2nd alt part 2

[hit-by-a-car]

Its the doubled bed i made but in a room =) plz rate (my seccond alt)
just a retouch:
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/3236/hithurtiy9.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Dazzle]

Looks good for your second alt, but the bed is a little jaggered. You could get a pic of the bed in the catalog without other furni in the way and not needing to rub out the room.

[Acidulantes]

You should make sure its lined up prefectly before you let go of the selection... and maybe move it forward one sqaure so the z-shelf thing on the back doesnt look squashed up the wall...

[hit-by-a-car]

your right

[PigsNose]

I circled the thinks I don't understand or you need to improve on :)

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d146/---Kirstie---/grggfdf.jpg
1. I don't really understand what this is and it is a confusing shading, re-shade it.
2. Very bad cut and paste work, zoom in closer to make it finer and make it look better.
3. I am quite confused about the two pillars, there is a black line around some bits but you seem to give up. Oh and there is shading in the wrong place. I hope this helped :)

[hit-by-a-car]

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d146/---Kirstie---/grggfdf.jpg 3 and 1 has a few minor errors but its just the bottom of 2

[Verrou]

Well it's not that great :S But if it's your first i suppose...
2/10 cuz u tried!
I don't get wat the big grey triangle thing is behind the bed!

Ver.

[hit-by-a-car]

Well it's not that great :S But if it's your first i suppose...
9/10 cuz u tried!
I don't get wat the big grey triangle thing is behind the bed!

Ver.

a supporter god man u blind i said it aswell :eusa_clap

[Black_Parade]

Why edit his qoutes? And it is better but i dont know what the thing behind it is either and i aggree you should touch up the bottom and the support poles look weird

[PigsNose]

I can't believe you edited to make 9/10. How sad.
For God's sake, I tried to help you, but you aren't answering. What is the triangle at the side.
I think it is 2/10.

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