2nd alt - Mode bunk bed :)

[Papershop]

Seen it on the forum, and wanted to try and make it myself. Rate and cc please..

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/7914/modexn7.png

[Casanova]

I don't like it, as most bunk bed's are single beds.

6/10 for the attempt!
also, it's unoriginal but still i guess it's better than the other guy's!

[Papershop]

Thanks Anyways, It was only my second alt. i want to improve my skills first before i come up with something original

[Goofy]

i would be affraid to crawl up that thin metal latter? :P.. it's probably razor sharp xD

and i would'nt feel safe at the bottom bed, because of the thing that is holding the second one up, is so thin? :P

7/10 anyways ;)

[Black_Parade]

Good alt but the ladder looks thin .




8/10 + rep for the attempt

[hit-by-a-car]

BLEEDING COPY CAT

micky.blue.eyes (forum mod): Please stay on topic. Give some C&C and/or rate the alt.

[PigsNose]

He was just trying to do it for himself. Hit-by-a-car - try and see what he has improved on etc.
On topic: It's okay, but needs better shading and the ladder isn't touching the floor. Well done for your second alt 7/10

[Papershop]

Thanks guys, oops yea, didnt realise how thin it was, here an updated version...

http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/8547/modeyt2.png

[hit-by-a-car]

mate, just put staples in ur legs and make sure there dead befoure they climbe up that thing! 5/10 nice try v nice.:)

[micky.blue.eyes]

Thanks guys, oops yea, didnt realise how thin it was, here an updated version...

http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/8547/modeyt2.png

Not bad, looks much better now.
I think you should make the piece of metal supporting the top bed at the head part of the bed, so habbos have more space to get in bed. :)
The shading is a bit odd, but I'll blame Sulake for that. :P
7/10

[J.J.V]

I like the look of it, especially for just your 2nd alt. The very first step is bigger than the other two steps though. Maybe you could add a barrier around the top bunk so that stupid Habbo's don't roll of the bed and break their necks :P

[Papershop]

yes ino. Because if i made the first step smaller, the black line of the step would meet the black line of the bottom line and create a double black line, and i didnt no what to do, so i just made that one bigger. Yea maybe i shud create a barrier, but i dnt think am that far advanced to do something like that. Maybe in the neer future tho. And as for getting into bed, then he will just have to wiggle through the obttom rofl :)

[Sentrax]

Agreed, micky.
I think the shading could do with a touch up in parts, and also, it doesn't look like a very safe bunk bed! I'm sure barriers on the top bunk to stop the habbo falling off!
But still, considering the unoriginality, I actually think you did a pretty good job. You're definetely an upcoming alteration artist on this forum!
8/10
+rep

[Ashhizzle]

Thanks guys, oops yea, didnt realise how thin it was, here an updated version...

http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/8547/modeyt2.png

Thats hot! -wants one- i'm glad to see you thickened the supports :P Not much room to get into the bed though?

[Papershop]

Only for skinny children, otherwise you might get stuck. rofl. Theres a health and safety thing included in the box when assembling, so dont worry :D

[Sir-Cameron]

Only if your Obese