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chubbzilla
07-11-2006, 08:18 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e252/chubbzilla/habbei1.pngwhat do you think I havnt done much but c+c plz and marks out of 10

Minix
07-11-2006, 08:25 PM
Errr... His hair's horrid, and the habbo in general is awful. BUT, I do like the canvas, but only the effect you did with the paper, and only before you... ahem... resized it. :S

Otherwise, it's okay. But don't use default paint colours, shade, and work on woodgrain...

Caution
07-11-2006, 08:29 PM
The canvas and the er.. thing behind it is good.
The hair needs improved though.
Good - 8/10:P

Dazzle
07-11-2006, 08:45 PM
Liam, I think you mean the eisle. :) I think it's ok, maybe you could practice shading like on the wood needs redoing and the hair. But it's a good attempt. 7/10 :] Oh and the draw has no thickness and is coming from nowhere.

chubbzilla
07-11-2006, 08:59 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e252/chubbzilla/habbei2.png changed it a bit and its not hair its a berret i no its not that gd lol

PigsNose
07-11-2006, 09:50 PM
I have numbered the things I am not pleased with.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d146/---Kirstie---/hggfbfdb.jpg
1. It looks a bit fuzzy, I am not sure why, maybe you should make the lines a little shorter so it doesn't look fuzzy ;).
2. I can't put my finger on what is wrong with this hat. Maybe needs a bit more shading. I think it is the bobble though.
3. I think you shouldn't use the colours out of paint (default colours) for the pallet thing. I think you should mix them a bit. More shading aswell.
4. The paint brush is the same colour as the table and you still need to work on the table.
I like the canvas though :) Very good :)
8/10
P.s PLEASE don't do default colours as I said above. It makes it look worse. Change the colours of the bobble - please. I tried to change the default colours etc.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d146/---Kirstie---/bobblehat.jpg

Scitzophrenic
08-11-2006, 04:05 AM
I think thats an exavior Rip.



Catzsy (Forum Super Moderator) - Please do not accuse members of stealing without proof.

chubbzilla
08-11-2006, 04:06 PM
its not a rip i made it myself, and its a bit blury because i resized it and thnx for changing the colors pigsnose

micky.blue.eyes
08-11-2006, 05:44 PM
I don't like it, you resized the eisle, which makes it look bad.
The other stuff is good though, try remaking the eisle.
7/10

Caution
08-11-2006, 07:01 PM
Oh..
Lmao. I just realised thats not hair:P

Untouchable
08-11-2006, 09:18 PM
Looks ok

Hate the hair. Use a darker shade of blue or a paler/subtler shade.

The green is also too bright.

Try to stay away from default paint colours.

MusicPalace
08-11-2006, 09:48 PM
pretty nice. 7/10

simon305
09-11-2006, 03:56 AM
i have seen that canvas before.... on google, can anyone give me some links

Scitzophrenic
09-11-2006, 06:51 AM
*COughs* EXAVIOR RIP *COUGHS*

Edited by -legoman- (Super Moderator) Please do not accuse people of ripping.

chubbzilla
09-11-2006, 08:45 AM
*coughs* made it myself the other day you just cant face it *coughs* I did post it with just the eisel and thats in habbo furni alterations forum check it if you want.

Ekalb
09-11-2006, 09:19 AM
*COughs* EXAVIOR RIP *COUGHS*

It would appear you don't have any proof so before trying to dump on him give a bit of proof. He did post a WIP product very recently and if you are calling it an exavior rip just because of the habbo that is similarly dressed to Exavior that features in the alteration then you should know this. There are hundreds of thousands maybe a few million habbos and they all can't have individual looks so there are bound to be people that are dressed the same.

Proove it and I shall forgive

chubbzilla
09-11-2006, 09:57 AM
well actually habbo isnt loading for me at the moment so i took the habbo from one of exaviors alts but he hadnt changed the habbo at all but i have i just used the habbo as a template this is the one i postedhttp://habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=257951

Black_Apalachi
09-11-2006, 05:49 PM
Good attempt but here are a few points:

Firstly, the canvas (as has been said) has been resized and so needs more pixel work.

Secondly, berrets don't have bobbles. :eusa_wall That looks more like a scottish bag-piper's hat. Lol. Anyway, berrets have a pointy kind of thing (think of the stalk of an apple) Pmsl.

A major detail is the fact that the artist is holding his pallete down by his side. All the paint would just drip off. If you are unsure how to make it look more like he is holding up, maybe you could take a screenie of your habbo holding a drink on Habbo and then add the pallete. :rolleyes:

Other details you could add are some sploshes on the canvas and on the artist's clothes.

Scitzophrenic
10-11-2006, 12:23 AM
well actually habbo isnt loading for me at the moment so i took the habbo from one of exaviors alts but he hadnt changed the habbo at all but i have i just used the habbo as a template this is the one i postedhttp://habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=257951



Oi, the Canvas is good, but then you look at the Hair, and the Painbrush. And its like.... RIP. So stfu all you people. :D

micky.blue.eyes (forum mod): Please don't accuse people of ripping and don't be rude towards other members.

chubbzilla
20-11-2006, 08:34 PM
its not a rip and its not hair , i have never ripped b4 but if i did i would at least rip something good

-leestrong-
21-11-2006, 07:24 AM
6/10 The board looks a bit blurry.

chubbzilla
21-11-2006, 09:07 PM
i am going to try again and then post it some time i dont know when itll be because im busy

PigsNose
21-11-2006, 09:16 PM
Fgs proove if it is ripped. I don't think it is.
Very good though, glad you are making another one :)

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