House

[wewt]

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This is something I have been working on. I used windows from some old alterations of mine and added some new ones. The road barrier was made by Habbo not me. I hope you like it. I made some custom Habbos and furni for it. c+c please. It's like a country house for a rich person, hence the guards..

[Starburst..x]

wow! That is really good so far!
9/10! +rep
What did you use to make it?

[wewt]

Microsoft Paint.

[ColyTom]

Wow, I love it. Well done :P

[PigsNose]

Wondeful.
10/10 +REP.

[scubadiva]

First off, I'd just like to say that I love the alt, which is why I have bothered to go into such detail. Don't think I'm having a go, I'm just trying to lend a hand to improve, and give my opinion. There are several things which I'd like to comment on, so I edited the pic to make it a bit easier for you to see what I'm saying.
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1. The rooftop is fairly plain. I love the pavement flooring effect, but maybe try making a rooftop garden?. Also, the benches look just a tad too big for Habbo, and the decor on them is fairly plain.
2. Nothing major, but the lead isn't really plugging into anything. Perhaps try making a socket?
3. I love the way you have made the image pailer for the windows, but there are errors on around the cup where it hasn't been recoloured properly.
4. Short and sweet - Give the woman a slightly longer neck, she looks kinda odd.
5. The wall is a bit plain for my liking, try adding another window, with maybe like a wooden staircase with a Habbo walking up it, or just another scene like in the other windows.
6. Kinda weird bend on the elbow - Try making it less right-angled. Also, there is no handle or door****.
7. The bonnet of the car is raised up too much in my opinion, and not long enough. Try making it longer and flatter.
8. The inside of the car looks a bit odd. I'm not really sure how you could improve it, try experimenting.
9. Randomly standing Habbo, maybe he could be doing something?

Again, please remember that I'm not having a go at the alt, I love it, and I'd love to see it improve. These are just my suggestions, and I hope you take them into consideration when/if improving the alt (as this took me about 15 minutes to type out :P). +Rep for the obvious hard work you have put into this alt.

[wewt]

Thanks! I really like constructive critism. I'll work on what you've indicated.

[scubadiva]

If you need a hand, I'm just a PM away :)

[Homosexual]

Nice work! 9/10, do what scuba said :) + Rep!

[wewt]

If you need a hand, I'm just a PM away :)
Ok will do.

[Ekalb]

Hmm, I only really agree with points 3, 4, 7 and 8 by scubadiva.
Add a door**** of some kind and make the cord smoother.
I have no idea how the habbo got to the roof as the gap under the roofing doesn't look big enough for a habbo to fit through. Move the fridge back a bit, it looks very randomly placed, I'm not sure if I've seen many fridges so far away from a wall in the lounge room of a house. When your black/trasnparent blue lines are used a lot like in the far right window It looks strange, try replaicng them with a darker blue. Hmm...