8/10 +rep. :D Just 2 questions, the girl thats up on rocket shoes and the santa hat below her, is his head supposed to be like that? And also: The guy at the bottom really right where the map is, is he like evil or something?

[simon305]

the funny head guy is lookin up her skirt lol :O

[RedFlagWaving]

XD thats funny

[Jerremy]

tbh i think its crap.

micky.blue.eyes (forum mod): If you think an alt is bad, please post constructive critisism.
1. If you are not going to give constructive critisism, don't post at all - Do not reply to alteration posts with things like: bad. If you think somebody's alt is bad then tell them how to improve it and actually help.

[Xj4yalterasions]

tbh i think its crap.

agreed

[Machine Head]

agreed

We don't care tbh, everything you say is a bunch of poop =]]

10/10, fantastic alt =]]

EDIT: You might want to watermark that, otherwise Jay will rip it when nobodies posted in thos thread for a while ;]]

[-Digifix]

i like the rocketgirl! wel done

9/10

[Adam$]

I quite like. It has quite a few good points, but also a few bad points.

- Your flooring effect is good, and consistent.
- Your glass effect has been executed well.
- The majority of the characters in the alt are done well.
- The blueprints have turned out well.

However,
- I don't like the security cameras, they look too simple compared to the rest of the alt and the light source is in a different location on them.
- The girl hanging off the edge doesn't quite look right, don't know why.
- The light source is wrong in some areas.

And although I do like the stairs, I don't think they look right as they blend in too well with the floor beneath.

a few more in both categories, cba to list.

[simon305]

I bet someone like Alterasion AKA/or Jay will come a long and say 'That's crap!'
Oh well. I have given you a rep. The thing I love at the moment is the guy holding the glass container and it is smoking and he has a black face.
Funny :)

your never wrong





tbh i think its crap.

micky.blue.eyes (forum mod): If you think an alt is bad, please post constructive critisism.
1. If you are not going to give constructive critisism, don't post at all - Do not reply to alteration posts with things like: bad. If you think somebody's alt is bad then tell them how to improve it and actually help.




tbh i think its crap.

agreed

[PigsNose]

agreed

I told you he would come along and say its crap :)
Well he can't see because he thinks his alts are amazing. A bit rich coming from you Jay.

And is he really looking up the rocket girls skirt because thats me :(

[ProAlts]

agreed

yeh i agree aswell

he should put effort in his work :S

any y save as .png :s save as .jpg next time

2.5/10

[myke]

I don't like the santa guy he looks o_O.

The cameras look weird aswell

6/10

[PigsNose]

yeh i agree aswell

he should put effort in his work :S

any y save as .png :s save as .jpg next time

2.5/10

That is also rich coming from you Jay.
I say that you are copying someone that said that to your own work 'cos it is totally true. You are lazy.
Okay on topic: I have changed my mind, I like the person firing a gun or something now :)

[ltwistedburn]

alterasion y in ur sig ur dudes a re wearing white tops but its saying its green and black

on topic: its good i love it 9/10

santa dude messed up lol

[Darrem]

Best alt ive seen from you.
Nice one 8/10

[Kaytti]

How can u dis this guy? Its not about the colors he picked [a lil bit] but its his talent to alterate. I think hes done a good job. There is mistake but there a hell of a lot of good innit. Great work 9/10 + rep

[Mario]

This is by FAR your best alt.
there are quite a few little errors though, first of all is the guy in the santa hat, his face is terribly distorted and he has no shadow, secondly the girl falling from the edge should have here arms straight up because if you imagine your were holding on you'd have your arms above your head straight. the mug the man is holding to the left needs shading, the shark man thing needs to be more distinct to be able to tell.
try making them small by using the lido WHILE there swiming that'd be an inprovement in my eyes. the man whose face has got ash or whatever on his face needs some on this hair and clothes and the ash itself needs texture(s)?!?! one last point. the doors need to either come out a little bit or go in a little bit.
dont worry about the amount of errors there are. theres no point rushing if perfection, or in this case elites is the goal.
7/10 so far. read my critism and learn from it.

[Sentrax]

Good alt, very impressive, I'd like to see more large scale ones from you!
9/10
+rep

[Yeum]

Gotta be your best yet ! Well done +REP

[RedFlagWaving]

god dangit... stop bumping old threads!

[exterier]

BRILL ALT! 8.5/10
Thanks for putting me in..
im the one with the mocha btw!
+ Rep :eusa_clap

[Art]

rofl at blown up guy, drink on guys mouth and guy looking up :D

well done!

EDIT: Someone ripped something from your alt...

http://habboxforum.com/showthread.php?p=2557165#post2557165

[Sam]

Heh, read my full post next time

<3

[IcerMan]

Wow, that is sweet.
The only thing that looks bad is the rocket shoes. 9/10.

[chubbzilla]

nice one i was thinking about doing something like that but anyway well done thats brilliant

[simon305]

Im leaveing habboxforum now so no more worik from me(third from last post)

[Nether$]

nice alt, but i hate it when people make the alts too big, they should fit on the habbo client. anyway nice alt, 9/10

[Hopeless]

Elites. 9/10


the person looking up doesn't look right