Kitchen v2.0

[Acidulantes]

Some of you may have seen my first attempt at a kitchen, well heres my 2nd :)

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/1329/kitchencz6.png

[-Justin]

Lub It +Rep.

[Acidulantes]

Thanks alienware :) anything I could do to make it better?

[Sir-Cameron]

WOW
10/10
but
try to get rid of some of the black lines, especially on the high up cupboard [SP?] directly facing you.

[Acidulantes]

Theyve got to be somewhere... theyre showing the edge of the door... and they dont look as right anywhere else... thx for the rating :)

[-Justin]

I dont honestly think it could be better.... Im so suprised none of your alts have become elite. :'[

[risque]

It's good but the shadings too average to become elite.

[Axel]

Very nice! But I think the floor is a bit too bright. Other than that, I think it's perfect, so 10/10.

[PaintYourTarget]

On the top cuboards next to the cooker, you could really do with using a highlight instead of a black line.
Maybe also use a darker shade, instead of black, for the outside of the doors too.

[Reinout--D]

I thik that the microwave is a bit to big.
And,

The pan would eb better if you'd made it more round.
The top and bottom of the pan a little more rounder, not that flat.

But I realy like the rest.

It'r really lovely!
I'll try to give you some rep. stuff too.

[DJ-Ali]

I love it! Everything is fantastic besides the colours. But that's my opinion. But overall, it's a fantastic alt. 9/10 & +Rep

[micky.blue.eyes]

I like it, but you should move the microwave, it's hard to press the buttons right now.
You could aslo add some cups and perhaps some dishes and a table. :)
9/10 + rep

[PaulMacC]

Elites Pls. +Rep 100/10

[Acidulantes]

Ive made the microwave smaller, moved it to the end, and re-done the cooker... I was thinking of putting a table in there... so yea, next update should be done soon...

[Untouchable]

I love it.

Maybe for the cupboard directly facing make it a shade in between the two shades?

Not sure if it's right or how it will work out.

Juct suggesting :)

[MusicPalace]

wow thats bright, but really good! 8/10.

[Goofy]

The floor and wallpaper is a bit annoying? xP... The rest is awesome, so 9/10 +rep :)

[Catzsy]

Very good :D 9/10

[Last-Resort...]

That is amazing 10/10 without a doubt. Can you give me any tips on how to be a good alterationist?

[Black_Apalachi]

Lookin' good, lookin' good. :D

I think that's fantastic. There are just a few things in my head... firstly, the cupboard over the microwave in the corner (facing us directly), well its outline at the top doesn't match the other cupboards. You need to lower the black outline and add the shiny part that is above all the others.

Another thing is the saucepan. It looks odd because it doesn't match the isometrics (sp?) of everything else in the room. Finally, I recognise the sink, maybe from an earlier alt of yours? Well anyway, I don't think it suits the room simply because of its colour. I assume it is metal as most sinks are, but it looks like a dull metal (no shine) whereas other metal objects like the cupboard handles are shiny.

All in all, it is a very good piece of work and I do like how the wall and floor matches and looks very nice. Also, someone said that the buttons on the microwave are too far in, well my microwave is sort of in that position in my kitchen. :p

Good job, 9/10 + Rep. ;)

Edit: I spotted two more minor things: both hobs on the cooker are on with only one pan and also, the shaddow of the Habbo standing in the room has edges (needs to be more circular).

[mr.parasols]

It quite good, it has potential.

Main points:

Try making things irregular, age some objects perhaps?
Add shadow under the cabinets.

[Acidulantes]

Thanks guys, all points taken, and the sink, is modelled after the sink in my house and its supposed to be graphite, but yea Ill make it metal looking if it'll get the ratings up :), ILl add shadows under the cupboards, and Ill get a proper shadow for my habbo... Im trying to make a coffee machine, or a blender to go on the side too...

[Papershop]

Try using a lighter brown on the top of the cupboard, to show where there sepearted. cos it looks like one big cupboard

and maybe put one of the border things around the tops of the cupboards?
only an idea - 9/10 very nice

ps. the corner cupboard looks abit wierd

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/8749/kitchen2ue5.png
Ive mended it abit for you..
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6165/kitchenop6.png

papershop xx

[.Lynn]

Some of you may have seen my first attempt at a kitchen, well heres my 2nd :)

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/1329/kitchencz6.png

*I don't get why 2 of the black lines..on top of the cupboards are black? I think they should be the light colour so it doesnt look weird and stand out.

*I think the backsplash should be difference so the floor and the blacksplash has a contrast.

*Light source on the cupboard facing forward isn't right. It shout be dark, medium, light.

*The microwave seems overpowering, meaning too big. And the pot is too overshaded.

*And finally, add some style to the room. Try putting a mom or just a person cooking over the cooktop. And try putting a tile pattern on the floor.

[Acidulantes]

Ive sorted out the cupboard facing this way, with the black line, and made it a medium shade... Im not gonna change the tiles on the floor or the walls, or put anyone else in it... Ive moved and made the microwave smaller, and re-done the cooker completely with no pot... Im trying to make a food mixer or something to go on the side, and then Ill post it...

[Danny,]

The front cupboard ruins it a bit but its still amazing 9.5/10
Maybe instead of the cupboards facing you they could follow the other cupboards and meet at an angle
like the bottom set of cupboards under microwave

[boyslikegirls]

to many black lines, only use black lines on the borders of things, and a highlight/darker version on the edges.